'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 47

beautiful dear loved the whole party scene and where Abhay was stareing Pia

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.

awesumm update!!!u describd everythng so beautifully !darun!!so all set 4 the party 2 blast off!!super xcitd!!aw felt bad 4 abhiya..no worries..its necessary.,

thanks a lot dear princess..🤗
yep!! A big xplosin is goin to happn!! 😳
and tht u already knw!!! 😉
relax 4 d tym being nd save ur energy..u knw y?!! 😛

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Superb update dear. So, finally piya came. I loved the part where abhay was staring at piya. Whole party scene was beautifully described. U didn't dissapoint us ok. Pls continue soon and thanks for the pm.

aww..thanks romi! 🤗 glad u likd it!😳
ya..will try to updat asap!
Most welcome dear! 😊

Originally posted by: TeDylove

<font size="3">wow amazing update..👏

u express well abhiya felling..😳
waiting for more party event..😆
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thanks a lot chanu! 😳
yep! Sure!mre dhamakas r cuming up!! Just wait!😉 bt y are u laughng dear!!?? 😕 😆

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

<font color="#ff00ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3">oho, why is Abhay so stupid here </font>

ya..sumtyms he behavs lyk a real stupid!true! Bt,abhay isnt really tht stupid bt immature nd disillusnd!! Bt soon he will start showng maturity!!
And mst imptntly if abhay undrstud evrytng thn ye story kaise banti?!! 😆

Originally posted by: luckdiya

<font color="#990066" size="4"><font color="#006633"><font size="3">beautiful updt...bth r missing each other...
i luvd d way u hv described abhay's emotion ...2wards piya...
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"The way she was sticking to abhay,resting her head on
his shoulder,with her hands still clutching him,"<font color="#000000">omg!!!! alina yyad aa gai 🤣
thx 4 pm...
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thanks a lot diya! 😳 glad tht u liked it! 😊
haa..haa..ya! She usd to do d same!! 😆
Most welcome! 😊

Originally posted by: ilove99

it awesome...but ye wait kab khatam hoga

thanks meera..😳
hm..lets see..coz,lots of thngs r gonna happn in dis party! 😊

Originally posted by: Monami_50

Awsome

thanks dear..😳

Originally posted by: snitchseeker

Itna chotu update please jaldi update kor bhison jalais dutoi amake amar ghum hi na

wat??!!! It seems chotu update to u??!! 😲 And wat abt ur updats han!!?? They r toh as rare as asteroids!! 😡 r size-r katha toh cheray dilam!! Thy'r alwys XL chotu!! 😡 😆
you alws kill us by updtng 1nce n years!😆 So nw hv sum sleeples nyts nd dis tym, amra maja nebo!! 😛

nice update!!!👏

so both abhay n pia feeling a kind of pull towards each other but not understanding it.
the description of the party was very good...i can imagine the whole scene.👍🏼
that kate😡😡😡...hate emoticons cant express my hatred for her.
n chand...he doesn't dislike kate like abhay's mom n sis...no wonders abhay is so dumb...afterall like father like son😆😆😆