New joint ff-: Broken paradise note on pg 81

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#571

idiot, foolish abhay raichand... frens i am first time saying i hate abhay raichand nothing but radio always babbering stay away from me par par par agar roshni and romi agar tumne mere abhiya ko fir alag kiya ya varun and tara ko alag karne ki koshish bhi ki to mein kya karungi... yeh tab hi pata chalega u knw *dhamki* by the way like button not working par acha hai... wase acha hoga next update mein pia apne parents ke pas nahi jaye u knw abhay pia ke lia pareshan jo hoga ki kaha gayi...

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Hally

@HallyH

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#572

Poor piya :,( yaar and poor abhay he had to hurt himself and piya to protect her

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#573

amazing update rosh and romi
well done hubby the way u narrate the vikram and abhay sceen and the abhay sid scene too gud just love the dialogues...what abhay become now yar vampire or something else?

romi in your part i cried yar why abhay always want to away from piya and look hurt now him and piya too
poor piya how can she bear that now
like how u describe the inner feelings of abhay
and now who listen the conversatn of varun and tara?
ohh now piya leave the house may be she met with some danger and problem yar
u both did a superb update
cont soon

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ilove99

@ilove99

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#574

amazing gals!!!want piya to move sum1wher else..not to dobrial house...

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Seema

@...Seema...

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#575

v well written update but felt v v bad for poor piya but felt da same for abhay too.they both r suffering a lot.thanx a lot for pm and continue soon.

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Shria

@-JuniorAngel-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#576

Abhay vampire ban Gaya abhay vampire ban gaya😆 ye hi hua hai na if I'm not wrong😆 isle ye vo kha bhi nahi raha hai😛 awesome update girls😉 continu soon😳

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#577

Poor pia...she is heart broken.Update next part soon

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kirti

@Andromeda001

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#578

Amazing update gals!
OMG what is Abhay? Is there any supernatural twist? Abhay n his stay away missions! Why doesnt he tell Piya everything? He doesn't have 2 stoop so low 4 making Piya hate him😡.
I just hate Vikram!😡.a lot of mysteries behind Chandeena too[:O].plz update asap.

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#579

awesuum update girlz! wonderful!👏 feeling bad for both abhay and pia. poor varun, trying to make things right. 😔 bt after reading this updat, I have so many questions ..like why vikram loathes abhay? and why sidh was behaving so strangely with abhay? and who is kabir? is he chandeena's son? 😕 and it also seems that abhay has some supernatural powers.!
plz continue soon..waiting to get all my answers.. 😊 and ya enjoyd abhay-vikram encounter. it was nicely written Roshni ! 👍🏼

and loved the way you described the raichand mansion Romi! 👏 you really wrote it wonderfully dear 👍🏼 plz carry on.
Thanx for the pm and very sorry for commenting late. 😔

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Romita

@Rmuk

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#580

Note
hi guys, just wanted to inform you all that as u all know i am in class 12 and rosh is in class 10 , so our finals/boards have started now. So we won't be able to update any of our works before march last week or most probably april.
Hope u all will understand and plz pray for us so, that our exams goes well.
Thank you
Love u all
Romita&Roshni

Edited by Rmuk - 12 years ago

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