New joint ff-: Broken paradise note on pg 81

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: fabliha
wow!!! so sweet update...👍🏼 pia & tara's part was so cute,👏
so...pia & abhay are getting married😉
lovely update,dear...🤗

Originally posted by: fabliha
wow!!! again an owesome update...👍🏼.abhay varun's part was lovely😉
whole marraige part was amazing...🤗
waiting for the next update...😍

Thank u so much lamu for both the comments. It really means a lot to us. Glad u liked it tara piya and varun abhay bonding. Happy u like the marriage part dear. We will try to update by tonight ok.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: pkyekrox
Sweet!!!Tara-Pia relationship wz cute!! Waiting for ABhIya romance!!
-Gauri

Thank u so much gauri. Glad u liked it. We will try to update by tonight and abhiya romance pakka.

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Romita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: piggi_Babes

woww... nice.. Abhiya get married👏awsumly u guyz describd evyting lovd it yar...👏

awww, thank u so much dear. Yup abhiya married.
Glad u liked it so much it means a lot to us.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: hema_rawat
sory 4 late cmnt
wndrful update romi nd roshni
whole mariage dscriptn was nice
abhiya r married ye ye

Thank u so much dear and it's ok don't be sorry for anything dear. Yea abhiya married. Glad u liked it dear

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story pl\z update soon
it was an ama\zing story to read

Thank u so much dear for ur appreciation.It means a lot to us.We will try to update by tonight.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Guys next part coming soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Chapter 2
part a(written by me)
Raichand mansion
Abhay was carrying piya in his arms towards their room. On their way towards their room, piya was heavily blushing, each step abhay was taking towards their room, piya's heartbeat was increasing, she was feeling a unknown fear, she herself was confused about her own feelings, she knew abhay since her childhood, but at this moment she was feeling like he was an unknown person, an unknown man but still very familiar, she was feeling nervous, confused, happy at the same time. Suddenly her eyes diverted towards the pair of blue intense eyes which was looking at her with all the love, care, passion,and happiness it had. It almost conveyed all the feelings that was inside abhay's heart, which was almost unsaid but still the eyes said everything, which was impossible to express in just few mere words. Piya was lost in abhay's intense gaze, while abhay was lost in the baby brown eyes staring at him with love, shyness and care. He knew that how piya must be feeling now, he knew piya very well inside out, so just looking at her eyes he knew she was how she was feeling. Abhay gave a sweet smile to piya which made piya a bit relaxed as the sight of this cute dimpled smile can make anyone weak at her knees, piya returned the smile back, which made abhay realise that she was a bit relaxed now, meanwhile both were so lost in each other that they didn't realised that they were standing outside their bedroom which was their ultimate destination for this most special and beautiful night of this two soulmates, who were waiting for this moment to come in their life since long.
Both were so lost in each other that they didn't noticed that varun was standing and looking at the two love birds and smiling.
Varun-: (clearing his throat) hmmm, u both want to go inside or have plans to spent the night here, looking at each other.
Varun's voice brought abhiya back to their reality, which they had totally forgotten and was so lost that have failed to notice their surroundings.
Piya blushed more heavily and just looked down while abhay gave a irritating look to varun for spoling their sweet little moment.
Abhay-: Varun, u will never change na.
Varun-: oh, ho easy bro, I was just reminding about ur surroundings see, u are standing outside ur own bedroom and u are carrying bhabi too, so ur arms must be paining too as u used to say how heavy bhabi was...
Before varun could continue more, abhay gave a angry glare as warning to varun which didn't go unnoticed by piya.
piya- (while giving angry glare to abhay) what u thought me heavy and u told varun all these, u monkey let me down now otherwise u will suffer.
abhay-: no piya I didn't say anything, trust me, varun is lying.
Piya-: oh really then why are u shutting him down, let him speak.
Abhay-: piya I was just...
varun interupped,
varun-: bhabhi, I am not lying bhai told me u were very heavy few years before but now u...
piya-: enough u two, abhay let me down now, otherwise, u will suffer the consequences.
Abhay knew piya was angry at him now so he gave varun a I will kill u look, varun understood that it was time for him to tell the truth.
Varun-: actually bhabhi I was just teasing u both, bro didn't tell anything of that sort.
Abhay-: that's like a good boy, piya saw I didn't say anything u scolded me for no reason (pouting)
piya-: U two are just monkeys varun I will see u later and abhay u will get ur punishment later.
varun-: yea bhabhi bro will get his punishment in room na (winked).
Abhay-: varun, u are really becoming naughty now a days, now go in ur room and leave us alone, we both are tired and u are tired too so take rest.
Varun-: yea yea I know u both,are dying to get in but before that bro I need to talk to u bhabhi, can u pls go in, bro just two mins.
Abhay nodded and let piya down, piya went in with a red blushing face and abhay followed varun. Piya entered the room and was surprised to see the room was beautifully decorated. Piya decided to change and get fresh, she opened the wardrobe which was already filled with various dresses as she had shopped beforehand only, piya decided to wear a saree, as she wanted to look like a bride only as this was their special night and she knew abhay loves women in sarees mostly.
on the otherhand, abhay and varun was standing and talking.
varun-: bro best of luck for ur new life, I know I tease u a lot, but this time I just wanted to give u this.
Varun handed abhay a beautiful looking bracelet in which the letter A and P were made.
Abhay-: Thank u so much, I know u love us a lot and all these teasings are just ur way of expressing ur love, this bracelet is really beautiful.
Varun-: really u liked it bro, thank u.
Both hugged each other and after bidding each other good night, abhay entered his bedroom, the bedroom was decorated with silken drapes, candles red roses, white jasmines, and tuberoses. The room was smelling heavenly, due to jasmine lilac smell coming from the petite figure standing infront of the mirror and looking heavenly beautiful in a light pink saree and the person from whom the beautiful smell was coming was none other than piya raichand. Abhay was just staring at piya who was busy in drying her curly hairs with a towel. Piya looked through the mirror and saw abhay standing there and staring at her. Piya's face flushed red. Abhay saw piya looking at him through mirrors and smiling shyly.
Abhay couldn't stop himself more, he closed the door and began to walk towards piya in a trance, he slowly slowly came towards piya and with each step piya's heart skipped a bit. Abhay came close towards her and hugged her from behind and buried his head in her shoulder's nape smelling the most beautiful smell. Piya looked down shyly.
Abhay-: how can someone be so beautiful, that she can take away all my senses.
Piya smiled shyly and turned towards abhay and hugged him, burying her face in abhay's chest. Abhay hugged her back and they stayed like that for few minutes.
Piya (broke the hug and said)-: abhay, this room is so beautifully decorated na.
Abhay-: yea varun has done all this and he gifted me this bracelet too.
Piya-: wow it's so beautiful.
Abhay-: I know piya he is naughty but his heart is very big, ok u wait I will just freshen up and come. (winked)
piya blushed more red and just nodded.
After 10 mins abhay came out in a blue vest and white pajama he saw piya was looking at the moon, Piya turned and looked at the greek god standing infront of her looking extremly handsome and showing his well toned body which can make anyone go insane. Abhay noticed piya staring at him, he kept the towel beside, and started walking towards piya, while piya just backed off when she saw abhay...
Part b below, scroll down.

Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part b(written by me)
...coming towards her with a naughty glint in his eyes. Piya stepped back while abhay stepped forward, soon there was no place for piya to back out as she was standing supporting the wall.
Abhay came more closer and closer, not leaving any space between them, piya was feeling hell nervous but as soon as her eyes met with abhay's which was full with love and passion, no lust or nothing wild, it was only love and care, all her nervousness, fear everything vanished in thin air like nothing was their, instead happiness, love and passion replaced it.
Abhay just gave a small smile and kissed her forehead, eyes, nose and stopped before touching her lips, piya opened her eyes as she was expecting abhay to kiss her, she followed abhay's gaze and saw he was looking towards her lips and she realised he wanted her permission, which increased piya's devotion towards abhay's love more, piya nodded her head in affirmative, which was enough for abhay to understand. He saw piya's pink luscious lips parting a bit as if it wanted him to take it and suck every bit of it.
Abhay took piya's lips and kissed them slowly but passionately, he sucked both the upper and lower lips alternatively and piya too responded with same intensity. Abhay inserted his tongue inside piya's mouth and sucked her tongue and began to explore her mouth, both of their tongue danced in the tune of raw passion and love. As soon as both their lips met and tongues met, both started getting tied up in a more and more passionate kiss.
Abhay began caressing piya's back and waist, teasing with his fingertips. Piya's hands rested on his shoulder and she pressed him against her.
Abhay began to give wet trail of kisses, on piya's shoulders, neckline, nape and all over her exposed body parts. It was enough to ignite the passion and fire which was burning inside them since long, abhay lifted piya and laid her on the bed which was beautifully decorated with red roses and tuberoses. Slowly slowly both started undressing each other, piya began to tremble with excitement, nervousness, and happiness, while abhay kept kissing and sucking each and every curve of piya's body not leaving a single part untouched.
Both were now in mere innerwears, though piya was feeling shy but abhay's pure love and passion has taken away all her shyness and replaced it with fire of passion only. She could see how much abhay wanted her, his eyes only showed pure love and passion, no lust was there, she too wanted the same she wanted to burn herself in the fire of passion and love alongwith abhay, she wanted to give everything she had, she knew abhay was holding back his desires as sge knew how careful abhay was with her.
piya-: abhay take me, I need u, show me all the love and passion u have, don't hold anything back, love me to the level of insanity, destroy me and burn me in ur love, I want u and u only.
Abhay knew both of their desires were at peak and piya's wordings encouraged him more and more, so decided not to waste a single minute and soon both got rid of the ample amount of clothings that were hiding their private parts.
He once again looked at piya as if seeking permission once more, piya's eyes gave him the permission he wanted and he slowly slowly entered her, giving both pleasure and pain at the same time, a single drop of tear escaped from piya's eyes which made abhay cautious but piya explained him it was due to pleasure and happiness, abhay kissed piya's forehead and eyes and sucked that drop of tear and continued making passionate love but at the same time he was careful and cautious, as if he was handling a breakable doll which made piya fall for abhay more and more.
Both spended the night in each other arms, kissing and making love throughout the whole night giving each other immense pleasure and making their soul entwined with each other forever and ever...
Next part below

