Murder in Retrospect.Last Chp P139,140 Feb13

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Seema

@...Seema...

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#751

Lovely upate enjoyed da divorce drama a lot.hope abhyia succeeds in getting some clue about da mysterious murder from dis lawyer.da story is becoming more nd more interesting.thanx for pm.continue soon.

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#752

Absolutely hilarious🤣.The divorce drama was too gud

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#753

Hilarious update Dishu 🤣

Abhay's reasons given to Lawyer for divorce and then Pia coming and defending him instead was 🤣

Had a great time reading it... now let's see what jeev has to say 😆

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#754

omg dishu 🤣 🤣 abhay nd pia's acting nd abhay's foolish act realy cracked me up🤣

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bonna123

@bonna123

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#755

hi disu di. I am bonna. Great update and thanks for the pm.

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Aqeelah

@xxAqeelahxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#756

Oh my god this was just so funny , Pia could not tolerate what Jeev said ... oh coz Abhay is so sweet ...

Wonder what Jeev will say about Maya now :)

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#757

wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story to read i really enjoy reading this story of your
thanks for the pm

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Divya6696

@Divya6696

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#758

awesome awesome awesome Dishu..!!! well.. firstly.. thank you so much for updating.. I was going to ask for one today..
one hell of a hilarious update..!!! from the beginning to the end.. I couldn't stop laughing..!! especially the part from Piya entering Jeev's office.. Uff.. they can't even act.. Piya was shouting at Jeev for calling Abhay all of those.. hehe..
ah so the name's disclosed.. wanting to know Jeev's part of the story..
update sooner na please this time.. :)

Edited by Divya6696 - 12 years ago

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Divya6696

@Divya6696

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#759

ah and one more thing.. I haven't read the original story.. but from what you write.. Madam Christie must have done it fabulously.. but please don't call your version sloppy.. this is so so so good..!!! it keeps me away from reading the original work.. I agree Madam Christie had done really good.. but you are awesome as well yaar..!!! take some credit to yourself for its adaptation on Abhiya.. I guess this is the only FF where they don't have to fight the world to be together but are together to fight..!!!