::SEQUEL BOOK 2::ETERNALLY YOURS::June 2013 pg 55 - Page 11

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::Update 18::Underground Lovers::

It was great to see all the scenic view of LA but for Prem it was all too serious. An idea cropped up in his head to join in with some shananigans. There were no adults to reprimand them from having fun and he knew one member who already had the ID cards ready for them to use. Either this or use his persuasive powers on the bouncers. Urvi would have no choice but to lighten up a little. This way they'd all be together yet have their freedom to do as they pleased. Prem would only consider this place if the club scenes were worth coming here or join some elite establishment instead. He'd heard about many raves but the best ones were kept underground run by sorority groups as a guise for some noble cause. Who was he to judge? Humans were unpredictable creatures as he was finding out with Urvi every sexond of the day. She made it crystal clear on wanting to be independent, living on her terms and not rely on him or on any men in general. It was the way she was brought up. Women being the dominant leaders as opposed to having vampire males as heirs to being a born leader. He understood it all too well.
Urvi folded her arms discontent with all the secrecy around this place-Prem this better not be another dumb romantic excursion or i'll kill U!
Prem kept his cool displaying a fraction of suspense-I gave up on trying to woo U. I've learnt U hate surprises being sprung on U the hard way. This is no nonsense kind of fun. Pooja Di will love it.
Pooja already beaming with a huge grin-I've missed this. U are by far my best friend.
Jeet glared at his brother for dragging Pooja back into the party scene-Prem!!!
Prem rubbed his temples then gave a sheepish smirk-What? Its not like she wouldn't have cooked this up. I just led her in the right direction. (cajoling his brother with his eyes) Come on bro U know U want to put your brotherly duties aside for one night.
Pooja ribbed Jeet then scolded him-Don't U dare say a bad word to Prem or you'll have me to deal with.
Urvi and Pooja were both highly amused by the brothers little mini quarrel-Ok if U boys want to spend the rest of the night out here then be my guest but us girls want to get in to join in with the normal people.
Pooja giggled brilliantly at her boyfriends expense linking her arm with his dragging him with her-Baby i haven't been to a rave in ages this would be fun. Live a little for me ok?

Jeet relented after being outnumbered by his siblings. Talk about diplomacy, they said if U can't beat them then join them so this was the approach he had taken up now.

It was easy getting entry into this underground club. This place was packed with bodies heaving to the blasting music the DJ was playing. Neon lights were coming on and off illuminating the arena, then turning it to a dark standstill.

Priya was already headed for the bar ordering some shots for her sisters flirting with the bartender-I'd like 6 shots of tequila please and get one for yourself handsome. (Gives him a playful wink, flashes him a mesmerizing smile bearing her pearly white teeth) Oh and be a love and sort my friends out. (Referring to her brothers and Pooja)
Arohi warned her sister about Chahat-Di she's already taken off with one of the boys.
Priya raised her tequila shot-I should have guessed where there's men there's Chahat. More drinks for us then.
Arohi licked the salt off of her hand then gulped her shot, savouring the alcohol then finally took a bite out of the lemon pulling a face at the sudden burst of tangy eruption in her mouth-Wow! Keep bringing them in. Wooo!!!!
Khushi kept staring at her shot refusing to take a sip forget gulp the liquid down-Di i don't want it.
Angel took her drink out of her hand and swigged it down-All gone. I know U don't like this at all but we all need to get exposed to this lifestyle at some point right? You'll always be a good girl Khushi but its good to handle whatever is thrown at U and better yet do it with family around U so they can catch U when U fall.
Geet passed a stern look at Angel-Khushi, is missing Dad.
Khushi nodded admitting the truth-We've never been, i mean i've never been away from him this long.
Angel countered feeling a little perturbed by her sisters closeness to their Dad-Its only been a few days Khushi. Its time to flee the nest so to speak. U know Dad needs to get acquainted with Mum and the only way to do this is by giving them as much space as possible.
Khushi agreed with her sister-I know (Sounding a little poised now) Its just difficult Ok. I can't help it.
Geet embraced her sister to make her feel better-Well maybe this will cheer U up. I know how U love Rihanna so we can dance together in a pack. What do U say huh? Sisters forever!
Karan crept from behind already feeling Khushi's sadness getting her off her feet-Hey Chutki U can hang with me for the night . Now that Nidhi's gone with her family to Europe i can do with some cheering up myself (Pouts at Khushi then gives her those cute puppy dog eyes of his making Khushi laugh) That's like the Khushi i know.
Khushi on her feet now joins her brother swaying to "Where have U been?" by Rihanna then to a Coldplay featuring Rihanna track, Princess of China-Do U think they're going to get back together permanently? U know Dad and...
Karan nodded with a smirk-I can't believe they think they have us fooled. I mean who are they kidding? Nothing gets passed us and we know Dad has a very arrogant, superciloous and a tinge of egotistical element to him when it comes to Mom and she gives as good as she gets but their chemistry is like a supernova effect. We should just let them think we don't know so they can continue with their failed attempt at covering their relationship.
Khushi's mood was lifted hoping this all worked out for them all wrapping her arms around her brother-U did the right thing by letting Nidhi go. Otherwise you both would have resented this change. She has dreams and so do we. Our first priority is getting our family back on track. As soon as Nidhi comes back U can tell her the full truth. She deserves to know who we are. Human or not its not right to keep her in the dark now.
Karan always knew out of his family Khushi was the wisest of them all-I didn't want her to leave this soon. I should have told her before she left but i couldn't. I wanted her to keep her normal life just this little bit longer. U are too wise for your own good.
Khushi pursed her lips and gave an exasperated mocking look-U only just found this out. (Giggles half heartily) Nidhi will come back to U. Give each other this time apart. U know its love when it comes back to U again. Nidhi loves U but she's human. She is allowed to make her own choices. I understand what U mean about her having a normal life a little longer. U don't want to burden her with what baggage we have to carry on with us huh?
Karan twirled his sister around ducking her echoed back-Yeah pretty much sums up the Raichand family doesn't it?
Khushi gave her brother a tight bear hug her languid eyes now changing colours-We will all be Ok. I know this. Just a matter of time. Whatever U do tonight don't drink OK we need a few sober Raichands around.

