Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148) - Page 29

superb update

Originally posted by: SheDevil

Awesome update.I loved it tanzie.It was hot,passionate & raunchy.I loved the convo b/w Alina-Peehu.Oh both know tht they desire 4 same man but still 4 their beloved they r coping wid each other.Oh Abhiya were dreamy.Pia all panicked 1st thn she read Abhay's letter,wore his Shirt,remembered the way she wore Abhay's shirt once whn she was not Mrs.Raichand & Abhay preparing breakfast 4 his beloved but later was lost in love & the passion was at its peak & due 2 which poor pan & pancake had 2 bear consequences 🤣.LOL & thn Abhay ka again sorry 4 hurting u Pia crap & Pia compalining u r not romantic & thn wild,passionate & romantic side of Abhay thn other love making session in bedroom was agn hot .Jeh-Alina encounter was gud too& at last Amber-Aryan's encounter wid Mohini.Lets c wht they will do know?Ab nxt kaun sa update karogi?😕

Love u🤗

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Tanzie I had kept a tab on ur replies wanting to res the 1st spot but missed it by a matter of 2 mins 😭

Coming to the update what can I say? ☺️ I was expecting this emotis from you 🤣

I read it while I was in office just before going for lunch n I couldn stop it in between so asked my friends to carry on 😆 n I ate alone later 😉 god damn it stopped your lunch 😕

According to me the best part of the update was Peehu Alina confrontation. Superb 👏 The way they could connect to each other's pain was so beautiful 😳 Hats off to u for that 👏 Its hard for Alina to help save the woman who is the bane of her life - a woman who will always stand in her path to the man she loves n the one who is bearing his child Still she is selfless enough to keep her hatred aside n nurse an ailing Peehu 😭 Another person in her place would have left her to die or maybe not bothered to help her if not harm her Peehu on the other hand only wants the safety of her children n Aryan's happpiness 😭 I admit she was being selfless here but she brought it on herself 😡 I agree many forces were at work to keep them apart n a lover may desert her man but how could a wife desert her husband? Thats no excuse on Peehu's part 😡 She should have trusted in Aryan's love for her. She may have left him bcoz she loved her family more than him or bcoz her clan threatened to harm him. But as a wife she had to stand by him as his pillar of support not walk out on him like a coward 🤢 If not for Aryan then atleast when she knew abt her pregnancy she should have come back to him rather than jeopardise hers n her children's lives I do feel bad for her but there's no denying that she wrought it upon herself 😭 Yeap, Peehu is in fault but that doesnt mean she loves Aryan any less and now she loves her unborn above everyone. she did many things wrong and she has to bear the consequences now.

Now that Jeh knows Alina is alive n well bcoz of Abhay hope he realises his he's headed the wrong way in life 😊 Lets hope so too

Coming to Abhiya ☺️ ermmm(clearing throat ☺️) I am surprised my lappy is in one piece 🤣 Mind u it was my office lappy n had it got burnt they would have deducted my salary 😆 Pia had once stolen Abhay's shirt like bheegi billi but can now flaunt it off like a sherni 🤣 Abhay cooking for her was like a quintessential sweet hubby 😳 n man I pity the burnt pancakes n kitchen for having to bear the brunt of Abhiya's passionate assault 🤣 ☺️ The blood exchange part was hot n sensual too ☺️ Well this bit I am afraid I cant go into details 😆 I can say I have lost count of the blushing smileys I have used here ☺️ 😆 Gosh but I'll say one thing for sure. Hats off to u Tanzie 👏 Only u can write such a passionate update n pull it off as an act of love not lust 👏 I skipped so many detail unlike other people still it took the life of me to write this 😛 blood exchange part was most sensual I suppose 😳 I tried to write is as passionate as possible but about kitchen, other furtinure are in danger, mind you 😉 ☺️

Precap sounds exciting 😃 Haaye mere Ram Lakshman ki jodi ko kisi ki nazar na lage 😳 Brilliant work as always Tanzie n please heed the request of many of ur readers n publish a book dear 😃 Will look forward to it. 🤗 Its so long I havent write anything of the two together which i love 😃 I donno if any publisher will agree to publish this Mandy 😆

Originally posted by: --Rashu--

*faint *tanzie me in icu gosh☺️ ☺️ ☺️ poor pancakes 🤣atyachar hua unpe kya galti thi unki 🤣 abhiya wild cats 🤣 tanzie if we reach hospital any day na u will be responsible seriously how can u write such hot updates and after that u can sleep becoz after reading this we are not able to sleep
lol see big comment btw song ha bheege hoth tere Rk ka fav song 🤣