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Abhiya will start falling in love with each other but many fun and twists r upcoming in this story .😆
I will update by sunday , i guess if i get time.
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Hi guys! I know I'm late in updating this ff. Please forgive me !And yes , I'm truly sorry once again as in this chapter T ko zor ka jhatka lag ne wala tha but I removed it as I thought it was unnecessary !

Chapter 4 : The half truth

Corridor –

Pia was highly irritated. Panchi knew her sister gets pissed off easily but it was the 1st time after Pia returned she noticed a change in her behaviour . Getting irritated or angry was everyone's trait but getting so irritated that also with a fun loving and teasing Abhay was something which was not right . In the whole party also she noticed that Pia avoided boys and even spiked their drinks when they just tried to ask her a dance or flirt with her . She was not like this . Panchi knew something was wrong ! Something was definetly wrong ! So she decided to ask :

Panchi – Uhh .. Piyu ?

Pia – haan di ?

Panchi – How did you … I mean … Did you like this college?

Pia – Not that much ! You know I'm missing london a lot . I want to be with my friends especially Alina . You know she has had a hard time right ?

Panchi – Ya , I understand Pia . But I promise you'll love it here and maybe you'll fall in love with someone here !

Pia (in mind) – I can never love anything or anyone di . After what happened with Alina especially Amily , my faith over love and devotion has just vanished into thin air . I just wished I had that one year back ! I could fix so many things that happened .

Panchi – Hey where are you lost ?

Pia – Uhh … nothing !

Panchi's phone beeps !

Panchi – Hello?

Another side – Hello pumpkin !

Panchi – Sid ! Stop giving me new names ! And what's with this pumpkin ?

Sid – Sorry bunny! I called you because there's an imp. Meeting so we need you! Please come!😆😉

Panchi – Ok, I'm coming !

Sid – Ok bye my honey bunny!

Panchi – Arghhh…. and she cuts the phone.

Pia knew all about Sid's love for Panchi . She knew that panchi also loved him but she needed to realize it. Infact Pia had been helping Sid to impress Panchi ! Sid was head over heels in love with Panchi but then a sudden realization struck her - Pia , you believed na that love was phony ! Then ? No way , Sid's love was not like that . He would never deceive Panchi di . She knew him since a long time he would never do like that . But then her mind said – The person whom you knew for over a year , whom you trusted blindly deceived your best friends and even tried to manhandle you . Because of your blind trust your one friend cum sister died before you could even reach there . Wasn't it your mistake ?

Panchi - Oh god , Pia tum kitni baar apne prince ke dreamland mein fly karti raho gi ?Class agaya hai !

Pia – Oh thanks! Bye di . and she rushed towards the class .

Class :

Misha – Pia !

Pia – hmm…

Misha – Tumhe college kaisa laga ?

Pia – Nice!

Misha – Great ! Tumhe college ki sabse achi baat kya lagti he .

Pia – Bunking !😆

Misha 😲😲 – What ???????

Pia – Why r u so scared ?

Misha – No , woh actually thought ki tum ek padaku type hogi .

Pia – Me and padaku ? No yaar . I just study when there is exam or homeworks . Otherwise I'm a full-on-bunker .

Misha – Wow , toh bunk kare ?

Pia – Dude , pehle kyun nahi kaha ! Chalo . and they rush towards the canteen .

Canteen :

T – Oh baby you're the best.

Abhay – T maate bhagwan ke liye mujhe chod do .😆

T – Baby I always strive for the best. And you're the best. We make the perfect couple !

Abhay – Are bhagwan meri madat karo .

Pia and Misha were watching this from far . Misha was thoroughly enjoying and laughing while Pia even though she denied it she couldn't stop to stare Abhay's pleading cute face .
Misha and Pia walked towards them .

Abhay (in mind) –Thank god mishu aagayi . Mishu mujhe bachao .

Misha understood and took out her mobile .

Misha – T !

T – What ?

Misha – Can you please be a little close to Abby . I want to click a photo of the perfect couple in this college .

Abhay – Whaaatt ?

T – Oh sure .Pehli baar Misha Raichand ne kuch baat sahi kahi he .

Abhay was thoroughly shocked while T came closer to him . Misha clicked their photo .

T – Do send that photo to me also .I would put it in my bedroom .

Misha – Sure ! and T left .

Abhay – Misha ye tune kya kia !

Misha – Obiviously photo click kia !

Abhay – Par … but …… why ?