Chahat was busy playing the field with several bachelors waiting to dance with her. It made her feel powerful, flattered by how she was percieved by her admiring suitors but it did nothing for her other than swell her pride. She'd gotten many free drinks from them. Most of the conversation generated from these men were a little bland was an understatement but all she wanted was a good time. Something was missing, then like clockwork a little of what she had expected had happened. A fight brewing over her was just ridiculous. It propelled her to the edge of insanity almost because one thing she hated above all was men behaving like boys.

Chahat felt a hand on her arm add pressure so she used her powers to make this brute get the hell off of her in a chided tone-If U want to live i'd remove your filthy hands off of me now.
Shawn took his hands away from her clamored-U think prancing around her like a ...
Chahat subdued her anger and gave him a punch-U don't get away calling Chahat names. Eat dirt sucker. By the way your moves are so last year think of something new to say to a girl.
Preet took his sister away from the heated situation scolding her-U know very well this could have all been averted. I mean the guys are all incessantly fixated by U. They find U exquisite and U are using this as amusement. We can't risk exposure of getting into fights. If Dad found out he'll wring our necks.
Chahat made no efforts toi even show remorse-Why should i huh? They just want fun and so do i. Its not my fault they don't know when enough is enough. I've had a few and got carried away. It won't happen again.
Preet took her word for it sighing-Good!
Chahat leaned against her brother's chest-Bhai. I can't help but feel like something bad...
Preet understood for this was a feeling they were all getting-I know. Just don't say anything out loud ok. Khushi is already a little emotional.
Chahat nodded-Did U meet anyone here?
Preet scratched his head before answering watching a raven haired girl go off-Not really. So U want to move here or go to some place else?
Chahat finished-I am keeping my options open.

Arjun was bopping cheerfully with a red head thoroughly enjoying (We run the night) Havana featuring Pit Bull holding her round the waist-So U come here reglarly?
Katyana gave him a dazzling smile answering-When i have frees. Exams are almost over so we take our frustrations out here. I've never seen U here before.
Arjun shared some truth-I am new here. I might see U around then if i decide this is where i want to be.
Katyana perplexed by this stranger-So this town is new to U? I thought U are... Wait!!! R U like a drifter or something like that huh? (Gives a wide smile) Well your in luck. This town is swarmed by strangers. Means U get lost in the crwod. If U ever want a place where nodoy cares about who U are unless U have a lot of money then this is the place to be. Dreams are made here and broken here.
Arjun frowned pensvely-Dreams???
Katyana replied back-I want to be an actress, everybody wants to be a somebody. So are U here on your own?
Arjun staring without cognizance-I have my extended family all here ready to take over so to speak. (Changes the topic) U are a good dancer.
Katya beamed enchanted by this cute hunk

Prem was surrounded by his own harem of girls he'd been associated with while trying to get Urvi to loosen up. For some reason she had always wanted to refrain from getting herself too attached to human contact. Prem could only persevere in his bid to win over Urvi's doubts. Prem was getting the desired outcome he wanted from his stubborn girlfriend. As much as Urvi hated intimacy the one thing she hated more than this was another girl's arms around him. He knew he'd pay for it later on but it was worth it just to get a little attention. He couldn't resist moving to the beats of (Lets go) by Calvin Harris featuring Neyo. The track was so catchy it would be a sin not to go with his girls. He rocked with them waving their hands in the air and moving around them. Urvi had this murderous look in her eyes but Prem ignored her. Prem was basking in the moment whispering in each girls ear which only doused more fuel to Urvi's rage.

