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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

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neha

@laxmii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

hey sorry guys for not updating.
i m stuck with exams...
will update tomorrow...promise...
till then bear with me...
sorry again

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Akshita

@Akshi0019

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

waiting dr... n best of luck...

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hema

@hema_rawat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

okay waiting 4 tomorow nd best of luck 4 xams

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neha

@laxmii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

hey everyone sorry for delay but i m busy with my exams and can't afford time to update regularly.
thanks for liking it and commenting.
hope u will like it.
its too long.
this chapter has two part-1 &2.
i want to finish this party in this chapter only so that i can move on with abhiya story.
sorry part 1 is little off with no abhiya in it. but bear it.
i promise part 2 will give u big smile on ur face and it would be little long , tempting and intimate with abhiya romance in it.i m sure u would love it.
next part will be most probably by tonight.

chapter 8 (part 1)-
next morning-
in college-

whole gang were gathered in college ground busy in their mocking and jokes.
pia was having a great time with them but she was missing abhay.he has not came yet. she was very excited and happy realizing about her true feelings for abhay. she knows that she had head over heel fallen for abhay. she was little disheartened that he had another woman in his life and seems like he is not yet over with her instead of after her death.but soon she compose herself saying to herself -"at the end of day abhay would be her. she would penetrate through his barrier and would make space in his heart.and she is determined to do it no matter what.i love u abhay!!!... i will get u..."
misha sees pia lost some where(to herself)-"day dreamer is back.why is she behaving like this???there is something fishy??i have to dig out??"
misha-"so day dreamer...whats bugging huhhh?"
pia(coming out of her thought and blurt without thinking)-"nothing serious...just wondering where is he?"
misha(frowning)-"who???"
pia-"dahhh...abhay. he has not arrived yet if u can see that."
misha(casually)-"ohh... he would come after first lecture.."
pia(astonished,curious,disbelieved)-"howww..howw do u know??"
misha-"he called me so that i can inform the lecturer about him not being present in class and would be late"
pia just nodded in disappointment of not calling her but misha.
soon after that they all went to attend there class.during class pia was totally engrossed in thought of abhay.and misha again notices this and move back to become Sherlock homes and her guts says that its related to abhay.but she thought to get in details before leading to any conclusion.
after the class they all went to canteen.pia was still gloomy and silent.kabir tries to lessen her mood but no use.
shanker-"hey kabir,u remember na about the football tournament next month.i have registered mine,ur and angad. we should start practicing with the team. i was wondering to give abhay's name also??"
a familier voice from behind-'ya sure.."
pia face brightened on listening the best voice of the world ringing in her ears.all turned.
kabir-'abhay...come man...so ur up for the game huh.."
abhay(little curl on his lips)-"yaa..so how was the class.??..okkk don't tell me i know it..."
misha-"so where u were...??"
pia(concerned)-"r u okkk?is any problem??how r u feeling now??"
he knows she is pointing to the last night incident when he suddenly stop in middle of jungle.
abhay(assuring)-"no its not serious. i m fine.. i just have some personal errads to run...by the way these r for u all"
handing them invitation cards
pia-"invitation cards?? for what...?"
abhay-"just a party at my place today. as u all know we r knew in town. so just a get together kinda party so people know who r riachands. and as u all r my friends so u all have to come. though i hate partying but dad's order so can't refuse.and u all have to come so that i can bear with it. okk and plus whole town is invited too."
misha-"party... i m up mann...now i can have my wish"
abhay(laughing)-"yaaa...right.. i remember.but never thought so soon."
ruhi-"omg!!omg! party that too today at urs...what i do know i don't have any dress to wear...hhooo(covering her face with her hands moving like manic) how i will manage. i have to go for shopping then parlor and then get ready on time..so much work and little bit time ...not fair...abhay.u should inform little earlier..."
abhay-"sorry.. i just decided"
angad-"no problem my sweetooo...pie..we can go now..okkk"
ruhi-"sacchii...okk lets go...okk guys meet u at party bye."
angad-"bye...every one"
all rest-"bye"
abhay-'okk then meet u in evening"
pia-"kyu??r u going somewhere??u r not attending college??"
abhay-'yaaa.. i have to go for some personal work..its urgent...i m already
late. i just came to pass on invitation"
pia-"ohhh..."
misha-"so dude...its gathering kinda stuff that means too boring mannn.how we would party with oldies"
abhay-"not to worry.i arranged that also. but u all be there on time okk..now i should leave...bye every one"
rest-"bye"
abhay leaves.
shanker-"abhay's party...too excited brooo.."
kabir-"me too..."
pia-"okk them i m off ..."
kabir-"where?"
misha-'to load tones of make-up to hide her scary face.damm pia why r u acting like those sh***t lunatic brainless bimbotics dumb heads who has gone gaga over blue eyed. damm its freaky shit. i can't believe my true blood doing that"
pia(glaring)-"shut ur filthy mouth misha doberial.its not that.i don't have any important class so i m going.don't stress on pea-sized head."
misha(rolls eye)-"whatever"
pia went away to go get ready for party making sure to make abhay flat.
rest where sitting in canteen discussing about party,misha wish,football tournament etc...
and then went to their class . soon college was over. every one went home to get ready for party.
mean while,abhay was driving his car through jungle where he felt eerie to find what was that.he parked his car along road side and went into jungle.
he uses his vampire power to picture who was here. but it gave him nothing just blur image. he tries catch the smell of that person but in vain.who so ever was here was very strong has ability to hide his smell.then he tries to look around to get any clue but no use.but he was not ready to back off until he gets what he want.he decided to use all his skill,power to trap the culprit but for that he needs to get energy. it has been more than a week he has not hunt so he first decided to hunt and then channelize his power.
after lots of his effort, draining out of his energy, he came out of the jungle ,sits in car.he dialed a number and tring..tring...tring..
reciever-"i knew u would call but not thought that soon"
abhay-"its urgent.."
reciever-"what...any problem..??u r fine ??na"
abhay-"i m fine...yes there is problem but for future not now"
reciever-"what it is??"
abhay-"can't tell on phone. can we meet??plus it has been a long time to see u?? i miss u!!"
reciever-"ok...i will come soon...i thought to come and meet u but i planned it little later. nevertheless doesn't matter. i have some eerad to finish and then i will come...i missed u too. how is sid.and uncle , aunty?i miss them..."
abhay-"i m fine,,they all r also fine.bhai is back to his business(means flirty nature) mom is ok just little worried about me. dad...he...u knoww...".
receiver-"i know uncle...so tell me how r u ?? ... i mean how r u coping with it.??"
abhay(signs)-"...seriously yarr for god sake... stop worrying about me. i already have pack of people to hang over my head like ghost.so u stop it okk.and i will be waiting for u ??"
reciever-"u know i can't...(abhay moves his head in denial,making faces)..ok now stop making faces."
both laugh.
abhay-"u know me very well haaa"
reciever-"i guess..i know so..then..meet u soon.. take care..bye.."
abhay-"ok ..bye"
then abhay hung up the phone and drove to go and meet her sister(at grave yard) and spend some time with her and finding solace and pouring his heart out, talking to her tomb like she was present and listening to his feeling, worries, inner turmonal related to whats happening in his life including his growing feeling for pia and how she with in a few days has imprinted herself in his dead heart.he always has the habit to talk his heart out to her sister even in his human life.she was and is always the only person to whom he shares every thing.and he feel like a tonne of burden is removed from his shoulders.and then after spending two hours ,,he drove back to his home where the party has already started and guest were coming.
he was on his way and when his phone rang and his knows who is??(rolling his eyes and picking up the phone)
abhay-'yes bhai,..i m on my way ...just 15min and i will be there okk"
sid(worried)-"u better be ..u r already late and dad is going to be angry with u if he finds u not being in ur own party even though i know u r not here .. guest have almost started arriving..even ur friends...and helll!!..they r bugging me so much..i can hear them from my room even though i have not met them officially in the party . some time i feel regretted to have vampiric hearing power. it is such a pain. i can't even stop them. ur few friends just excite me to suck the life out of them..no offence haa...but in the end ...they r good by heart and really care for u and i m happy for u...so move ur wheels fast before the moon cause any doom ok."
abhay-"yaa..bhai..i m there almost..ok..bye"
sid-"bye"

