Abhiya ff:Love..always Eternal(Complete)

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Beautiful update Kakoli di.Plz pm me 4m next time.I dnt mind waitng.Take care of ur family first

Edited by Monami_50 - 13 years ago

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

oh god thats really bad...

hope he becomes fine soon...

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

ohh yar definately we co operate with u
hope ur father in law get well soon
take ur time yar
dont worry sab theak ho jai ga

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--faroo--

@--faroo--

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

nice ss pm me next time plzzz

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Thank u sooo much everybody 4 ur support & pray...Really all urs pray bring back him,Dr. told us no hope,only mirracle save him & see ur pray do tht mirracle...nw he is stable...nw continue my ff...Romi,Abhiya_kapi,sayu,neetu,Abhiya_Visu,Monsmi_50,-juhi-lily-,bellaaa,--faroo--,fabliha,pkywkrox.Ms-meghasharma,trishnawaliya,Alicia2001,SheDevil--very glad all of u like my ff & give ur precious comment...ur support inspire me...love u all of guys...😊

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

its gud news buddy... wish he will get well soon... plz continue whenever u get time...

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

ohh gud news thts he is getting well!! 😃 dnt worry he will get totally f9. i'll pray fr him!!! 😊 u tk care of ur father-in-law & ur family!! ff & us cn wait!! 😛 bt do pm me when ever u'll give update!! i lyk ur concept, prologue, cs, & 1st chapter!! 😛 & 1 imp thing, wid ur family also tkcare of urself!! dnt neglet ur health!! 😊

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: i_luv_abhiya
ohh gud news thts he is getting well!! 😃 dnt worry he will get totally f9. i'll pray fr him!!! 😊 u tk care of ur father-in-law & ur family!! ff & us cn wait!! 😛 bt do pm me when ever u'll give update!! i lyk ur concept, prologue, cs, & 1st chapter!! 😛 & 1 imp thing, wid ur family also tkcare of urself!! dnt neglet ur health!! 😊

Thanks dear...I do as my strength...I tc myself also...love u for ur caring...little bit nervous coz my whole family even my husband depend me..They beleive tht I bring him back again...I felt uneasy also...but I know all urs wish bring back him...nw I will update this ff😊

Edited by koli97 - 13 years ago

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

CHAPTER-2

Abhay & Kabir both entered the college,everybody looked their college champions.They are final year student now.Abhay always embrassed like looks.He felt tht every eyes told only one things,'great Raichand there go'.After finished their class, he ignored tht looks said Kabir-'Hey dude,kal final assintment submit karna hai,mujhe note ke liye district libary jana hai.see u later.'

Kabir,'ok'.

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He entered quickly libary which is nearby college.As soon as,he felt comfort & thought himself there nobody no him.He start search his book for note.A couple of time he is come a-row-book & search for book without noticed his forntside & collided a body & feel a soft hands hold his shoulders & support .He looks a angelic curley hair beauty girl look@ him with her beautiful baby brown eyes.His pair of icy-blue eyes locked those beautiful baby brown eyes.He forget this world & blinked.He came back sense when tht curley girl shut him-'R u blind!! Never see a girl in ur life!!U stupid rich always take chance!!Yeah!! Now u explain a word sorry.'

Abhay heared those word fully angry & said-'Wht make u so sure I'm rich?'

The girl-'Ur stupid look'& moving her curley hair.

Abhay-'Listen!U r wrong,I'm actually smart & poor.'

The girl-'Oh! no.I'm smart & poor.'She staring striaght Abhay eyes.Abhay felt uneasy her looks & said-'Ok,may b I look rich but I wouldn't let which u say.'But tht girl gave look like say😆 which made him lost his temper & shut-'Wht the hell make u smart?'whn libary other people look@ them.

Girl whispered-'I wouldn't go for coffee with u.'

Abhay😲& surprised hear it & greet his teeth-'Listen!!I wouldn't ask u.'

'Thts',she replies,'Is wht makes u stupid.'

Abhay thought 'Wht a Superior type smart!' & move on there.Abhay get his book & came near table.He looks around & saw tht curley girl sat some distance of him & look@ him.He ignored her looks & sat down & concentrate made his note.But sometime he distract his work for those angelic face came infront his eyes.He told himself 'wht happen Abhay,concentrate ur work'.But unconsiously he noticed tht girl stay in libary until close.He finished his work & left libary.He came back hostel in his bedroom lay down & thought about his study but his absent mind thought about the angelic innocent beauty & fell sleep with a smile😊.

hi guys here my update nxt chapter,plz forgive me any mistake.hit like bottom & give ur precious comment which inspire me.thanks everybody for ur support & pray...hope u all njoy my update.

Edited by koli97 - 13 years ago

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670134

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Yipppeeeiii !!! m first to comment 😊 its awsm di 😊 najar milte hi Piya ne Abhay ki dil chura liya 😉 so cutee 😛 but di everytime apki update itna chota kyu hota hai padhne se pahle hi khatam ho jate hai 😔 waiting for a looong update 😛 continue soon 😊

Edited by Saayaniz - 13 years ago