::SANDS OF TIME - Book 2:: Note and Request on Pg 46

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Resh

@SheDevil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Awesome update Mansa & Tanzie.I so loved it.I love tht whole fight among Angels 2 abandoned Pia & her family.The convo b/w Pia & Ryan was fab.The sibblings love,the old memories of heaven were well described.Pia Sobbing & Abhay consoling was so sweet.Thn Pia leaving Abhay 4 his own sakewas sweet.But na Abhay se bachna mushkil hi nhi namunkin hai.Finally v can Abhay's emotions overpowering demon inside.Tht Abhay pinning Pia agnst wall & thn Pia bleeding.Abhay healing her wid kiss was WOW.Thn last line

'Wht trade?'

'trade of ur soul'

PERFECT

Plz cont..😳

Changed my name frm Cuteshrishti 2 SheDevil😳

Edited by SheDevil - 13 years ago

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Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Wow. Awesome like AWESOME!!! Mandy and Tanzie lots of hugs i just loved this update... Awesome ending! Oh i cant wait to read what she telss him now...

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kirti

@Andromeda001

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Dat was a stupendofabulous update!!
U both gals r d superstellar writers of our forum n u ROCK!!!
Coming 2 d update, dark ANGELS?😡 they shudn't be called angels at all! they r trying 2 destroy grigori angels,piya n abhay r just an excuse!
Loved d emotional meeting of ryan n piya.bt he has put piya in gr8est of dillemma ever choose abhay or family!!!
Abhay feeling jealous of ryan on hearing his name frm piya's mouth while she was dreaming awww 👏
nd final part was just 😍 too hot 2 handle!
Continue soon!

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flora212

@flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

OH NO I AM LATE! FIRST OF ALL CONGRATS FR BOOK 2 SECONDLY I AM SORRY TO COMENT LATE! AND NOW COMING TO UPDATE...THIS WAS FANTASTIC! LOVED THE ANGLES PART! ABHIYA OF COURSE SMOKY HOT.UPDATE SOON.

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Congo for book two ...and fab update

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

fab update tanzie nd manasa👏So dark angels nd pia's family are making their judgement on pia...nw how wil abhay react after knwing this...??

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coolcats123

@coolcats123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

pm me too it was damm gr8...😃

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

This was outstanding. Bloody brilliant the dark angels conference ensemble all was i am short of words

Now I am truly regretting agreeing to try to write coz i cant match the epicness of it

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.AgapiMou.

@.AgapiMou.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

Superb n thrilling update duos..
I pity pia..poor her..shez rely facing a dangerous situation..diz dark angels r surely very cunning..n ryan z such a caring brother..he has surely realized very well dat his sis z poisoned by love..pathetic situation for him!'perfect place for healing' abhay itna naughty kabse ho gaya lol..luvd abhia moments..ending was a cliffhanger..
Update soon..getting even more desperate to read further..

Edited by darkcocoa_renu - 13 years ago