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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#701

grt update tanu👏 So sid is a wizard...who was that woman???what do they want frm pia...potion mil gaya abhay ko...ab aage...

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

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Posted: 13 years ago

#702

Awsm update.Sid is a wizard...oh my.Who was that woman with him?Abhay found the potion...lets see what happens next

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rida mahveen

@mahi4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#703

Amazing update tanu,

so Sid is wizard n i think dat girl is maithli 😉

loved da way abhay cared 4 piya even though hez angry over her

panchi 😆 bechari 🤣

i think piya vil find something 4m kabir's diary 😃

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#704

omggg their is still lot of humanity left in abhay hope our angel soon dig dat out from him... are yeh kya yeh sid to chudala nikla mujhe phele se shakh tha isme kuch problem hai par yeh pia ke piche kyo pada hai...and ya dat potion part u take from show is better dan show u knw satisfactory... hope abhay understand d meaning of luv and panchi got her family back...

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#705

This was the best update of this FF Tanu 👏 I loved it. Who said ur not good at describing things? U have done it well n as for incorporating a sequence from the show into ur FF its perfectly all right At some point in time many FF writers would hae done it for their stories anyways 😳

Its good to see Abhay still has a part of humanity intact 😳 n he knows the importance of not only life but also death. Loved this part in particular:

He never saved a human life before because he believed there were things much worse than death. Living a cursed life himself, he thought it was a blessing to die and go on.

It was nice to see him care for Pia though at one point the monster in him took over n he wanted to throw her out but his humanity won 👏 BTW was that woman Alina after all? Y do I feel she is playing a double game with Sid n Abhay? 😕 Also y was Sid punished? Is he a warlock? n y shd he fall in love with Pia or make her? 😕 The part abt Kabir's diary was heartbreaking 🥺 Poor Misha 😭 Even the part where Alina threatened Panchi was written well 😊

Pia decided to follow Abhay? 😆 I swear this gal will never get rid of her detectivegiri 🤣 So Panchi will reveal the secret to Abhay? I guess Alina n Sid might also be there as well U have ended it at a cliffhanger n please continue soon dear 😳 Splendid update 👏

Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#706

wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story
thanks for the pm

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#707

mera lile button pagal ho gaya hai...

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#708

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first of all what did u say tanu.. tht u are nt gud at giving descriptions??!!! but you knw wat I felt? the more i went through the update the more I felt that everything whether its emotions,abhay's denial,conspiracy and the potion ...each part was wonderfully described!!! though the depictions were brief but apt...just perfect!!!👍🏼 so according to me this one was beautifully written piece of work!!! 👏

now coming to the update... I really loved the way u describd abhay's feelings...there was confusion,care,rage,worry and ofcourse love...which abhay was unable to undrstand...!!! Bt which I am sure he will sooner or later!😳 on the other hand pia was surprisd on seeing abhay saving her!! bt wen she wokeup it doesnt took her long to realise dat no matter how bad abhay is ,he is nt evil...and I so so loved this part tanu...❤️ because pia judged wth wat she saw n felt and nt wat her mind said!! 😊 and ths entire part was very beautiful!! ⭐️
nw abt the next part..hm..alina is very shrewd!! she is double crossing han..? I bet she wud through sid in no tym if she feels his existenc to b threatening!!! and sid..he is just using poor pia..bt why I feel he myt hav already gt a softcorner fr her!! I cud b wrng though!! and panchi had to surrender at alina's demands! bt she cudnt trust her!
and dis pia..she followd abhay..i cnt belev!!😆 she was going to leave hs job bt wen she heard hm leaving she cudnt resist her urge to knw what cn b mre important to hm than hs work..nd so she startd to do wat she always does!! 😆 lol nt nly abhay anyothr persn wud hav got irritatd!! and abhay toh had reasons to be!!
nw the last part- hmm..so the grave gt opend by the power of love!! And I lovd it...tht u included dis love thing!😊 it is surely powerfull no doubt and loved dat u thot of including it here!! great work! 👏 and ya I also lovd that part where abhay never saved any humans before as he thot a peacefu n natural death was way better than an eternal cursed life..and this helds such a deep meaning!! bravo!!! 👏 and last bt nt the least..lovd that little part where abhay askd if he had to open a grave n got relievd wen he heard it was empty,coz he wud never think of taking sumone away frm his peaceful abode..and that too inspite of him being a rude,heartless,arrogant Vampire!!! which agains proves that there is still sum humanity left n him sumwhere deep down!!! wonderfull!! ⭐️
nw plz update asap..cnt wait for the next part and thanks for the pm dear..😊

Edited by lost_in_love - 12 years ago