Originally posted by: lost_in_love
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first of all what did u say tanu.. tht u are nt gud at giving descriptions??!!! but you knw wat I felt? the more i went through the update the more I felt that everything whether its emotions,abhay's denial,conspiracy and the potion ...each part was wonderfully described!!! though the depictions were brief but apt...just perfect!!!👍🏼 so according to me this one was beautifully written piece of work!!! 👏
now coming to the update... I really loved the way u describd abhay's feelings...there was confusion,care,rage,worry and ofcourse love...which abhay was unable to undrstand...!!! Bt which I am sure he will sooner or later!😳 on the other hand pia was surprisd on seeing abhay saving her!! bt wen she wokeup it doesnt took her long to realise dat no matter how bad abhay is ,he is nt evil...and I so so loved this part tanu...❤️ because pia judged wth wat she saw n felt and nt wat her mind said!! 😊 and ths entire part was very beautiful!! ⭐️
nw abt the next part..hm..alina is very shrewd!! she is double crossing han..? I bet she wud through sid in no tym if she feels his existenc to b threatening!!! and sid..he is just using poor pia..bt why I feel he myt hav already gt a softcorner fr her!! I cud b wrng though!! and panchi had to surrender at alina's demands! bt she cudnt trust her!
and dis pia..she followd abhay..i cnt belev!!😆 she was going to leave hs job bt wen she heard hm leaving she cudnt resist her urge to knw what cn b mre important to hm than hs work..nd so she startd to do wat she always does!! 😆 lol nt nly abhay anyothr persn wud hav got irritatd!! and abhay toh had reasons to be!!
nw the last part- hmm..so the grave gt opend by the power of love!! And I lovd it...tht u included dis love thing!😊 it is surely powerfull no doubt and loved dat u thot of including it here!! great work! 👏 and ya I also lovd that part where abhay never saved any humans before as he thot a peacefu n natural death was way better than an eternal cursed life..and this helds such a deep meaning!! bravo!!! 👏 and last bt nt the least..lovd that little part where abhay askd if he had to open a grave n got relievd wen he heard it was empty,coz he wud never think of taking sumone away frm his peaceful abode..and that too inspite of him being a rude,heartless,arrogant Vampire!!! which agains proves that there is still sum humanity left n him sumwhere deep down!!! wonderfull!! ⭐️
nw plz update asap..cnt wait for the next part and thanks for the pm dear..😊
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