New joint ff-: Broken paradise note on pg 81

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hema

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

sory 4 late cmnt
wndrful update romi nd roshni
whole mariage dscriptn was nice
abhiya r married ye ye

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: Rmuk
Manasa first of all I can't stop giggling since I have read since ur comment, the way u scold us specially me I love it, lolzzz.Thank u so much yaar. Glad u liked it and thanks for it. Awww, sisterly bonds are always cute and rosh had brought that side of their relationship awesomely and we are happy as u liked it here.Awww, really actually I just imagined their marriage only and wrote it, and some rituals were just added, thank u so much for liking it dear.Mera toh kaam hi hai to put break in wrong time.Accha yaha par bhi next time se no sorry pakka.Next time se no apology pakka and once more thank u for enjoying our writing and understanding our prblm of late updates.We are prepared only, par shyad iske zarorat nahi padegi, lolzzzonce more thank u dear.

Btw manansa now Romi will not say sorry , I will do the needfull , then it's okay to say sorry 🤣🤣

A blast marathon se bhi Bach jaye gay 🤣

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta
awesome update
loved it
Abhiya's wedding was beautifully described
cont soon
thanks or the pm

Thanks a lot pari 😊 We glad tat u liked the abhiya wedding , will continue soon and welcome

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: renu4u
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Roshni and Romi you both duet are perfect while writing joint ff. When I read roshni's part a, I found a bit details explanation, which I could visualize in front of my eyes.

The best dialogue of Roshni's part, that made me laugh was about Tara.

"dunno worry di , main kabhi bhi tapak jaungi at your home to harass you , jiju and that champoo dever of yours"

🤣 champoo dever? 🤣

It reminded me of EHMMBH

Romi, your mandap description was excellent. Apart from that, undying chemistry of abhiya while dancing was well said. Dil ibadat is one of my favorite song that I still miss to hear as the show gone offair. But your that part reminded me of some dance sequel of abhiya. 😳

So overall it was a perfect chapter written by both of you. 😉

Thanku so much renu for such a big and lovely comment , means a lot to us 😃 . Glad u liked both parts . Yeah tara and piya share a lovely bonding indeed and that dialouge well Tara hai hi Aise 😉 And oh yeah just realised it is kinda similar ehmmb , and Romi did fantastic job , glad u liked all Mandap description , it was perfect indeed and abhiya ki chemistry is toh charm na and ha dil ibaadat song is toh made for abhiya I guess. Glad u liked our work 😊

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

wow great story pl\z update soon
it was an ama\zing story to read

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: anjali0111
superb update by both of you romi n roshni!!!!!!!👏

abhiya ki shaadi se hi shuruaat hui hai😃...isse gr8 aur kya ho sakta hai.🥳...they were so cute and adorable!!!😳

liked pia n tara convo...pia calls her star😆

but prologue was so confusing😕...the girl was pia...boy of 22 was varun n another of 24 was abhay i guess...so what happened between them that they were so sad??? i know you both will not answer any question now😆😆...so continue soon

Thanku sooo much for the lovely comment anji 😃 Glad u liked it

I know abhiya ki shaadi seh hi shuhb aarambh hua 😆

Piya and Tara r just like any other sister , cute !😉

Well hmmm u know u r right 👍🏼 And sahi kaha Kya hua Aisa we will not tell easily , u will get know after many upd 😊

Will conti soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: 411996
update was awsm! thax fr pm dear. 1st update me hi abhiya ki shadi wow!!! abhiya ka romance ws super cute! bt m wondering agar abhiya me itna pyaar he to prolg ka kya matlab? asa kya hoga ki abhiya me duriya aa jayegi?
24 years boy is ABHAY RAICHAND!
22 years girl is PIA RAICHAND!
22 years boy is VARUN RAICHAND!
21 years girl is TARA DOBRIYAL!
am ri8 or am ri8?

Thanku sooo much dear 😃 Yep shuhb aarambh abhiya ki shaadi se hi hua 😆 Abhiya to are the januable couple 😳 Ummm u will get to know tat after some 5 to 6 upds

And yep u guessed all right 👍🏼

And by the way this last line am I r8 wali kd Pathak ki haina ? 😆 He is my fav 😊