Prem whisked one of the girls away outback in front of Urvi just so she would trail behind them. If this idiosyncratic move signed his death warrant at Urvi's hands then its the price he'd pay-Its been a long time since i've had this much fun. 3 months to be exact.
Siobhan pondered on what this man had over her inquiring-3 months wow, this is a long time. So the girl U were trying to infuriate is your...
Prem admitted in all honesty-Girlfriend. What made U come out here with me?
Siabhan flicked her hair back curling her lips into a smile-U could say i am enamoured by U. I am just getting over a break up. I know what its like to want someone U love back. She's lucky if this is what you've had to resort to. Is she like stalking U?
Prem knew Urvi too well sensing she was here-Yeah. Just play along.
Siobhan helped Prem-Why is it all the good guys are always taken huh? Maybe your girlfriend needs to see what a catch U are before U slip under her radar. (Gets close to Prem) If U were my boyfriend i'd want to spend every waking second with U and blow caution to the wind. I'd forget all of my fears and accept the unexpected.
Prem not one to blow his own trumpet joined in-I've tried just about everything but...Maybe i am not worthy of her love. Its not her fault she is so insecure. Maybe i am the reason she feels...(Touches her cheek with affection) U have great eyes U know that and a great heart.
Siobhan kissed Prems cheek-And U are quite a charmer but i better leave before there really is a murder and we don't want this place getting shut. If U ever find yourself being single here's my number.

Urvi saw Prem turn around. She was upset with him but mostly herself for being so withdrawn from him-U should have just left with her. I am not for U Prem. I told U i am not emotionally ready for anything serious. I take life as a joke. Your so perfect and i'm so flawed.
Prem ushered Urvi to a bench outside-Nobody is born perfect Urvi. I have traits in me i don't like albeit i won't admit them because i would rather concentrate on the traits i do have and make it my strength while my flaws i keep to keep me grounded.
Urvi cried helplessly-I can't compete. Its not me. I am not a beautiful...
Prem hushed Urvi-No U are not beautiful but U are my ideal. U are simply the only girl i would ever love because U are unique and beautiful in my eyes. U make me laugh, U make me insane, U make me angry, U make me feel is what i admire most.
Urvi felt the emphasis on every compliment he gave her sounding a little unsure-Prem i know how other girls want U. If i lost U i'd be alone. I can feel something rising. Something bad and its going to tear us apart.
Prem looked up in the sky pointing at the moon-We'll always have this moment. The moon always fits our thumb. (He takes Urvi's hands in his and shows her) See.
Urvi cheered up a little-How did U do this?
Prem brushed the question aside-Something i just know. No matter which part of the world we are in, if we are together or not we'll always have this.
Urvi wiped her tears-I do love U alot.
Prem just wanted to hear her say it-I know U do but sometimes its just nice hearing U say it. With U i can't read your mind and when U are distant i don't know how to react.
Urvi held Prems hand-You're not going to get all romantic and start singing are U?
Prem took Urvi in his arms-If it gets U to communicate with me even if U have to threaten me with violence.
Urvi choked out a laugh-Your crazy.
Prem kiss Urvi and admitted-I know i come from a crazy family remember.

Nonetheless over at the Raichand Villa Abhay had settled Pia in his room. She was in her nightgown taking a keen interest in some family photos of the teens. Abhay had brought up a mug of hot chocolate with marshmallows on top. Pia's hand traced over Abhay's photo with his mother and Father.

Abhay motioned close to Pia putting down her mug on the table stand-We took this some 20 years ago. They are still as serious as ever. They probably miss the kids a great deal.
Pia felt Abhay's hands around her waist. Whenever he touched her she felt like she was in heaven-I'd love to meet them. U must miss them a lot.
Abhay kissed Pia's forehead-I do. They are the only parents i know. They say blood is thicker than water but i am linked by a sire bond. This is much stronger than i can recall. I can barely remember who my birth parents were. They died when i was a boy.
Pia turned to face Abhay. His eyes were filled with a range of emotions-You've raised your kids well. I can see the impact your parents have had in U.
Abhay saw Pia's concern for him-I'm over the past Pia. From now on its all about our future. Now one of us needs to get some sleep.
Pia gave Abhay a naughty little grin-I'm not tired yet. I need my bedtime story. I need a special vampire to put me to sleep and give me something nice to dream about.
Abhay was temped by Pia all of the time but spending a few days with her in his room was proving a little difficult-I say first U drink the hot drink and then i'll decide...
Pia pouted her lips holding him hostage in her arms-Hey what's wrong about staying the night. U manged the past 2 nights OK.
Abhay mumbled inhaling Pia's sweet scent-This is because i have been busy with sending e-mails to my kids. I have my own duties to tend to.
Pia hated Abhay's duties as a vampire leader. It took him away from her-I know U have responsibilities. (Pretends to yawn) U also have a girlfriend who want to spend every waking moment with her Vampire lover.