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Posted: 13 years ago

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part c
(written by roshni)
MORNING

It was fresh morning , abhay slowly opened his eyes and looked for piya but she wasn't beside her , then he got up and saw glowing piya drying her hair infront of mirror , she was wearing a shiny yellow salwar kammez , she wore bangles in her hand and pour a lil pinch of vermillion in her mang and tied a mangal sutra around neck , she saw abhay from mirror adoring her , the continuous stare of abhay was making piya blush . Abhay then got up and hugged piya from back , he was smelling the sweet aroma of honey and jasmine from piya's hair , he loved doing tat !
Abhay : u look beautiful , why didn't u wake me up ?
Piya : u look adorable while u sleep .
Abhay pouted : Accha so the rest of time I don't look adorable , I got u piya very rude
Piya : areee abhay I didn't meant tat .
Abhay : I know what you meant
Piya turned towards abhay and kissed his cheeks : u are my prince charming abhay .
Abhay moved towards her lips : and you are the sunshine of my life .
They were few inches away , abhay's lips were about to kiss the rosy soft lips of piya just then there was a knock on door , which disturb there beautiful moment and irritated the hell out of abhay .
Abhay : must be tat Varun , hamesha galat time pe ata hai !
Piya : don't say anything against him , he is my cute dever
Abhay giving a soft laugh : yeah yeah , u think tat idiot is cute then your as stupid as your dever
Piya : not atleast besharam like u
Abhay coming close to her : want to see more of this besharam raichand
Piya pushing him : no thank u and now quickly wear your shirt he is knocking constantly abhay !
Abhay with an irritating look murmuring sumthing under his breath quickly wore the shirt and opened the door but to his surprise Tara was eagerly standing at the door while Varun was making faces behind her back .
Abhay giving warm smile : hey Salli sahiba ! Wats up huh ? And abhi yaha pe ? Teri DI seh dooor nahi raha Gaya Kya ?
Varun : dekhona bhai this chashmish in morning only came to show her unlucky face now mera whole din kharab jayega .
Tara : oye chupkar and Teri bakwaas bandh kar . DI !!!!
Piya looked at her and become over excited And ran towards her to hug her
Piya : STAR ! Wat u doing here huh ?
Tara and Varun came inside the room and then Varun winked at Tara , Tara got the signal now both were just observing the bed carefully .
Abhay : Kya Dekh rahe ho ?
Varun smiling with smirk : bhai bed Bahut mess main hai nahi ?
Abhay : ha toh ?
Tara : toh Kya lagta hai apne and di khub maze kiyeh
Piya : wat are u trying to say tara ?
Varun : yahi ki apne and bhai kal raat bed kuch sada ho maze kiye
Abhay running toward him : Saale demon
Tara : btw jiju apne T shirt wrong side pehni hai !
Both Tara laughed hardly along with Varun and gave a high five to him. While piya and abhay were all red .
Piya : oye star ! Wat are u doing here btw ?
Tara : came to pick u up
Abhay with a shock : what ?
Tara : ha for the pak phera rasam .
Abhay : no no no no , I am not allowing you to tak her , no more rasams
Tara : tell the same answer to mom , ok ?
Abhay : this is sooo not fair u know
Tara pulling his cheeks : sorry jiju ! Chalo di
Piya looked at the sad face of abhay , she cupped his face : awww , I will be back soon
Abhay looking at other side : u know what , I don't care
Piya giggling : Tara and Varun could u please close your eyes for sometime
Both of them closed there eyes trying to control there laughter . Piya came close to abhay and kissed his cheeks .
Piya : happy ?
Abhay melted looking at the baby brown eyes , he holded piya tightly from waist and slowly moved towards her rosy lips , he kissed them softly .
Abhay : now happy
Piya : I will be back soon .
Abhay : u hav to or else I will
Before abhay could speak piya sealed his lips by giving him kiss .
Piya : don't say that word ok .
Varun clearing his throat : can we open eyes now if your Coochie coo is over
Abhay : shut up Varun and ha open your eyes .
Tara : come on fast di
Piya : Tikh hai chal , bye abhay Varun .
While they were moving outside , tara stopped and turned around
Tara : oops forgot one thing ( she took out a box from her pursue and handing it to abhay ) mother has made alloo paratha for u
Before abhay could take it Varun snatched it from her
Varun : thank u very much
Tara giggled : bhookad !

