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Ayesha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

loved it so,piya is alson n abhay love hia mother just loved it..waiting to read more n more..continue sooon n thanks 4 d pm.

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: Rmuk
Amazing starting manasa and indu. Just loved the beautiful combo of both of ur amazing writing skills. U both are just perfect partners, both are fab writer. thanks a lot romi dear..😊glad we could please you...😳 ya,am fortunate to have a fav writer like mansa wth me.😊
Now coming to the update loved the whole update right from the begging where descriptions of piya's current state, pain etc were amazingly written, and in the last where abhay and lisa's unamed bond was shown beautifully. thanks dear. Both abhiya are living a painful life, poor them. Abhay on one side is longing for mothers love and poor piya is so alone that she made a dairy her best friend. ya both are in pain but soon u will see that how different pia is here.
I loved how abhay treated lisa's son and their beautiful bonding, it's just beautifully written and expressed. thanks again dear. glad u liked their bond. its special n i too loved their bonding.😊
Who is this 'he' now??? hmm...u will know soon..
seriously hats off to i both for such a marvellous starting, gr8 work guys, loved it. Update when u both can ok no hurry. thanks. we will b updating soon! 😊
And a big sorry for commenting so late but was a bit busy, but finally commented hehehe

its alright dear.u could take ur time out to comment n that is enough..😊 and thanks for such a big and lovely comment..🤗

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

QUOTE=-juhi-lily-]amazing update dearies!!! thanks a ton juhi. 😳 glad u'r liking our work.😊

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
I'm really liking this Lisa...awesome start dearies :D thanks shreya.😳glad you liked lisa... she is a wonderful person. even i like her too!😊

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: SheDevil
Awesome update I so loved it.Both Abhiya r living painful life.I guess Pia had faced something bad in her past while Abhay's mom hardly show any affection towards him.I love the unnamed bond b/w Lisa & Abhay.Oh Abhay is such a darling.Loved it to the core
Plz cont..😳

thanks shrish.😳 ya both have endured much but both have been tackling their respective situations differently...yes u'r right there..pia's life had been a big battle ground..! u will know soon..glad u liked their bond..yes their bond is special.. 😊thanks again dear..well abhay is always a darling...😳 isn't it?😉

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
amazing update.i really liked lisa .hated abhay's mom.thanx 4 pm

thanks megha..😳 glad u liked lisa, i am sure u will like her more as the story progresses...😊 hmm..abhay's mom isn't a bad hearted person but yes she isn't soft hearted either. she leads life according to her own rules..! u'r welcome..😊

Originally posted by: .rumki.
awesome update

thanks rumki..😊

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
I'm reading this FF for the first time since I haven't read the CS earlier as well. Nice starting girls 👏 thanks a lot for reading tanzie.😊 glad we could please you.😳
Abhay seemed like one gem of a person. yes he is..!! His dad is nice and his mother NO comments!! Abhay is really lonely but i loved his bonding with Lisa. yes their bond is very special and quite different too..! 😊 am sure u will like it more as the story proceeds further...😊
Pia seems like a loner too..waiting to see how they will meet. will update soon...and once again thanks for commenting dear..😳

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

QUOTE=ashu1909]
nice update thanks dear.. 😊

Originally posted by: --Rose--
Wow Its Awesome:-):-) glad you liked it dear..😊

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: luckdiya
superb strting grls
lisa & abhay's bonding ws grt ... jst lik an unnamed relationship

likd d pics 😃 continue soon

@indu: hw r u? hp u fine 😳

Thanks Bhavani Lisa n Abhay share a beautiful bond n the credit for the pics goes to Indu

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu
Amazing update
Lovely start

Thanks Shivani Glad u liked it.

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
nice update!!!!!

love abhay and lisa bonding... but y abhay left medical study in middle...

but i am confusse wid pia and thanks 4 pm... plz update soon

Thanks Trishna Glad u liked it. You will know y Abhay quit his medical course and as for Pia, u will know more abt her in the upcoming updates

Originally posted by: tara.singhania
Wow!! Just wow!...Abhay is so nice and his mom is so evil...poor guy...thnx 4d pm..

