Mini FF Bk2:My Beautiful Disaster(Last chapter,pg85,April 26)

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#531

Just finishd reading it. I commentd in wattpad n doing here as well!😊

Awesuum update tanzie!! 👏 Very very interesting..full of twists...amazing!! 👏
ok..hm..Athena's dad abhinav is abhay if am nt wrng and so abhay pia is very much alive!!
Nw am waiting to see the whole thing..n hw the entire story unfolds to athena! She will be shockd for sure!! And i guess The name of the next chap is "living in a lie" coz till nw abhaypia are living in other names just to hide themselves frm the world otherwise abhay's history wudnt have let hm live in peace ever..nt at least the way they are nw!! So its abt them thru their pov in the next..i hope!😳 😉
So overall a great update!!! Arnab's portrayal was very engaging n so was athena's!! :) 👏
and ya i think i donno..y..bt i think arnab lied! He knws the truth abt abhay pia being alive n the happy ending he askd to give athena, is becz he knew the story has a happy ending anyway!! ;) bt he just lied abt the ending to athena for obviously sum reasn..mayb the same reasn her parents didnot!😳

P.S. Plz carry soon! Eagerly waiting!
And sorry for the random guesses..bt cnt help it!! 😆

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#532

i guess they r abhay and pia

and they r their children

wow

grt part

continue soon

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#533

fantastic update. commented on wattpad as well as here also.

simply fab update.

how do you think of such twists and turns.

amazingly written and really i am short of words to praise you.

it seems arnab wasn't that bad at all...atleast he did come to help pia even if he never accepted her.

can't judge madhu coz she did everything only to save her daughter but still both madhu and chand had tragic end...that was sad but may be chand deserved it...his ego was bigger than his daughter.

when arnad told athena about abhay and pia being dead...gosh i was totally shocked and really felt sad but after reading the last part i can have some hopes for pia and abhay being alive.atena always reminded me of pia only but wasn't sure and it was only after reading this update that i can assume that they are both abhay and pia's kids but still that journal note of abhay in jail and then in mental asylum is confusing...can't wait to read how did that happen and the police never had any photograph of abhay so how did they catch him and if that guy isn't abhay then who was it?did the jailor helped him in escaping coz he can feel his pain so may be but still why did arnab lie to athena?

so many questions...only u can answer. this is one of my most fav ff of yours...i lvd lvd reading it.

this is a masterpiece of writing by you tanzie...

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arwakantawala

@arwakantawala

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#534

very nice part at last some of the misteries are clear and loved how you showed Athena she has the best qualities of her mother and father both but still wanted to know how Abhay and Pia landed in India and how Pia got killed and then how come she and Abhay survived.

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Raatry

@forever.alone

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#535

loved it😳...it was really beautiful.athena is abhiya's daughter😕..i guessed it when she says she is like her mom and ask so many questions😊..but still i couldnt stop crying reading the jailer's pov😭😭..hope thats not true..😭😭...update soon 😳

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#536

Pms sent to everyone 😳

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#537

Awesome Update..!!! I was crying the firt half and when it came towards the end..looks like they are alive...And Athena is their daughter...Loved it...jaiors POV was painful...the angony and loss potrayed really well..Waiting for next n Thanks for the PM..!

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#538

Tazie I commented also wattpad...How u say its not well writing...Its superb dear...Love it...my husband but soo far away coz his boss not accept his leave...I'm soo scared...Love it...u made me cry again...u hae really talent🤗plzz pray for husband good health...I feel when ur love sick & u far away...how much scar into heart...Love u❤️

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#539

wow great story plz update soon
it's very sad and i was crying
thanks for the pm

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Anj01

@Anj_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#540

fantastic update👏👏👏

i liked arnab for the first time in the story...he is not that bad. though he couldn't took the right decisions at right time and was confused about his feelings all the time but he did have heart afterall he had decided to help madhu but unfortunately was too late.😔

and that jailor's journal...woah!!! it was an emotional roller coaster ride. i never cried like this after reading any story😭😭😭...God!!! it was like i can actually visualize abhay screaming over pia's dead body...it was heart wrenching😭😭😭

and i am not complaining about the sad ending as this was not the last chapter. and you gave lots of clues😉...athena's blue eyes, curly hair, habit of asking questions, her mom dad's PDA...i have a strong feeling that they none other than my abhiya and they are very much alive😃 and athena n sid are their kids😃...but still its only a guess😕 lots of question require answer to prove it right...just waiting for it...have my fingers crossed

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