Abhay handed her the drink to shut her up. He loved watching her eat or drink but her suggestive groans sometimes had a very strong effect on his hormones.

Pia gave out a giggle-U so want me.
Abhay chuckled listening to Pia-Keep dreaming Witch!!! (Points to Pia's lips) U have white froth at the top of your lips.
Pia licked her lips missing the marl so Abhay cleaned it for her-You're so domesticated. (Her mugs finished) All gone. Playtime.

Abhay found Pia's hands encircle his neck, stroking the mane of his air and her eyes had locked his. Then a soft kiss first one on each cheek then her lips met his in an all consuming passion eventually laying her on the bed. Abhay had to be careful around Pia. She was still fragile and if anything went wrong then Pia would be a frmer shadow of herself. Her kisses were deadly. Abhay knew he was going to have to find some distance between them on a physical level. Controlling his desires for her was a fight he'd feared he'd lose. They continued with their make out session for a good hour. Abhay held Pia in his arms stroking her to sleep. His Pia was on the cusp of something sinister and it was going to cost somebody something very dear. Abhay had monitored Pa's own sanity with her powers fluctuating.
Edited by matwamango - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!!! Superb update ayesha!!!👏
I so loved the bonding of the siblings!! 😃⭐️
So prem is having a hard time managing his girlfriend!! 😆 And jeet is as usual serious n responcible,just like his father! 😊 Karan is enjoying the freedom wth nidhi gone! Whereas khushi misses her dad,which geet knw very well!!
eachone was diffrnt frm the other.and i loved the way u handled their characters,maintaining their respective differences!! Preet ,arjun,chahat,angel,arohi,priya,n all were either enjoying or talking their heart out to their closed one! One thing was common, tht all were high on emotion!! Bt wat was the bad feeling they were talking abt?? 🤔 Is it somehow related to piya? 😕
abhiya were as usual mindblowing togethr! 😳They always knw eachother too well,always at eachother's side wen it was needed!! Bt wonder hw long abhay will b able to control himself around piya! 😕 But then its abhay ,who can do anything and everything for her!!

Continue soon dear..awaitng to read the nxt chappy eagerly!! Thanks for the pm..and tak..cre..😊
Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update ayesha
kids are enjoying themselves and also having a feeling that somethng bad wil happen...bt wat???!
urvi burning in jealousy😆
JIJA enjoying themselves too...
i hope nidhi accepts preet...
continue soon thank u for pm😊
Edited by -juhi-lily- - 13 years ago
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First n foremost I am sorry Ayshu 😭 But I had been busy for the past few days n I wanted to read this at leisure savoring every minute detail 😊 It was awesome. Loved the hybrids, all of them but u know my favs are 😉 Waiting to see Khushi's soulmate n boy is Chahat wild? 😲 Arohi is cute too 😃 Jeet n Prem r my eternal fav 😍 I love the way Prem Urvi bond has evolved 😳 Its very beautiful. Glad Jeet is loosening up a bit bcoz of Pooja 😊. Abhiya as usual were hot but not as hot as they were before in Book 2 of prequel 😉 Y is Abhay distancing himself from her? 😛 I wonder what is waiting for them Even the hybrids as well as Abhay can sense something sinister headed their way but please dont seperate Abhiya 😭 Thanks for such a lovely update 🤗

Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved seeing pia getting jealous
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome post...pia jealous...i like it...thank u for the pm dear...
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nice update. Urvi makes a confession finally! Good to read abhiya making progress
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Posted: 13 years ago
Marvellous. I loved the sibling interaction and that line 'where there's men, there's chahat' lol.
And i wonder how long abhay can hold out against Pia... :p
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Posted: 13 years ago
i likd jeet lik father lik son... dey r enjoying dere freedom😆😆& abhiya r sooo swt...he is maintaining distance 4m her...😳
wonderful update 👏👏👏
thx 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update ayshadi...itne logon ke bare main kaise likhti ho yr...awesm...loved stuburn pia...

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