::SANDS OF TIME - Book 2:: Note and Request on Pg 46 - Page 13

Beautiful Update Anji!! Loved every bit of it!!
Aww!! Abhay was so romantic!! But Pia's family is in D-A-N-G-E-R!! :O

Cont soon!!
-Gauri

very nice up date dear ,good and mindbowlingly written...please continue it

Why the hell i m not getting pms!😒i have to read 3 big updtes together now

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Anji I could kiss your hands right now for penning down such an epic update 🤗 U always end up taking this FF a notch up higher whenever its ur turn ⭐️ U r a star ⭐️ Truly 👏 Am speechless right now 😊 Loved every bit of it to the core 😳 Right from Abhiya's power packed passionate encounter, to the judegement n the peek into the dark angels world. Fabulous 👏 The ending was sublime n sweet. The way Abhay overrode his desires for her and didn't taint her virtue 👏

SUPER DUPER FANTASTIC UPDATE 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

I am overwhelmed by the praise Mandy😳. I am sooo happy you liked it!😃. I always look for your, Tanzie's, and Ayesha's comments. Its assures me that I did a good job coz its after all the opinion from A league writers. I am really honoured to be cowriting with such awesome writers as you 3⭐️. I am so glad Ayesha gave me a chance to write for this epic FF😊. It gives me a lot of encouragement to receive praise from you😊. Thankyou sooo much for these lovely words of praise🤗

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

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woww Anji it was out of the world... Im commenting after reading it 6 times probably 🤗

it was just so perfect. Abhay's love finally blooming and he slowly expressing it was so beautiful. entire Abhiya moment - Pias confusion and turmoil, Abhay's determination to save Pia and not to let her go, Pia surrender and Abhay showing his care and love... just so beautiful... 👏 ⭐️ I can read it another 4 or 5 times I guess 😃 sometimes words are not required to show what you feel 😳

Pia and Adriels convo was also very interesting. she is always just drawn towards the dark isnt she.😆

I seriously cant trust these angels anymore... so much of politics in them😕 and last part was beautiful.👏 Hatss of to you for such a wonderful update... ⭐️

Tanzie, thanksyou sooo much🤗. You have no idea how much this means to me when you praise my writing😊. You read it 6 times. I am elated at having done a good job coz I am very nervous while updating when it comes to Sands of time. Its my favourite abhiya FF and the most epic piece of work and not to mention the super talented writers like you writing it. When it comes to Sands, the update has to be good coz I have to match up to you, Ayesha, Mandy😊. I am looking forward to the story;how it gets shaped😊.

Originally posted by: matwamango

Greatness can never be measured and this was a

some good dialogues... between ABHIYA. I like the way Pia succumbed to telling ABHAY the stark truth and his own response...

DARK ANGELS R COLD EMOTIONLESS CREATURES...😆

iTS good to see there are some uncertainties amongst their ranks. Its a little cinical the way they view good and evil..

I just lived the way Anji has attacked this showcasing her writing skills and emoting oh so beautifully.."

aur kabhi kabhi lagta hai kitna mature ho tum U know like U are older than your years. I was swayed by Pia's inner turmoil and her questioning ABHAY'S reason for wanting her was logical. Reminds me of those great romantic encounters where the heroine demands to know where they stand without actually demanding it. I miss those old days where romance was at its heights "

der se aayi akkal Abhay ko par aya toh sahi. ABHAY hasn't managed to hurt Pia like he'd prmosed but then again everytime he tried to he'd wound up saving her. Now hope he continues to save Pia

I can't wait to see the looks on the dark ANGELS face when ABHAY crams them all..
i.just want to say..."

Meri essay poora nahin huwa...."

Anji u surely brought out humanity in our ABHAY...Making him realise he does feel and its not just a passing or fleeting emotion..

Vampires can have a heart and they do require some tender loving care and if they allow this small spark to enter then its enough to light up an entire room. Teri reasoning is so airtight for ABHAY in explaining his feelings by actions than words because sometimes words can just be words but actions speak louder than words.."


U have actually shaped this FF in the right direction and i am excited no elated, no happy go the list will be endless again but i can see the perfect colours the FF was always supposed to maintain...


Now i can stop rambling on and on but i really really loved the UPDATE. ...

You loved my update. I couldnt be more proud of my writing than I am now after reading your comment😳. Writing for Sands of time has improved my writing skills substantially😊(I had to match up to you guys na😳. I am sure I'll be there one day😊). I can see how amateurish my first update was in Sands and I owe it to you Ayesha😊. You made me the writer I am coz my first update in Sands of time was my first update was my very first piece of writing. I cherish your words Ayesha and it gives me a lot of encouragement to write more😊. Thanks😳

Originally posted by: anjali.K

I am overwhelmed by the praise Mandy😳. I am sooo happy you liked it!😃. I always look for your, Tanzie's, and Ayesha's comments. Its assures me that I did a good job coz its after all the opinion from A league writers. I am really honoured to be cowriting with such awesome writers as you 3⭐️. I am so glad Ayesha gave me a chance to write for this epic FF😊. It gives me a lot of encouragement to receive praise from you😊. Thankyou sooo much for these lovely words of praise🤗

superb update