Misha – Teeno ka ek hi mtlab he . Tum mujhe kitna blackmail karte ho uss shanker ke funde mein . So , I'll use it as a payback . I'll keep on blackmailing you until I feel satisfied. And if you do not obey me I'll post it in the newspapers , magazines and distribute it to the whole Dehradoon. 😆

Abhay – Mishu …

Pia was having a gala time seeing this .

Misha – Come Pia and they left leaving Abhay .

Corridor –

Misha – Dude wasn't that fun ?

Pia – Looks like your bro's have a tough time dealing with you .

Misha – Obviously , Misha ke naam se whole DD dar jata hai .

Pia (laughing) – Atleast I'm not in that list .

Misha – Acha , Mish ki friend toh ho jao aage aage dekho !

This line reminded her of Amily . She was also like Misha . The tomboy . This again brought fresh tears in her eyes . So she tried to divert the topic .

Pia – Waise Misha , ye shankar kaun he ?

Misha – Dude , tum uski baat mat karo .

Pia – Kyun ?

Misha – Tum Shankar ke bare mein janna chahti ho ?

Pia nods .

Misha – Then come ………..

Staffroom :

Shankar was checking the English papers when Misha and Pia entered . When Shankar saw Misha his heart started dancing in the tune of "I am in love , I am in love …………"😳😉🤣

Misha – Hey !

Shankar – Oh hi Misha !

Misha – Pia ye he Shankar SIR ! Ye humare English teacher he .

Shankar – Ahh… Pia , Pia dobriyal . The new London returned student . Got A+'s in English , Biology and history . Oxford university's topper in all fields. Got honoured by the Mayor of London for excellence in all applicable fields . London's one of the best students . Got 8 medals for all athelets . Got a chance to visit Miami, Texas, Spain , Los Angeles and Paris for free due to excellent knowledge .

When Shankar was saying all this Misha's mouth went on being bigger and bigger and she kept looking at Pia while Pia was trying to hide her blush .

Shankar – It's an honor to meet such an excellent student .

Pia – The pleasure is all mine, Sir !

Misha – Hey tumne toh kaha tha ki tum padaku nahi ho !

Pia – Obviously . I always revise the lessons when I reach home and study at the last moment for exams so I remember . And sports . I always do jogging at morning for 2 hours and do exercises when I get free time .

Misha – Mujhe tumhara brain de do .Mujhe toh dar hai ki mein iss baar fail ho jaungi .

Shankar – No worry misha , you can again break your hand and I'll come as a substitute . You know I'm always ready for that .😳

Misha – Arghh… Ye mujhe ek din pagal kar dega .

Shankar – Yehi toh mein chahtaa hun Misha , ki tum bhi mere pyaar mein pagal ho jao.😆😉

Misha – Bhago and she pull Pia and runs off.

Corridor –

Pia – Oh so teacher – student love story, hun ?

Misha – Pia you too ? Isliye mein tumhe usske baare mein nahi bata rahi thi .

Pia – W…..

Suddenly Pia's phone beeps.

Pia – Hello?

Voice - …………………………………………………………………..

Pia – Oh my god . Kitne din pehle hua ye ?

Voice – Do din pehle .

Pia – What ? Do din pehle aur tum mujhe ab bata rahe ho ! You sure it's him .

Voice – Yes !

Pia – Ok , then you can say it's god's doing . He deserved it !

Voice – The police has taken the body to bury it . Alina is crying uncontrollably . I can't believe she still is in love with that mutt .

Pia – You try to console her . Hey I have an idea . Dipaanita aunty is coming to India to establish her business isn't it ? Why don't you both come as well !

Voice – Hmm..that's a good idea . I'll talk to mom and let you know . Ok bye , you enjoy .

Pia – Bye ! and she cuts .

Misha – Who was that ?

Pia – My friends . They're facing a big tragic currently so I called them over .

Misha – Oh cool ! Hey ab chalo .

Pia – Kaha ?

Misha – Dude ab college end hone wala he . Ghar nahi jaana ?

Pia – Oh so fast , Let's go . ………………….

Precap : 2 days later

Scene – Dehradoon Airport .

An elderly woman came out of the airport . Followed by her were a boy who looked like in his mid – twenties and a girl who looked like a year or two smaller than the boy . She was clutching the boy's hand in such a way that looked like she was scared about the surrounding around her .

I know it was very boring , but please comment and like as well ! If there's any confusion let me know .Thanks for reading !!

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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update dear!😃.
loved how misha teased abhay and t😆
cont soon.

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