Abhiya ff:Love..always Eternal(Complete) - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanx u like😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I'm glad u all like it & u all gave ur precious comment😊...I start my 1st chapter...hope u all like it & any mistake forgive me.ur suport give me strength😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: koli97

I'm glad u all like it & u all gave ur precious comment😊...I start my 1st chapter...hope u all like it & any mistake forgive me.ur suport give me strength😊


hey r u going to update now ???? 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHAPTER-1

"The light coming through the trees,a little bit foggy,the earth smell,the quietness,coolness,moss growing on the trunks of the trees,droplets of water,dripping from long leaves,ferns,water trickling through the little creek,birds sound.The forest is a beautiful gift which provide by nature.Isn't real,Kabir?' --a strinckingly handsome boy with jet black hairs & beautiful,deep & intence blue eyes in his deep & manly voice who stood by riverside of Deharadhun forest crossing his musculine arms in his broad,musculine & well-built chest cover by black vast said a charming boy who stood beside him finishing their morning jogging.
Kabir : 'Yeah Abhay,Its lovely but u tell it easily'.
Abhay : 'How?'
Kabir : 'Just say a word its beautiful' 😆
Abhay: 'yeah'...& loss in nature beauty.
Kabir keep his hand Abhay's shoulder & said: 'My dear naturelover,if u finished ur love with nature,lets go.We r getting late 4 practice.'Abhay smile & nodded.
They came their hostel playground area & Kabir took the game & both come on field.
Kabir start the game & try 2 reach goal; when Abhay forcefully come & stole the game & down towards .Kabir ran behind him & try 2 catch the game.Abhay cross him but Kabir try his best.After sometime hide & sick Abhay bounce the ball in air & jumped 4 head kick but sametime Kabir also jumped 4 save goal.But Abhay already head the goal & they both hit eachother & fall in grassground & the ball reached goal.They both look eachother & giggled.
Kabir said (taken heavy breath): 'Nxt day,its my turn buddy'.
Abhay :'lets see' & 😉.
Kabir fake angerily said : 'lets see!! huh!!Ok,Friday match pe dekh lena Man of the match mount college champion Kabir Singh Rathod.'
Abhay : 'Really!!!! I'm scare tht Champu'. & start run & Kabir also start & caught him & fight friendly.
After couple of time they freshen up & left room 4 college.They both looked stunned & ready kill girls😉
here is chapter1... if any mistake 4give me...I try my best...plzz give ur precious comments.
Edited by koli97 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!!! lovely update,love the lovely fight of abhay & kabir...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wao ! Nice start u did 👏
looking forward for next chapter 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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brilliant update di👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Woaaa awesome start diii
I loved that nature describtion most
Abhay kabir fight was so cute.
loved it.
continue asap.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely chapter mishti
abhay kabir fight was cute
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Cute!! Pls PM me wen u cont!!
-Gauri

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