A rough Start ch3 pg 13 / 12 june

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Hello every one I m back 😃 with my new story . this idea is not totally mine . i m inspire from my sis Punjabi literature book . there is writer Who write about tradition when my sis making notes i got idea so i think make new story on abhiya !!!!! hope you guys like it !! I ll write some word in hindi also here !!!!


prologue

Three months ago, something happened that came to change Pia's life forever. She is an outcast, hated by everyone, loved by no one. She wants nothing more than to end her life and she almost gets her wish fulfilled when she gets hit by a shiny Volvo. She is left with serious injuries and the only thing keeping her alive is the person who hit her...





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The screeching noise is what made me turn around. And it was the sight of the oncoming car that made me freeze in place. I couldn't find it in me to move, and although the car seemed to be moving in slow-motion, and I could make out every little detail of the shiny Volvo's front, I still stood my ground, and watched it come. I could have made it if I wanted too.

But the truth is that I didn't want to.

You would think that the collision would have hurt, that I would have screamed in pain as I hit the windshield with a deafening crash, before rolling down on the ground and landing under the moving car. But no. It didn't hurt, and I didn't scream.

I didn't have time to scream.

I was unconscious long before the car stopped dead.

The only sound was the scream from the driver'

Characters...
Dobrial...

Pia...

Maithali... pia mother here 😆

Abhainder... pia father but he does not look like abhay he is different here ...😆

Raichand ...

Abhay...

Chand ... he is doctor here ...

Haseena ...

Sid... Abhay is brother ...

Alina ...sid GF...

Kabir... Alina brother ...
Misha ...Kabir Gf...
Khurana ...

Jey Khurana ... pia childhood friend ...

Gurav Khurana ... Jey father and also Dobrial family Friend ...
There is another Character Also . i ll Introduce them Later

If u like it Then Press The like button Plzzz . let me Know what you guys think.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Index...

ch 1 Pg 05
ch 2 pg 10
ch 3 pg 13
Edited by abhiyan_soni - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb!! Sandy
u r bck wid bang...
luvd it
continue plz plz plz
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what a bomb blast...loved it..
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Nice Character sketch and prolougue😊

Do continue Plz😳
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Oi sandy bariya hai continue dear
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Awesome start sandy.Tune mujhe PM kyun nhi kiya.I harly comes here now.Pm me😳
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superb start & grt cs.
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u will ofcourse come up with diff...looking frwrd.do cont.

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