::SANDS OF TIME - Book 2:: Note and Request on Pg 46

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Awsm update anji.Abhay nd his big ego-uff! He almost blurted out that he luvs pia.Hope he confess his feelings soon.The last scene was so nice...abhay proved to pia that what he feels for her is luv,nt lust.

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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Super loved it

I am speechless like always

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

U know what? I'm remembering that song now- tera dil jo hua beimaan , tu saala kaam se gaya reading pia's situation. I'm terrified now... Wonder what will happen!

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Amazing update anji.I loved it.Abhiya's convo,the budding romance,the passion,their newly found love 4 each other,their trust was well described.I luved the way u show Abhay's vampy ego but still he somehow managed 2 show his emotions through his kiss which was pure & full of love & not lust.Sometimes words r not needed 2 express ur ;uv ur simple gesture r enough 2 show ur feeling.The convo b/w both angels & how they r targeting Pia 2 torture Abhay was cool.I love the convo b/w Adriel & Pia.I guess Pia was always a bit inclined 2wards dark ppl.Oh I luv last scene where Abhay kissed Pia forhead & showed his love 4 Pia😛.Plx contt..

Edited by SheDevil - 13 years ago