AbhIya FF : It's the end's beginning. (PAGE 60 ).

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

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magnificient update koyel !! 👏
you hv potrayed pia's father's emotions,inner turmoil beautifuly!!!
And dis line 'flash of those impossibly paranormal eyes...', was just fav!!

Once again a terrific update!!! 👏
continue soon...thanx 4 pm..
Eagerly luking forward to the nxt part...
Tk..cre..

--indu

Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago

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Nabakov_Musings

@Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
vry beautiful update koyal i m jst mesmerized by ur writting how beautifully u hav described their emotions👏 Continue soon thanx for pm😊

thank you honey , that was very sweet of you. 😳

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Nabakov_Musings

@Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
Brilliant update koyel

thanks a lot , Sniggy , i am glad you liked it. 😳

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Nabakov_Musings

@Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: shivanipandit29
Amazing update koyal i really have no words to describe how perfect you write and how perfectly you decribe things its really amazing. never read a dsecription of a Father and that deep . Gosh you are terriffic
you are one of my favorites writers
loved it
thanks for the pm.

god shivani , thank you so so much..i don't write much but it's your and others appreciation thats makes me boosted up..thank you so so much. 🤗

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Nabakov_Musings

@Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
superb update
loved the father daughter relationship...

thanks for pm

thanks a lot and i hope you like them further.

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Nabakov_Musings

@Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: Rmuk
Awesome update dear.
so, piya's father is really hard from outside but had a soft corner inside.
lovely update dear and pls continue soon. Thanks for the pm.

thank you , and i am glad you liked her father..its not easy to really understand him but i am glad you guys did.

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Anj01

@Anj_01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

superb update!!!!👏

liked it very much
you beautifully portrayed what kind of father-daughter relationship kishore n pia shared👏...so kishore does loves her but dont want to show it.😒...n poor pia😭...feeling bad for her.😭...never got love n care which normally children get from parents.
hope abhay will be able to fill that void in her life n pia will do the same in his life😍😍...i know u r not going to make it simple😆...as both character r so complex🤔...but its bound to happen😉 ,,,,,waiting for that time.😍😍...as for now...eagerly waiting for abhiya's face to face meeting. 😍

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Nabakov_Musings

@Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: lost_in_love
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magnificient update koyel !! 👏
you hv potrayed pia's father's emotions,inner turmoil beautifuly!!!
And dis line 'flash of those impossibly paranormal eyes...', was just fav!!

Once again a terrific update!!! 👏
continue soon...thanx 4 pm..
Eagerly luking forward to the nxt part...
Tk..cre..

--indu

Aww indu thank you so much! 🤗 i am so happy you felt Kishor's turmoil. 😳 yes the next part will have AbhIya's first meet , and Mrignayana's entry .😉

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Nabakov_Musings

@Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: anjali0111
superb update!!!!👏

liked it very much
you beautifully portrayed what kind of father-daughter relationship kishore n pia shared👏...so kishore does loves her but dont want to show it.😒...n poor pia😭...feeling bad for her.😭...never got love n care which normally children get from parents.
hope abhay will be able to fill that void in her life n pia will do the same in his life😍😍...i know u r not going to make it simple😆...as both character r so complex🤔...but its bound to happen😉 ,,,,,waiting for that time.😍😍...as for now...eagerly waiting for abhiya's face to face meeting. 😍

Yeah , Anji. Kishor is incapable of showinng his emotions...it's just kind of the guy he is..he does not believe in love , but believes in affection , trust and responsibility for a family..but the reason he een feels these things which he never felt is because of Piya..or else he would never believe in emotion due to his childhood. Piya never had a normal parent love from her father..but her mom gave her that..her father is too complex..he is like a normal father sometimes...usually he is like what you have seen in this update..and sometimes he is a complete monster , just like Abhay has been ever since the Jallianwallah Bagh incident...but Kishor is not a bad person..he has been through a lot , and is a good father when he wants to be , and loves Piya more than anything in this world no matter what his behaviour is towards her. 😳