New joint ff-: Broken paradise note on pg 81

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@_Chits_

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

prologue mein i guess...24 years ka man is abhay...
22 years ka boy is varun...
21 years ki girl is tara...well i guess...

i wonder aisa kya hua...tara ne kuch kia kya pia ke saath jo abhay use gussa tha...
hehehe...mera mind zyada hi chal raha hai...due to your mysterious prologue...nice...

btw amazing update rosh and romi...wow shuru mein hi abhiya ki marriage...awsome...
continue soon...afteroll next chapter is goin to be so hawt...can't wait...☺️😆

thnx for da pm...😊

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

awsomeee update romi...😊wahooo Abhiya sooo romantic & cute couple...just love it😊⭐️😳

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

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wow!!! That was superb update roshni n romi !!! 👏
Abhaiya got married!! Great!! 😃 The decoration of entire mansion and description of their marriage was very nicely written!! 👍🏼 Liked tara!! She is a sweet girl..!!!😳 n Varun is naughty!! Abhaiya rocked as usual!!! 😳 Nw the journey of their new life begins!!! 😊 Bt i guess this happiness is nt going to stay for long,as the prologue suggests sumthng else!!!
overall wonderful update!!😊
plz continue..and thanx for the pm..😳

Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm

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653787

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Awesome starting Rosh n Romi. The wedding was described beautifully. Abhiya are very much in love right now... I wonder what will happen in the next updates. Tara doesn't seem fond of Varun yet. Cont soon n thx for pm:)

Edited by .tanu. - 13 years ago

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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

lovely update. wow you described everything so beautifully. thanks for the pm

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Awsome update romi nd roshni.

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

awesome update I so loved it.Abhiya were cute,.So in 1st chapter only they got married.No bad.I loved Tara-Pia bonding & Abhay-varun bonding.Plz cont..😳

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621511

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

just amazing up date in first chapter they get married nice not bad love piya and tara bonding thanks for pm

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Ayesha

@Yum_SR

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

very lovely n interesting update..
U both rock R and R...
Abhiya married was awesome...
Loved tara n piya bonding n interesting...abhiya was awesome n so cute,nice,sweet n simply romantic...now wait 4 their SR.. 😳
😳 😳 😳 .. i know u know what i mean to say 😉 ...
But yar beech mai tumnay kyu stop kiya...
Chal koi nayi jaldi update karna warnaaa 🥱 ...
Thanks 4 pm...
N once again update soon..if u get time...

Edited by Aish-Naksh - 13 years ago

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