::SEQUEL BOOK 2::ETERNALLY YOURS::June 2013 pg 55 - Page 12

superb update

superb update!!!!!!!!

so siblings having fun!!!
they all are very smart...they already know abt abhiya being together...gr8!!!
prem is very naughty...his n urvi's relationship is somewhat like abhiya's relationship...cute fights, arguments, jealousy games, urvi getting angry, reluctant to accept love etc...i like them very much.

n chahat is a siren...sexy, seductress, tease...enjoys all the attention of men.😉

abhiya were hot as always😳

abhay still dont know abt this pia being his old pia only???😕

luved it

nice one update
liked the bonding of siblings
jeet is alwayzz like a father to his bro sis
poor prem have a togh time to impress urvi
khushi is so sweet
so karan missing nidhi
cahat is too much na
loved the all siblings
what they were fear for somethg bad?
abhiya alwayzz superb together
lets see wht were more for abhiya
cont soon

Another rocking update!
Urvi's insecurities were realistic
it reflected some of mine.
Loved the PremVi scenes taste!
They are adorable !
Loved it and Love you

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

wow!!! Superb update ayesha!!!👏
I so loved the bonding of the siblings!! 😃⭐️
So prem is having a hard time managing his girlfriend!! 😆 And jeet is as usual serious n responcible,just like his father! 😊 Karan is enjoying the freedom wth nidhi gone! Whereas khushi misses her dad,which geet knw very well!!
eachone was diffrnt frm the other.and i loved the way u handled their characters,maintaining their respective differences!! Preet ,arjun,chahat,angel,arohi,priya,n all were either enjoying or talking their heart out to their closed one! One thing was common, tht all were high on emotion!! Bt wat was the bad feeling they were talking abt?? 🤔 Is it somehow related to piya? 😕
abhiya were as usual mindblowing togethr! 😳They always knw eachother too well,always at eachother's side wen it was needed!! Bt wonder hw long abhay will b able to control himself around piya! 😕 But then its abhay ,who can do anything and everything for her!!

Continue soon dear..awaitng to read the nxt chappy eagerly!! Thanks for the pm..and tak..cre..😊

Its not easy writing about each Hybr id because i have to remember they are all different and keep their characters unique yet have them emotionally emote well with each other. For a siblings bond is the next greatest thing a human can ever hold dear after a Mother and childs bond.

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

amazing update ayesha
kids are enjoying themselves and also having a feeling that somethng bad wil happen...bt wat???!
urvi burning in jealousy😆
JIJA enjoying themselves too...
i hope nidhi accepts preet...
continue soon thank u for pm😊

I know there was a lot to take from this update. I missed out Vedant but i will add him in the next installment and try to shift focus back to Abhiya.