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Chapter-1 Remembering The Past

The wind blew making her curly hair dance to its tune. she tucked her hair aside enjoying the sudden change of weather. though it was early summer but it seemed it might rain any moment. she parked her car aside to make a call. pia didnot need to explain her sudden change of behaviour. her mom wasn't surprised as she knew how pia was and how she enjoyed being alone at times. her mom trusted her. she is a model and an aspiring actor,true! but she never let success get over her head.and her close friends nd family knew that very well.

The Lamborgini was back on its track,as it took less than two minutes to fininsh her call. pia pulled the break,mesmerised she looked at her surrounding.there it is,the lash green field!!pia murmured..
The place looked the same,not that it was too long they came here,but still..it was calm and serene,as beautiful as ever..
she stepped out of her car and walked past the field,as if she was under some spell.there was still some time left before the sun sets..
She kept looking,trying to absorb the essence but suddenly aware of the fact,that,it wasn't the beauty alone that brought her here,but something else. Deep down she knew that,but,tried not to think about it,as she always did..but her thought was interrupted when her eyes fell on the lovely white flowers,infont of her..and she froze instantly,remembering those beautiful memories that she had been ignoring for long..though her heart knew,how much she missed them..pia sighed...she was lost in her thoughts,when her phone beeped..she looked at her phone and jumped...god!!how can i forget?it's ayush's birthday!! i have to return home as fast as i can!..muttering under her breath,she ran back to her car,and sat behind the wheel, and looked back at the vast green field for the last time..just then it started raining..Pia's eyes which were full of happiness just moments before,became sad instantly..her face was shadowed with pain,agony and a strange feeling,which,she herself was unable to decipher!
she hates rain!! YES,she,the girl who once romanced rain,and thought it to b the most beautiful creation of nature,now hated it!! her eyes were lost,like she was not there anymore! tears flew down her cheek..and it was then that she saw,someone standing, far away..and the moment she realised who it was she gathered herself and started to drove away..

He didnt knew y he was here.it would certainly sound stupid of him to say that he didn't knew the reason,as to y he drove all this miles and came here! but the truth was,he didn't!!
He was astonished,as he himself was unaware of the exact reason! it had been days since he felt himself.it was like he was playing someone else all this months.but something was different today!!
he had two appointments today.but he cancelled both! really did he?he asked himself.he still c'nt believe!but he had to!
it wasn't easy though,with kate,following him everywhere,like a shadow,who wouldn't leave a single chance of cashing on his fame!! thinking this,he smiled sadly..
there was this strange kind of restlessness,sadness,mixed with longing,that finally made him do,what he couldn't for months! so,he escaped and now he could see,how apt he was!!
the beauty mesmerised him.though it was almost evening,with the faint rays of sun,falling on the leaves, before vanishining completely.he kept walking slowly,and stopped when he saw those flowers.closing his eyes,he took a deep breath.the sweet smell overwelmed him.
he was still closing his eyes and it was then that,it reminded him of her.she used to laugh,when he said,she smelled jasmine.the giggle as sweet as melody was still ringing in is ears!! a smile curved on his strikingly beautiful face,which could kill any girl instantly.

It wasn't that she never used perfumes but,that it never mattered,when she didn't!!even without perfume her scent was intoxicating..no,heavenly,he wispered!
it was strange,he thought..coming here,all of a sudden and then thinking about someone,who,he thought never mattered to him!
suddenly he felt alive thinking of her.
he remained standing there,with his eyes still closed,cherishing the moment,which he knew would b no longer with him,once he leaves this place! and was lost in his past again,when drops of water fell on his face.he opened his eyes.but he stood there without moving an inch,unaware of the fact,that someone far was watching him!
as the car drove away,he looked back and felt something strange! ..was someone there??watching him??he thought!
then ignoring it,he moved and sat on a nearby stone.by then it was raining heavily.but he wasn't willing to leave.as if it wasn't his body alone but soul,that needed to b washed away from all the unwanted dust,that veiled his true self,the self,that once used to b a beautiful thread,to the most precious place,where HE belonged! her HEART!!

Now he was extremly irritated. whats the hell is wrong with me?? he asked himself! no,he didn't knew! all he knew,was that he wanted to feel those memories with all his heart and soul.
he looked towards the sky,the rain had stopped.it was dark already.but he didn't move.rather,he took out a cigar from his pocket and lit it..those who knew him well,knew that the only time he smoke was whenever he was disturbed!
he sat there,dont know for how long,and only stood up when he realised it was too late!
he went back to his car,nd when he was about to pull the steering,his I-Phone started ringing.he looked at the phone which was on tha dashboard,since his arrival..the name 'Kate' blinked..but for the first time Abhay didn't bother to pick the phone!he just wanted to b alone!!

the cold wind blew the sheets of rain against the window panes..she rolled down the window allowing the rain to touch her face and hide her tears,her hair blowing in the wind as she drove towards home...


P.s. guys...here i end this chapter...i tried my best to show the inner turmoil that both was going through...dont know wether i did justice or nt! hope i havnt discouraged you all!...plzz press the like button if you like and tell us how it is...as your responce matters a lot...😳
Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res!!
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it was awesummm!!luvd reading it!!i could feel their pain and longing..darun likhechs,...m nt kidding!!fabulous !!clap clap:-D
Edited by abhiora - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsm update
beautifuly writn , u describ deir pain so well
cntinue soon nd thanx 4 pm
Edited by hema_rawat - 13 years ago

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