::SANDS OF TIME - Book 2:: Note and Request on Pg 46 - Page 9

Originally posted by: matwamango

I was wondering how long this would take

Both U and Tanzie deserve a big

Such an intense update

I was left drooling for more as usual we always leave UPDATES on a cliffhanger

A huge hug from me to U girls on a joint Update never been done on this FF before but he pace was commendable

Kuch zyaada hi likh li maine i know.By the time U read this you'll have an Essay

But it had to be doneI simply LOVED the Angels rallying round. We have some Background on what the Dark Angels are about. The ending was Like in the movies where the heroine tries to be strong and escape for the greater good but the hero or Dark hero n this case tracks his femme fatale so she is no longer in trouble. Abhay ki healing kisses are smokingIf only we got to read more

Now my Essay is over and so is my use of emo's U girls will probably find it irritating on reading this nonsensical response but how do i phrase all adjectives into one line????

Superb

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

Thank you so much Ayeshu 🤗 your comment means a lot to us offcourse 😳

Im really glad you liked the update. I was actually worried how it is because You, anji and Manasa have given spectacular updates for this FF 👏

I hope ramadan is going fine..take care 🤗

on a stellar Update. I have read your Beautiful Disaster in my spare time and i already know what a perfect writer U are. So i know U have the right skills to bring into this FF with it being so dark. Your imagination is just WOW U mold the characters and SHAPE the intricate details into your work so your worries are in vain. Giving the FF life filling it with colour

fab update.evrythng was brilliantly wrtn.pia would nva trade anything 4 abhay...she would gladly gv her lyf 4 him bt won't let him suffer.abhay will always find her no matter whereva she goes.even angels have groupism. Last part was hot. Thanx 4 pm

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Ayshu I so love ur emos yaar 😃 Thank u so much for appreciating it 🤗 Means a lot to us. But Tanzie did majority of the update, so its her who deserves an applause 👏 I am so happy I got to write a joint update with her as she's one of my top fav FF writer here ⭐️ I had never thought I could get to do a joint update with her. I was jumping for joy when she allowed me to do her summary for Beautiful Disaster which happens to be one of my fav FFs here 😳 Wish I get to do a joint update with u someday 😊 as well. Thanks for such a lovely reply. Am sure even Tanzie will love it 😃

Good U love my emo's warna mujhe katti bol na parthi

u know mene yeh update 10 times padha..😆😆 i am in love with this update...😳

really great work by both of u..👏👏 pia kaha bhi bhagne ka try kare abhay use dhodh k vapis le ayega..

waiting to abhay reaction when he know pia's actual reason for run away😛 and the angle part was really great..👏👏

Awsm nd intense update.OMG...dark angels want 2 punish pia.Her brother wants her 2 trade Abhay's soul..bt she wld never do that.Kiss therapy by doctor Abhay was smoking hot as usual.BTW...next chappy pe abhiya ding-dong hone wala hain kya...pia in bath robe,wet hair,abhay's kiss therapy...pata nahi age kya hoga...he he

phele to dhur bhag raha tha aab dhur jane nai dai raha kya ha ye abhay raichand ki problem actully wo khud ek problem hai pia ki life main


phele abhay on stay away mission now dis pia on her beloved track

hope abhay able to protect pia from dark angel without any stupid act

great update continue soon thanks for the pm!