Murder in Retrospect.Last Chp P139,140 Feb13 - Page 16

Originally posted by: flora212

this was fantastic...i guess i read this novel but doesnt remember the story well ecxept the ending!!! 😆but now i am waiting fr ur ff mystry to unfold!!😃update soon😉

Originally posted by: ilove99

hmmm...so i was right😆ghar mein problem hai

Originally posted by: spn-abhay

awesum update dishu😊

sorry 4 late reply

both updates r awesum

abhiya moments were nice😆

wat was with that errr feeling😕

is there a ghost?????????????

btw i havent read any novel n its completely new to me😳

thanx 4 pm

continue soon

Originally posted by: bellaaa

nice part dishu
liked it jeh piya T and sid conv too
missing abhay yar
definately house had some mystery and may be that maid too
hoping to see abhay in next part with piya too
but love the story and ur wrieting skill
cont soon

Originally posted by: 411996

hey dishu its awsm dear! thax fr pn! yr tum to jaldi jaldi update krti ho. ok so pia is feeling little khatra in d house!!! hmmm wht bout tht lady!!! khi vhi to...! hmmm interesting!!!!

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd

nice update Dishu but is it a normal story or supernatural elements are there ?

Originally posted by: Pavi.Dravid119

I felt tht there ws smthng fishy with the house in the firts update itself Dish but now m feeling tht there's a thing with tht house keeper Mrs. Deskmukh mentioned too 😈

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update

missed abhay

pia sid convo was cool.is the maid a suspicious character???

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

Awesome update I so loved it.So Pia will finally buy tht haunted house.Mrs Deshmukh's worker sound very scarry 2 me.Se is something.Plz cont..

Originally posted by: anjali.K

Loved it Dishu!!! Missed Abhay though. Why did Piya feel creeped out in the house?? Is it really haunted??

And you made Jeh Piya's bro in this ff😆