Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148)

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.
brilliant update tanzie👏...peehu's and alina's convo was so well-written and so beautiful...right amount of love and pain mixed...both women showing their love for the man in their hearts...the convo was heartwarming in a way..😊.my respect for both characters have incresed...as as for abhiya...what can i say????? hot and hot and hottt😳...wow...they have so much passion and yet so much tenderness in the way they love each other..their love is really one of a kind!!

Thank youuu 😳 Peehu will have more parts now and her fate is somehow entwined with Aline. its inevitable. Yes, Abhiya are EPIC and one of a kind and thats why they inspire me to write about them so much 😊

Originally posted by: i_luv_abhiya
hey di thax fr pm!!
update was awsm blowsm!😃! i just luved it!! poor peehu alina or aryan!! feeling bad fr them!!😔finally jeh ne alina ko dekh liya!! i hope ab uske dimag ki tubelight jal jaye!😉! m thinking in whole update hw cn mohini be so quite! bt no vo nhi sudhregi!! so she cm to tk peehu bt m sure aryan will nt let her do tht!😛! & last my abhiya!😳! & m more than 16 so i read it!! its so hot!! m still blushing!😳! next 1 plzz update soon!!

Thank you. lets see whats written in Jeh's fate. Mohini is the masterind of all games so dont expect to accept her defeat so soon. she has a long way to go in the story. im glad you are 16+ 😆

Originally posted by: hema_rawat
beautiful update ..
alina -peehu convo was nice ...
abhiya toh ☺️☺️

Thanks a lot 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR
OMG!! This is such a wonderful story.
You should have got it published instead of writing on the net dear.
It's better than any other novel on vampires.
I'm loving it sooo much.
I'm speecless right now after reading your ff.
Kindly add me to your pm list and I'm going to come back to comment in detail to tell you how beautiful this ff is.
I read all the parts of this ff in one go.
Plz update the next part sooonest.
I just can't wait to read further.
Take care!
love ya
Asma

Hey Asma, welcome since its your first comment in my FF. Thank you so much. 😳 thats a huge comment for me and to be honest I never wanted my vampire story to be like fairytales so I made it dark, intense and passionate which I love 😊 I have added you to the PM list and surely will send Pms.

thanks for commenting and do comment on detail.. will be waiting 🤗

Originally posted by: kuttu
Just one big question why is Mohini back now at the mansion. She is in only for the child and the child is yet to be born. Somehow she brings in too many troubles and aryan can't handle her. If Abhay was there then its different.
Loved the romantic and naughty side of abhay. So the stay away from me is totally out of the window I guess..
The best part was Alina and Peehu conversation. So is it the exit point for Peehu and Alina is going to be a part of Aryans and the kids life.

Mohini is back to take Peehu.offcourse she aint gonna accept her defeat so soon. I agree, Aryan cant handle her. the only person who can handle her is her husband and another one can defeat her thats Abhay so when both of them will unite that will be the ultimate game.

It is out of the window 😆 enough.. now they need to be happy n in each others arms to heal their wounds 😳

Lets see who stays and who exits... good to see your comment after a long time 😊

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: PurpleFairy
What a beautiful update, Tanzie🤗

I just love the Peehu-Alina confrontation. Despite everything, they seem to understand each other the most. Peehu has made many mistakes in her life but her love for Aryan is unquestionable. She is willing to give up her life because she wants to give birth to his children.
I really feel bad for Alina but at the same time, my admiration knows no bounds because she is willing to save the wife of the man she loves only because she cares so much for him and the Raichands in general as well. How can someone be so selfless? Really makes me want to hug her tight🤗 Thanks you Neethzo 🤗 Yes Peehu has done all the mistakes in her life, in her relationships but one thing she is certain of is about her children. she loves Aryan in her own way and no doubt about that. same for Alina, she loves Aryan unconditionally... like peehu said, its easy to fall in love with him.
That poor kitchen of the AR villa😆.😆 I love this honeymoon mood of AbhIya☺️ And I swear, they couldn't have found a place better than the AR Villa. I've already told you how it is THE place of Abhiya's love. Normally, it's the jungle😆.😆 But gosh, my heart just swells with happiness seeing them together finally and HOW. These two will kill me with their heated passion and intense love someday. Pia really knows how to push Abhay's buttons☺️
What on earth is Mohini's problem? Ok, don't answer that. I know it's a rhetorical question😛 I know.. it all started in AR Villa and they foudn each other back there as well. 😳 the poor newly weds didnt even get a proper honeymoon so be it here, and the place is not even important if the beloved is all to willing to be with the other 😉 they deserve their share of happiness so let the landslide, rain, etc help them reading haddis in the kebabs and may both of them always remains this happy 😊 you asked and answered yourself about Mohini 😛 😆

REALLY looking forward to the next update. Finally we get some Abhay-Aryan bromance. They're both such amazing characters that their confrontation is bound to be HAWWT☺️
Hats off to you, Tanzie. You're a brilliant BRILLIANT writer. Your portrayal of every character and their story is so relatable, it makes me feel for each of them <33 I missed writing about that too - my darling - the brother duo... so me looking forward to it as well. 😆 thanks a lot... your comment means a lot to me dear🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#304

lovely update..abhiya romance was hot..just loved it..thanks 4 d pm..continue soon..n sorry 4 late cmnt.because i m very busy now a days because of my studies..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#305

really sorry due to time constraint I couldnt reply everyone but I read everyones comments. thank you so much guys. Im running around the clock due to extreme work load but will try to update as soon as possible 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#306

Take your time to update and sorry haven't been regular on commenting and also reading as I was on a summer break and things were a bit of chaos.

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Asma Khan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#307

Can I plz have the link of your blog dear?
I respect your decision.
I myself am a writer and can understand the reason behind this decision of yours very much.
As much as I wish you to continue updating ur ffs here only,yet I believe that the final decision lies in your hands.
This ff is simply marvellous and it was better if you would have got it published.I bet that it must have got even more popular than the current vampire human love stories..
I really feel sick of people who fail to understand the sentiments of a writer and don't think even twice before saying some bul*****..
Plz try to update this ff soonest coz I simply can't wait to read the next part.
You are online right now.
So kindly let me know if you have already updated this ff on your blog..
Take care!!
Thanks a lot for sharing this outstanding piece of work with us.

love ya
Asma

Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 13 years ago

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR
Can I plz have the link of your blog dear?
I respect your decision.
I myself am a writer and can understand the reason behind this decision of yours very much.
As much as I wish you to continue updating ur ffs here only,yet I believe that the final decision lies in your hands.
This ff is simply marvellous and it was better if you would have got it published.I bet that it must have got even more popular than the current vampire human love stories..
I really feel sick of people who fail to understand the sentiments of a writer and don't think even twice before saying some bul*****..
Plz try to update this ff soonest coz I simply can't wait to read the next part.
You are online right now.
So kindly let me know if you have already updated this ff on your blog..
Take care!!
Thanks a lot for sharing this outstanding piece of work with us.

love ya
Asma

I haven't yet posted the full story on blog yet dear.. and for now, i will be continuing here. and if i stop writing in IF completely I will surely share the blog id with everyone 😳 sigh.. i wish everyone would understand creativity for even expecting it would be foolishness so i better leave it 😆

Thanks a lot for the appreciation, really means a lot to me. i wish someday i will be able to publish my own book 😊

I will update very soon and thank you so much hun

- Tanzie 🤗