He's not Abhay... - Page 2

excellent shreya👏 the way u have expressed piya's feeling is just awsome😳

Superb u described pia's feelings so well

Just Awesome Shreyoo..!!! *Claps* 🤗
U described Piya's feelings so so so well..!!
Yes.. Piya didn't love either of the two.. bcoz.. they weren't the Abhay she searched for..
No one can ever be Abhay.. Piya's Abhay..!!

Too Good post Shreyoo Baby.. I simply loved it..!!! [
>:D<] 🤗 🤗 🤗

Amazing shreya. U described piya's pov, feeling beautifully. Just beautiful. Loved it dear.

LOVED D Piya's POV!
She no longer remembered him bt dat unexlainable attraction 2 abhay even after he throws every possible taunt 2 hurt her,heartache 2 see him wid other gals esp her own sisters,a longing 2 be wid him nd a belief deep in her heart dat it s all fake...all this u showed beautifully.
Reminded me of d scene when jeh proposed piya bt she was in dilemma,when abhay 1st time came 2 d college postleap,dat confrontation when students were protesting and d scene when she went alone 2 see dat burnt stable nd abhay came there nd she told him: i want u 2 love me abhay.

Shreya i donno what to say! Just wanna tell that its beautiful dear.[:D>] The way u hav poured piaLs thots is fantastic.⭐️ I love love loved it. 😳
looking forward to another such fav piece of work. 😊