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hema

@hema_rawat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#721

awsm update tanu,
so sid is wizard, who is d hooded lady nd what dey want 4rm pia?nd why she mentn abt kabir's death?

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rockstarashu

@rockstarashu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#722

nice update tanu.finallly abhay got potion but so easily cant believe.piya is super stalker 🤣never leaves chance.

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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#723

Awesome update

Piya wants to quite the job oh no

What does that hoodied figure n Sid want from piya

Is that hoodied figure Alina or Metz

Is Alina playing double game

Will abhay cheat Alina?

Abhay coundn't believe love

He saved piya yippie wanted to through her out good to see the little bit of humanity in him n he respect ppl's graves

Update soon

Thanks 4 pm

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dreamyjennice

@dreamyjennice

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#724

Amazingly written tanu...I Kew this did was fishy...and the girl he was talking to is maithili...I am sure...piya the detective...kabhi nahi badlegi...but y does Sid want piya...is piya a supernatural tool...

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653787

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Posted: 12 years ago

#725

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
grt update tanu👏 So sid is a wizard...who was that woman???what do they want frm pia...potion mil gaya abhay ko...ab aage...

thanks juhi... yeah sid is a wizard and the woman will be revealed later... at the moment they want piya to fall in love with sid but their detailed motive will come out later

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653787

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Posted: 12 years ago

#726

Originally posted by: Monami_50
Awsm update.Sid is a wizard...oh my.Who was that woman with him?Abhay found the potion...lets see what happens next

thanks mona... the identity of the woman will be revealed later... yeah let's see:)

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653787

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Posted: 12 years ago

#727

Originally posted by: mahi4ever
Amazing update tanu,
so Sid is wizard n i think dat girl is maithli 😉
loved da way abhay cared 4 piya even though hez angry over her
panchi 😆 bechari 🤣
i think piya vil find something 4m kabir's diary 😃

thank you... let's see if you're right... yeah deep down abhay does care for piya... haan panchi bechari 😆 you could be right:)

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653787

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Posted: 12 years ago

#728

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
omggg their is still lot of humanity left in abhay hope our angel soon dig dat out from him... are yeh kya yeh sid to chudala nikla mujhe phele se shakh tha isme kuch problem hai par yeh pia ke piche kyo pada hai...and ya dat potion part u take from show is better dan show u knw satisfactory... hope abhay understand d meaning of luv and panchi got her family back...

yeah there is but abhay doesn't admit it... yes he's a chudaila 🤣 you will find out his detailed motive later... i'm glad it is... let's see what happens:)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#729

Originally posted by: mandy1024
This was the best update of this FF Tanu 👏 I loved it. Who said ur not good at describing things? U have done it well n as for incorporating a sequence from the show into ur FF its perfectly all right At some point in time many FF writers would hae done it for their stories anyways 😳

Its good to see Abhay still has a part of humanity intact 😳 n he knows the importance of not only life but also death. Loved this part in particular:

He never saved a human life before because he believed there were things much worse than death. Living a cursed life himself, he thought it was a blessing to die and go on.

It was nice to see him care for Pia though at one point the monster in him took over n he wanted to throw her out but his humanity won 👏 BTW was that woman Alina after all? Y do I feel she is playing a double game with Sid n Abhay? 😕 Also y was Sid punished? Is he a warlock? n y shd he fall in love with Pia or make her? 😕 The part abt Kabir's diary was heartbreaking 🥺 Poor Misha 😭 Even the part where Alina threatened Panchi was written well 😊

Pia decided to follow Abhay? 😆 I swear this gal will never get rid of her detectivegiri 🤣 So Panchi will reveal the secret to Abhay? I guess Alina n Sid might also be there as well U have ended it at a cliffhanger n please continue soon dear 😳 Splendid update 👏

Thanks a lot mandy. I always feel the descriptions i write are too brief 😳

Yeah Abhay does have humanity and that will be shown now... glad you liked that part.

At one point he was about to become a monster but when he looked at her he couldn't do it. Who that woman was will be revealed later. Yeah Sid is a warlock and he suffered punishment for misusing his powers. Why Piya needs to fall in love with him will also be revealed later.

Yes Piya has to become detective and that's how she ends up with Abhay 😆 Panchi will tell Abhay everything she knows. I will try to. Thank you:)