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Originally posted by: bellaaa

awsome update abhoira...
so abhiya had a fight accord with tht idiot kate...
i already started hated her
waiting to knw why they fight...
piya felt more lonly may be she love abhay...
cont soon


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awesum updt..beautifully written n kate😡
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Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek

awesum updt..beautifully written n kate😡

thanx prima:-)haha everyone is out 2 kill kate already
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Originally posted by: abhiora

thanx prima:-)haha everyone is out 2 kill kate already

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CHAPTER-3

Hidden Emotions

(WRITTEN BY LOST_IN_LOVE aka INDU)


He was standing infront of the same tree staring at those white flowers that held a strong connection to his past..intoxicating him with its sweet smell'he was wondering how he landed up here'bt feeling happy at the same tym'his thoughts were interrupted when he breathed a sweet familiar smell'he turned back and was amazed to see'.pia??!! he muttered softly yet lovingly'

she was wearing tha blue neck length gown that he gifter her 2 years back on her b'day'looking extremly beautiful and innocent'.he just stared unable to take his eyes away from her'pia what'r u doing here?after a brief moment of silence he finnaly spoke'

'I was always here abhay'waiting'waiting for u'!!'said pia. 'me?wat u mean?'askd abhay'surprised!!''yes for u'as i knew u have to and u will come back to me one day''.'bt i thought that u left me!!'protested abhay''I didn't leave u abhay, neither I nor did tora'nobody did'it was u who left..you abondened ur heart..not us'!!!

Abhay couldn't utter a single word,knowing v. well that it ws true!!! After a moments pause,he spoke, his voice almost choking'.'m sorry pia,sorry for whatever i did,i have hurt u a lot, I knw'.3months back the day we last had a convo..i insulted u'bt u didn't utter a single word in return'and tht wat's killng me from inside!!! Y pia y??...he asked shaking her violently'y didn't u hurt me in return??y u stayed mum?? At least then I wud have been at peace thinking u'r at fault too!!'I cud have justified my actions.'but nooo...y pia? to prove me wrong??to make me suffer?...if yes..than let me tell u..yes..miss pia..u have succedded'.i have lost my peace..my sanity..life is more like a burden now'.he cudn't speak further,after speaking at a stretch without a moments pause 'he stopped '.trying to catch his breath'.all this while pia was silent'.atlast she spoke'almost in a whisper ''d'nt feel sorry abhay'whatever happened wasn't ur fault'..i dnt blame u..i cn very well understand'u didn't have any choice''.'thats not true pia'..said abhay'his voice now a bit calm''I hd choice'.i always did,'nobody forced me,'.bt it was me who always made the wrong choice'''abhay''pia spoke interrupting him''first try to know urself 'ur innerself'the day u succed u will get all ur answers''.the last words were slowly becomming fade''tell me pia, do u feel the same? said abhay desparately,'bt she didnt reply'and was slowly moving away'abhay tried to reach to pia...bt cudnt''plzz pia'tell me wat to do??...give me my answers'dnt go 'plzzz,'.shouted abhay!!'.'let her go abhay'she is a b****y b****''a hoarse voice came from behind'pulling his hand,'he turned around'and to his amazement found' catty??!!...standing with an evil smile on her face'.!!!

With a jurk he woke up'.the loud noise of alarm almost defeaning him'abhay sat up on his bed,sweating,'still nt awake fully'tryng to realise where he ws'.'damn'was I dreaming'??'whats wrong with me'?? 'and y this dream'??'what does it mean'?? ,he muttered feelling surprised'and a bit annoyed'.he looked at the clock'sh***...its 8am already..whereas I had to reach at 7am..i have my fotoshoot'and here I m sleeping'.and dreaming all kind of bizzare, ridiculous things, 'he shook his head in disbelieve,'I have gone nuts'.he thought..'wat will adhir bhay think of me? uttering this he stood up and hurried'after a while when abhay was geeting dressed..his phone rang'he picked up without looking at the screen'the person on the other side'sounded panickstriken'aftr 2-3minutes of convo..abhay was able to assure him tht he was coming for the photoshoot!!'.

Few moments later wearing a white shirt and blue denim, abhay rushed down stares and drove out his porshe from the garage and drove away'

pia looked worried..her beautiful face was full of anxiety' unable to sleep last night.. she reached the studio before schedule,and after 1n a half hours of constant photoshoot she was feeling tired..her pfotoshoot was almost over'pia looked at the door..'abhay could reach any moment'bt I hope nt before I leave'..she thought'as coming face to face with abhay, wudnt b a very pleasing experience'as she knew well, where there is abhay,there is kate..and kate never leaves a single chance of humiliating her,..though she hardly cared..but it always ended up in creating a scene,and that she hated the most!!'

He was still thinking abt that strange dream,when his phone started ringing.abhay picked up the phone,and received the call'a girl in a dramatic tone...shouted..'abhi baby..where r u?? do u know how worried have I been?? And y weren't you receiving my calls?!!...'m sorry catty..was hell busy,so cudnt take your call,m really sorry''said abhay in a tired voice..'aww..its okk honey..my poor baby needs rest..baby why dont u take a break? Comeon we can go for a trip?she said excitedly..'you know its not possible kate..i have lots of work in hand with 5 photoshoots and 2 movies still yet to start'said abhay this time a bit irritated''ok.. baby,come n pick me up,abhay knew its vain to argue with her,though it will make him further late,but'.he shook his head saying 'ok!'and ended the call'suddenly feeling a bit guilty now.' There was so much concern in her voice, nahh'I was wrong', he shook his head..'she really loves me!! I shouldn't doubt her love!! 'thought abhay with a forced smile..

After a delay of another half n hour,finally abhay reached the studio along with kate..abhay got down from the car with kate wearing a red top with blue jeans. Her top exposing most of her curves instantly caught the attention of many..which was meant to attract the attention of someone else,who at the moment was lost somewhere else in his own world. but it seemed she hardly noticed it and rather fondly held abhay by his waist,ignoring the people around them and started walking,almost suffocating him.

Pia looked at her watch for the 5th time..ohh..god..adhir bhay..when will you come!!..i have to leave.abhay will b reaching any moment now! i cant stay here any longer..she muttered, nervously.

There was a click on the door. startled pia looked up n whispered,damn,'it must b them'!!

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Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res!!!
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awesumm indu!!luvd it!!the dream was perfect to describe abhay's inner turmoil...kate really is turning out 2 b a perfect despo!!hm lets see when abhay realizes what's in his heart!!honestly darun chilo:-)
Edited by abhiora - 13 years ago
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Pia is avoiding Abhay!! am hating this catty chick!!😡

Want to know the reason to why Abhiya fought! continue soon

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Edited by abhiya0006 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update indu.I loved it.So in sub concious mind abhay still know he was at mistake.Oh hate kate she is a b***h.I hope Abhay realize his mistake soon but wht happened 3 months back.Plz cont..😳

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