Then piya went away along with Tara , she enjoyed a lot at the home and also the special attention from her mom dad which irritated Tara but she was missing abhay every single moment , it was afternoon so piya said she wanted to hav a lil sleep . She entered her room and closed the door just then someone hugged her from back , piya was about to shout but abhay kept his hand over her mouth .
Abhay : ssshhh don't shout
Piya totally shocked: what are u doing here abhay ?
Abhay : wasn't able to stay without yaar . I was missing my wife
Piya : mee too btw abhay abhi tak I didn't get my wedding gift
Abhay : u gonna love it piya
He took out some tickets from his pocket .
Abhay : ticket to Paris
Piya with excitement hugged : oh wow , that's great abhay , u r awesome !
Abhay : woh toh main hu and what to do junior raichand ki planing bhi toh karni thi .
Piya hitting him on his chest : u mad abhay
Abhay rubbing his nose with hers : woh bhi main hu !

AFTER 1 AND HALF MONTH .

Raichand mansion, abhiya ka room

Abhay was totally angry and sad while piya was just smiling and giggling seeing him .
Piya : it's ok abhay , it's just 5 days na .
Abhay : no piya 5 days are too long , I can't live without you for tat long , I m not going anywhere .
Piya : no abhay , thats an very important meeting u hav .
Abhay : then u hav to come .
Piya : abhay u know na ruhi ki birthday hai , and she was my best friend in college . I hav to go abhay .
Abhay : so ruhi is more important than me huh ?
Piya : it's not like tat abhay , try to understand .please ?
Abhay holding piya in his arms : I m gonna miss u jaan .
Piya : I m gonna miss u more
Abhay then kissed piya passionately and soon tat passionate kiss turned into a passionate love making night .

2 DAYS LATER

Piya and Tara were sitting in doctors clinic and piya was very nervous while Tara telling her not to worry much then doctor came after examine some reports .
Doctor : congratulation mrs.raichand u are pregnant .
Piya couldn't believe what she just heard , she had huge smile on her face . She is gonna be a mother soon ,soon a symbol of her and abhay's love is going to play in her arms , it was like a dream life couldnt be any better she is already in love with her unborn .
Piya : are u serious doctor ? Is it true ?
Doctor smiled : yes ofcourse .
Tara hugged piya :omg di , I m sooo happy for u , congratulations di , wow I m gonna be a masi soon .
Piya : u don't know how happy I m star .
Tara : jiju would be sooo happy and excited hearing the news na ? Let's call him na di
Piya : no ways star , I will tell him when I meet him , I wanna see his expression . Come soon abhay can't wait to tell u this amazing news...

Ps-: guys we have tried our best to write well, hope u all will like it.

Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Res

Sorry

Loved the abhiya scenes😳
Varun abhay part was sweet😊
Pia is pregnant! yeah😳 Though i thought it was first😆
Continue soon! wanting to read the next part
This time i won't res i always forget😆

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