Mini FF Bk2:My Beautiful Disaster(Last chapter,pg85,April 26) - Page 56

Created

Last reply

Replies

595

Views

69.6k

Users

99

Likes

1.4k

Frequent Posters

piaviviandsena thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Awsm+unexpected! Its obvious dat abhiya r alive. Every1 hv dere own version of story. I want 2 no abhiya's version. I actally cried after reading inspecters version. Continue soon!
DestroyedInLove thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
Maine aaj 1 din me puri FF padhliya😲 @Tanz...OMG!!!!Kitni acchi likhti ho tum..U r one of the best writters of this Forum...really really love this FF..Proud of u..tumhari baki FFs & SSs bhi padhongi.😊 i know wo bhi aise hi acche hoga. Waiting for next update.best of luck.
siggi thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
its been like ages waiting for the update... plzzz update soon...
.SmokeySilence. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
OKAY!! I didnt even realize it's been 4 months I didnt update 😲 Apologies.. i was and i am still too occupied with work actually. and honestly I didnt want to end it Its been my most appreciated and loved story and personally its been emotionally overwhelming for me whenever I wrote it. I m biased towards it as my a bit fav baby than others 😆 anyways 1/2 updates i will wrap it up. I started writing and realized 1 chapter wont be enough though i decided next chapter will be last. I will finish it within next month that is Feb, 2014. thanks to everyone for the loving journey 🤗
will reply to everyone soon...
pink_rose thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Looking forward to it.
It is one of my fav Abhiya story for its unique set up. Nothing similar to the serial or super natural world. I am feeling sad that it will be coming to an end soon. I wish you could consolidate the entire story in a book so that I can read it when ever I feel like.
MistiAbhiya thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Its my fav Abhiya story...I love it...ur writing skill I always prefer...Ur this story change my mind about underworld person which I told u before...Its inspirational story...waiting for update😊
.SmokeySilence. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Bisweswar

tanzie di why am i having a feeling that abhiya r still alive and athena is their daughter?the update was amazing di.u made me cry.tumi ato shundor kore ki kore lekho go?now pls pls pls update soon.


Maybe you are right and by the time everyone figured it out 😆 onkk dhonnobad 😳

Originally posted by: vmpy

tanzie all i could say rt nw is this is it.after reading da update fr smtime i was not even able to write da comment.i still have tears in my eyes.after reading da complete update i have a feeling dat athena is abhiyas daughter n they r alive.da way u have presented da story it touched my heart nt only touched it went deep dwn into my heart i felt their agony.a masterpiece indeed.waiting fr da next one.


Thanks a lot Aqib. you know a famous writer said if a writer wants to make the readers cry he/she had to cry herself while writing it and only thn he/she will be successful in writing a real heart breaking story n i guess im successful even in a small portion thn. thanks a lot.


.SmokeySilence. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Bleak_House

Just finishd reading it. I commentd in wattpad n doing here as well!😊 n see after how many MONTHS im replying

Awesuum update tanzie!! 👏 Very very interesting..full of twists...amazing!! 👏
ok..hm..Athena's dad abhinav is abhay if am nt wrng and so abhay pia is very much alive!!
Nw am waiting to see the whole thing..n hw the entire story unfolds to athena! She will be shockd for sure!! And i guess The name of the next chap is "living in a lie" coz till nw abhaypia are living in other names just to hide themselves frm the world otherwise abhay's history wudnt have let hm live in peace ever..nt at least the way they are nw!! So its abt them thru their pov in the next..i hope!😳 😉 thanks so much Indu. u figured out pretty much everything. this is not how i planned to bring this twist but anyways i wanted to wrap it up so i did. i though n though so bring the angle n not look stupid over it.
So overall a great update!!! Arnab's portrayal was very engaging n so was athena's!! :) 👏
and ya i think i donno..y..bt i think arnab lied! He knws the truth abt abhay pia being alive n the happy ending he askd to give athena, is becz he knew the story has a happy ending anyway!! ;) bt he just lied abt the ending to athena for obviously sum reasn..mayb the same reasn her parents didnot!😳 I never wanted to give this story a happy ending. it was never meant to be like that but anyways i did what my readers always asked. always so i had to.

P.S. Plz carry soon! Eagerly waiting!
And sorry for the random guesses..bt cnt help it!! 😆

.SmokeySilence. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

fantastic update. commented on wattpad as well as here also.

simply fab update.
how do you think of such twists and turns.
amazingly written and really i am short of words to praise you.
it seems arnab wasn't that bad at all...atleast he did come to help pia even if he never accepted her.
can't judge madhu coz she did everything only to save her daughter but still both madhu and chand had tragic end...that was sad but may be chand deserved it...his ego was bigger than his daughter.
when arnad told athena about abhay and pia being dead...gosh i was totally shocked and really felt sad but after reading the last part i can have some hopes for pia and abhay being alive.atena always reminded me of pia only but wasn't sure and it was only after reading this update that i can assume that they are both abhay and pia's kids but still that journal note of abhay in jail and then in mental asylum is confusing...can't wait to read how did that happen and the police never had any photograph of abhay so how did they catch him and if that guy isn't abhay then who was it?did the jailor helped him in escaping coz he can feel his pain so may be but still why did arnab lie to athena?

so many questions...only u can answer. this is one of my most fav ff of yours...i lvd lvd reading it.
this is a masterpiece of writing by you tanzie...


Thanks so much megha. I saw your comment in wattpad and replied there as well. thanks thanks so much... it took months to actually bring the twist into shape because there's too much loophole. yes u cant judge n u can judge all the character here including Arnab madhu, chand n abhay, pia... they are right n wrong n in their own places n everyone got fair punishment for all their wrong deeds.
yes theres soo many questions n loop holes remaining.. i will clear them up soon.. n thanks for always being there 🤗
.SmokeySilence. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav

so

i guess they r abhay and pia
and they r their children
wow
grt part
continue soon


Thanks. I guess so too. everything will be cleared on next update.

Originally posted by: arwakantawala

very nice part at last some of the misteries are clear and loved how you showed Athena she has the best qualities of her mother and father both but still wanted to know how Abhay and Pia landed in India and how Pia got killed and then how come she and Abhay survived.


Thanks so much. will get to know very soon.

Originally posted by: forever.alon

loved it😳...it was really beautiful.athena is abhiya's daughter😕..i guessed it when she says she is like her mom and ask so many questions😊..but still i couldnt stop crying reading the jailer's pov😭😭..hope thats not true..😭😭...update soon 😳


Thanks a lot ratri. your guess is right. and jailers part i liked writing or i should say i loved n i cried.. that was too sad for me to write.

Originally posted by: Syed695

Awesome Update..!!! I was crying the firt half and when it came towards the end..looks like they are alive...And Athena is their daughter...Loved it...jaiors POV was painful...the angony and loss potrayed really well..Waiting for next n Thanks for the PM..!


Thank you so much. sorry for making everyone cry i hope i will be able to explain everything in next update.. thanks for reading 😳

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".