The Vampires Family (ON HOLD) - Page 16

Originally posted by: nfprincess5

Wondrful update...

Thank you princess. 😳

Chapter Three (PART-5) updated and with this Chapter Three is finished. 🥳

its just superb parts yar
y i feel like maya is connected to abhay
like abhay source to give news of piya is maya
but whoever it was
i just adore the scenes of abhiya
and the way u descirbed the murder and the wild boy
piya slapping too gud
wow abhay said piya maan
so helpfull buying vegetbles for piya
cont soonnn

Originally posted by: abhiya_kapi

Thank you ajwa. 😳
Yep he is a main lead in this story, but you know na this is office love story, so official entry will be direct in the office, which will take some time. Piya and Abhay is not going to meet so early, you have to wait. There is a lot of thrill coming in next chapter. After that, Abhay will make his official entry. 😉
Will PM you.

Originally posted by: bellaaa

its just superb parts yar
y i feel like maya is connected to abhay
like abhay source to give news of piya is maya
but whoever it was
i just adore the scenes of abhiya
and the way u descirbed the murder and the wild boy
piya slapping too gud
wow abhay said piya maan
so helpfull buying vegetbles for piya
cont soonnn

Thank you so much bellaaa. 😳 I'm glad you liked it. 😛
There are less descriptions in this story, mostly it's all about Piya's experience she share in her POV. 😃

Originally posted by: TeDylove

wow renu its really great update//..pls pls abb to meri fav story ka update dedo..😭

and tumne muje pm bhi nahi kiya.. vo bat alag he ki me comment nahi karti..😛 but me padhti jarur hu..😉

ha ha your fav story VTL? 😆 arey woh update toh ghost ff khatam hone ke baad hoga.
Arey I updated this late last night plus my inbox was full. So I couldn't PM anyone. 😭

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

LOL awesome update gud 2 c Abhay after waiting 4 so long.cant wait 4 chapter 4 now😃

thanks shrishti. 😳 ha ha abhi thoda aur wait karo, official entry mai thoda time lagega, but he will make his official entry in chapter four itself. 😛😉

Originally posted by: ajwa.ali

there r lots of question in my mind...

like how maya knows abhay and what they r hiding from pia..how that magician died..

i think i will die with this lot of suspence...

hmm suspense ka the end itni jaldi nahi hoga. It will take time, abhi toh bahut kuch hona baki hai. 😳