Thanks Tara 😃 Abhay is a gem of a person who is very selfless but unfortunately his mom gives his 2 hoots for his goodness as she's concerned only abt status n money 😭

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: spn-abhay
Awesum upate.liked the abhay n lisa bonding.but at last who was him?on the call.

Thanks 😳 As for the guy u will know soon 😉

Originally posted by: Monami_50
Awsm update.But mujhe pm kyun nahi kiya?Next time plz dnt forget to pm

Thanks Monami 😳 Sorry abt the PM Next pukka ok 🤗

Originally posted by: koli97
wahooo sooo lovely😊plzz update nxt asap...thanx 4 pm me😊

Thanks Koli 😳 Will try to update soon.

Originally posted by: meerubzara
amazing update lisa & abhay bonding is great when will abhiya meet? thanks for pm continu soon

Thanks Meeru 😊 Abhiya will meet soon 😃 Will continue soon 😊

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: mahi4ever
Interesting start mandy n indu 😃
thanks 4 pm.

so dis is not supernatural story?? 😳

Thanks Mahi 😊 Nope this is a normal human story 😆

Originally posted by: bellaaa
superb updtae manasa and indu
love the starting and the piya narration
ohh abhay is so nice na
like the bond with his clients and lisa
cont soon

Thanks Beeni Pia's narration was done by Indu n she's an ace at expressing human emotions 😃 Abhay is a humble human being n his bond with Lisa is beautiful as its bonded by humanity 😊 Will try to update soon.

Originally posted by: sdoll
Awesome update...👍🏼

Thanks Aditi

Originally posted by: anjali0111
nice start...liked it very much😊

Thanks Anjali 😊 Glad u liked it

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: FeistySoul
Is there a question of not liking it?
It's superb my dears...

With just the right element of mystery and subtle - confusing human life...

Loved it and I am following (nothing new there eh😆)

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Nidha

Thanks Nidha 😳 It means a lot to us. The credit for the concept goes entirely to Indu n she's an ace when it comes to depicting the subtle human emotions 😳 Glad that u will be reading this 🤗

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987
AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING UPDATE INDU N MANASA 👏
U both r d amazing writers. I m already highly impressed by d ability of Manasa 2 compile so many things with powerful words n emotions in a single update.I wish i cud write like u gals one day. Thanks Kirti 😳 Means a lot to us 😃 U r flattering me now dear 😆 There are many times when I wished I could write like Tanzie, Ayshu or Indu myself 😳
Coming 2 d chapter,d Piya's state of mind n Abhay's family condition were so B'fully described dat each n every emotion entered straight 2 my heart thru my head.So Abhay's mom is a snobbish n superficial kinda lady.4 her external pretences n high class r more imp than her son n hubby while Abhay n his father r simpletons;4 them their relations n small moments,attachments n little joys of life matter more than money or status no matter how much rich they are,they r still attached 2 their roots. (I so much love such persons).

Glad u liked it dear 😳 Indu always adds her own to the update which makes it magical 😊 Abhay's mom is a typical hi fi socialite who sees nothing beyond status n power But he has a gr8 dad though who recognises his son to be the gem he is. For Abhay n his dad the little happiness that life offers is more precious than the materialistic comforts of the world.
Waiting 4 more.plsss update soon n add me 2 ur PM list.
Of course dear, will PM u for sure n thanks a ton for liking it. Means a lot to us 😳

Originally posted by: Shru_Cherry

Amazing ...Love it Indu ... 👏 👏
Plz PM me ...

Thanks Shru 😊

Originally posted by: Aish-Naksh
loved it so,piya is alson n abhay love hia mother just loved it..waiting to read more n more..continue sooon n thanks 4 d pm.

Thanks dear 😊 Will try to update soon 😳

Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago