Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148)

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--geny--

@--geny--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#311

res..res..yup..
kitne dino bad kuch shubh kam krne ka mauka mila hai...in my 2nd home.

.love abhiya aka visu...tanzie waiting hn..

...editedu...
amazing update with all mistry...love abhiya .love u lodss tanz.

Edited by sukugeny - 13 years ago

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#312

in 1 wrd ...its PERFECT seriously yaar i luvd it

abhiya r enjoyin dere tym in each othrs arms ... i cn visualize d whole scene ... i m happy 4 j he hs realized wht hd he done , & wnts 2 correct his mistk 4 d sake of his sis all thks 2 alina ...mohini is evil dnt knw wht vil she do ? poor aryan he landed at AR villa at wrong tym d bst prt ws convo between abhay & aryan though dey r nt real bro still understand each othr ...bcoz sum relations needs a luvly hrt wid lots of feelings

Edited by luckdiya - 13 years ago

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#313

How much ever hard I try I always miss out on first post 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

No worries about being late dear 😊 We understand it n ur updates are worth the wait anyways 🤗 Tanzie I have already exhausted all my adjectives dear 😳 But u need to make do with repetition until I learn new words 😉 This was a fantabulous update ⭐️ dear n thanks for uniting the Raichand brothers 😳 They are the charm of this FF Its absolutely fine with me if u follow Julie Plec's trend or Tanzie's trend 😉 Besides where's the fun w/o a suspense element? 😉

The starting bit with Mohini was the most power packed scene in the entire update. Loved the way u have breathed life into Mohini's character 👏 One can feel the tremors at the mere mention of her name 😉 Aryan standing upto her was the show stealer 👏 Bang on dude 👍🏼 Mohini's weak spot seems to be family but I am curious to know more about this 😃 She has left for sure but heaven knows what storm is brewing in that dewilish mind of hers. Seems like Kol is the only one who has any control over her. Waiting for Abhay to meet Kol. BTW is Kol a nice guy here? 🤔

I am glad for Jeh 😊 He finally met his sister n now he knows who killed that creep of a brother of his 😡 Besides he deserved far worse than that for putting Amber through that hell 🤢 I know a vampire n werewolf cant get along but somebody needs to make a start with breaking the norm like Alina rightfully said. I know Abhay n Jeh wont become best buddies but it would be nice to see Jeh understand the diff b/w wats right n wrong n see beyond the age old enimity Hope he helps Alina free Abhay from SC 😳

Abhay once again stormed out but as u said u wont ever seperate Abhiya, so he had to come back to Pia 😉 Loved their moment. Pia feels guilty for being harsh to Aryan but wat else can Pia also do? A newly wed bride wakes up alone the next day n finds her hubby gone n next thing she knows he's gone all It was hard for her too Glad to know Abhiya wont ever get seperated 😳 Gosh Tanzie now u had to sacrifice the furniture for their passionate onslaught? 🤣 My gosh wat have u done? 😲 😆 Bechara Aryan n bechari Amber. It was their fav piece of furniture 😆 Poor Aryan, y does he always get to stuck at the wrong moment in the wrong place? 🤣 Man I was again ☺️ when I was reading that part ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

I love love loved Aryan Abhay reunion It was so emotional. Abhay's outburst was expected. How would he feel when he realised that Aryan didn trust him enough to let him in on his pain? 😭 It was so beautiful 😳 Loved it 🤗 n thank u for that 😊 I felt very bad for Abhay later on though. Tanzie one request if its not too much to ask for Please let Abhiya also have their share of happiness of being parents na please? 😭 I cant bear to see Abhay feel guilty again for having deprived Pia of this happiness Its ur call though entirely 😭 Besides I kinda like vampire human hybrids a lot ever since I read Twilight 😳 though I dont like the franchise 🤢 The only nice thing abt it was Jacob n Renesmee 😊 But whichever route u take story I am sure u'll do a brilliant job as always 👍🏼

Brilliant job once again dear 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#314

brilliant update!

i loved loved loved ssooo much❤️

tanzie that was a superb work...!

i read it thrice before unresing it...

abhiya were soo cute😳

aryan need to put the silencing spell🤣

and mohini ko wapas sone me 3 hrs lage😲🤣 i can see how much scared she is😆😉

Edited by -juhi-lily- - 13 years ago

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#315

arree yaar... why you guys are crying? next time pelhe Reserve karna 🤣

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#316

Superb update.A beautiful display of the strong nd unbrekable bond between siblings.Alina managed to bring her bro towards light...the moments between Abhay nd Aryan showed how important they are for each other.Aryan cried ...awww.Abhiya were too hot nd wild...uff.The wave of pain Abhay felt after saying congo to Aryan 4 his upcoming fatherhood-its gonna go away very soon.The rate Abhiya r going...hybrid baby raichand on its way...LOL

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#317

Res

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Loved the update.

I just wonder, is this the same author in past who sulks over herself when it comes to romantic moments! I cant even figure out how much you have improvised urself!

This was a complete Understand each other chapter, isn't it?

Abhay - Pia(As if they didnt have it previously :P)

Jeh - Alina

Abhay - Aryan

2 loose points connected and protected from Mohini.. Jeh and Aryan..

I wonder who is the X person whom they felt in the house at end but ignored it eventually.

Thanks for the pm

Edited by --Siva-- - 13 years ago

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#318

🤣 poor furniture nd aryans fav furniture 🤣 abhiya loved them finally bros are united ...lovely update btw song

Hoth Tere Mai Ke Pyaale,
Kajrare Naina Tere.
Maathe Par Sinduri Subaha,
Julfho Main Raina Base.
Saansein Yeh Teri Hain,
Dhadkan Bhi Teri Hain.
Jeevan Yeh Tera Hua,
Tere Hi Choone Se.
Tan Man Saja Mera,
Hui Main Parineeta.
Jiya Dole Haule Haule,
Kyon Yeh Dole Janu Na.
Jiya Dole
Kyon Yeh,
Janu Na

😛

Edited by --Rashu-- - 13 years ago

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#319

lovely update tanzie. finally aryan reached abhay and abhay forgave him. thts good.

good to know kol also reached dehradun, but abhay is in manali. hmm... hope he just handles mohini and stops her from doing any harm to peehu and aryan's kids

Edited by ..dishu.. - 13 years ago

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#320

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

I haven't yet posted the full story on blog yet dear.. and for now, i will be continuing here. and if i stop writing in IF completely I will surely share the blog id with everyone 😳 sigh.. i wish everyone would understand creativity for even expecting it would be foolishness so i better leave it 😆
Thanks a lot for the appreciation, really means a lot to me. i wish someday i will be able to publish my own book 😊
I will update very soon and thank you so much hun
- Tanzie 🤗

Hey Tanzie!
I'm glad to see that you are still continuing the ff here.
I always believe that the show must go on.There are many people who try to demotivate others for doing good works.We should continue doing our job without getting affected by anyone else...
I can't tell you how happy I am to see that you are still updating this ff here only.It's a victory of creativity..
I'm waiting very much eagerly for the next update now...
Plz do think about writing a novel and getting it published.
You have got all the talent,writing skills and innovative thinking ability to write a book...
Take care!
Asma

Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 13 years ago

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