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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: meerubzara

awosome update like abhiya meeting😆

eagerly w8ng for next part
continu soon & plz pm me


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Originally posted by: meerubzara

plz pm me when u update


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DEDICATED TO ANNIE . 😊

Chapter 3 : BACK TO MOUNT COLLEGE😊

INSIDE DOBRIYAL HOUSE
PIA (angrily ) -😡 Panchi!

Panchi - 😕Kya hua piyu tum itni pareeshan kyun ho?

Pia-😡 Panchi tell these people that the party is over.

Panchi -😕 but...

Pia- 😡no buts... and she leaves from there.

Panchi - Sorry guys the party is over . Thank u all for coming .

Pia's room

Pia- shit , I should not have shouted at panchi like that. She did so much for me and I ... 😡Oh God , it's all because of that jerk! I hope i never see him again.

Abhay's room

Abhay - 😡why r girls so irritating? Some just throw themselves on me and some ... Oh god , I wish i never see that Ms. attitude again.

BUT DESTINY HAD OTHER PLANS...

Next morning - Pia's room

Madhu - pia beta utho.

Pia- G'morning mom!

Madhu- G' morning beta , chalo ab jaldi karo aaj college jana hain. Panchi bhi tumhare saath aayegi.

Pia- really di too ?

Madhu - haan wo ab uss college ki drama club teacher he.

Pia- that's great . ok i will go and get ready and she leaves.

Abhay's room

Kabir - 😛abe abhay uth . College jana hain . Dude it's a new semester .

Abhay - 😡sone de na!

Kabir - 😡tu uth ja warna me ... AND HE BRINGS A JUG FULL OF COLD WATER AND POURS IT ON ABHAY'S FACE.😆

Abhay wakes up with a start and shouts -😡 DUDE! WAT WAS THIS YAAR ? YOU SCARED THE HELL OUT OF ME.

ABHAY IS JUST WIPING HIS FACE while Kabir starts laughing loudly - 😆Dude tera chehra herne layak tha.

Abhay - 😡Kya kabir esa kaun karta hain.

Kabir - ummm.. "KABIR THE GREAT" karta hain . ab jaldi kar.⭐️

Abhay (pouting) - Ok fine!
Dobriyal house

Pia comes downstairs and says - Let's go panch..

Madhu - Pia beta naashta toh karlo .

Pia- No mom , we're getting late . I will have something in the canteen.Bye!

Madhu - Ok bye !

Pia and Panchi go from there and sit in the car.
In the car...

Pia- I'm sorry panch..

Panchi - sorry? kiske liye?

Pia- woh kal raat ke liye ...

Panchi - 😉Oh come on piyu i can understand. waise ur looking damn'sexy. Kisko marne ka irada hain.😆

Pia - Panch... and they both laugh.

Raichand house :

Kabir - Abhay ... Mish jaldi karo.

Abhay (teasingly) -😉 Kabeera tujhe college jane ki itni jaldi kyun he ? bolo bolo.

Kabir (imitiating) -⭐️ Kyunki mujhe ek nayi girlfriend milgayi hain.

Abhay (showing fake anger) - 😲Hunn ... tune mujhe itni badi baat nahi batayi?
Hai , dost dost na raha ,(now acts like crying) bhai bhai na raha.😆

Misha laughs while kabir says - Chal chal devdas.

Abhay - 😆nahi nahi devdas nahi abhaydas!

And they laugh and leave.

Mount college

Raichand's car arrives and all girls start gossiping.

Abhay , Kabir and Misha get out and all girls start drooling.😃

Misha - 😡ye ladkiyan ese kyun dekh rahi he.

Abhay - 😉Mishu , u jealous?

Misha -😡 oye me tum logon ki tara nahi hu . get it straight in ur mind.

Meanwhile another car stops and all turn around.Panchi and Pia get down from there . Now its the boys turn to drool and all girls to get jealous.😆

Pia feels awkard while panchi smiles and says - 😉oho , looks like some one has got admirers.

Pia -😕 Panchi me yaha to ese hi toh itni ajeeb feel kar rahi hoon aur tum..

Panchi - kya karun hai kuch kuch hota hain..😆

Misha sees them and comes towards Pia - 😊Pia sorry for last night . So, friends? and extends her hands.

Pia (shaking her hand) - 😃Friends!

Kabir also runs and comes towards pia and they both shake hands.

Meanwhile Abhay who is just awestruck by pia's beauty is having confused emotions seeing Kabir and Piya together.😳😕

Kabir - ⭐️Pia , That's my brother , Abhay.

Abhay comes out of trance and Pia gets angry and shouts - 😡Tum !

Pia - 😡wat the hell r u doing here?

Abhay - If i am here is there any problem ?

Pia-😡 tum jaha ho wahi problem he .Panch let's go , i am not standing even one minute with this loser!

Kabir , Misha and Panchi are just confused seeing pia and abhay.😕

Abhay - haan plz go waise new students ke prior information ke liye Principal's office ...

Pia ( interrupting) - 😡no , thank u Mr. and she walks off.

Abhay (shouting) -⭐️ waise my name is abhay.

Pia (shouting ) - 😡As if I care!

Panchi - 😕wait pia hume principal ke office jana hain and she also leaves.

Meanwhile ,kabir and misha are shocked and they ask - 😲Dude wat was that ?

Abhay laughs 😆seeing there faces so he tells them the whole situation that happened yesterday .

Kabir and Misha both laugh . 👏😆

Misha - 😆seriously dude !

Kabir -👏 Ooo ! My bhai's got a new girlfriend jo meri dost he . Hai , dost dost na raha , bhai bhai na raha.😆

Abhay - 😡abe tu sach me dialogue chor hi rahega. and he leaves from there.

PRECAP : T KO LAGA ZOR KA JHATKA..😆

DO LIKE AND COMMENT.😊


Edited by 45Pinky - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
CHAPTER 3 UPDATED ! HOPE U ALL LIKED IT .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Beautiful update.
Piya n Abhay! Oh God,they r at loggerheads right now!
Loved Abhay kabir convo.
Precap seems interesting.
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
wow its was cutie cutie update! luved it! thax fr pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow sweety i luv dis abhaydas... and abhiya fighting maste hai yaar...

par t ko jhatka wo kase yaar kya kahi dehradun ke sare saloon bande hone wale hai kya... whatever par t ka rexn dekhne layak hoga...



dost dost na raha...bahi bahi na raha...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
cute update loved it..continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
wow great story plz update soon
it's an awesome story to read
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
First of all very color-full your ff i mean the colors you use very nice 😛
second just amazing dialogue with using emotion 😆
thirdly you done a good job 👍🏼
fourthly please add my name in your pm list 😉
Thanks for mind bowling story 😛

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