at the riachand mansion-
the huge mansion was decorated with all the classy,expensive and was looking highly impressive showing how rich, royal,classy and posh they r. every one was in awe with the decorations,arrangement,their huge mansion and its interior.it was very high profile party and whole dehradun was present to witness and to know who r these riachands.??
the party has just started where chand and haseena made their grand entrance descending down to hall , haseena wearing black sari with silver work on it with diamond accessories.she was looking very gorgeous and every one was admiring her for looks and peculiar features where as chand wore a black tux with silver patterns showing B-E-W-A-R-E look to everyone showing his position and authority and they both welcomed their guests, greeting every one individually. with time the party was beginning to go on full swing. and by that time doberial family enter the mansion.
pia was wearing yellow gown holding on one left shoulder. with her curls open and light make-up showing her natural beauty.she was determined make abhay flat by her look. she was very keen to see him and could not control her excitement.misha was wearing blue knee length dress sulking over her dress,making hr wear against her will and panchi wearing pink gown with her hair pinned up forming bun.all three were looking hot, sexy, beautiful but elegant in their own way. . they didn't know that the riachands were this much rich,throwing such a lavish party.
all three girls were shocked ,amused and surprised.
misha-"omg!!..i can't believe this..is this house or any palace mannn...so huge and classy..i didn't know abhay was so rich"
panchi-"ya me too...they had very impressive taste related to interior.i haven't seen such a beautiful mansion..i m sure these riachands belongs to royal family."
pia-"u two r right..i m looking forward for more...lets see what more we discover"
misha-"u know what...abhay never leaves a chance to amaze us.."
panchi-"he is a sweet guys unlike her devil big brother. i sometime wonder how they r blood related even though they r poles apart in every way."
pia-"i know ..one is sweet,caring, lovable,kind-hearted,generous..."
panchi-"and other one arrogant, idiot,Casanova, womanizer,self-pristine, over confident..."
misha-"hey if u both r done with ur admirers ...shall u two move ur butt..i dont have century to stand at the door step yarr..."
madhu-'stop u girls and behave"
chand and haseena greeted them.
chand-"hello, mr.doberial...nice to meet u.hello...mrs.doberial"
arnab & madhu-"hello,nice to meet u mr.riachand..."
haseena-"hello nice to meet u mr.doberial. hello...mrs.doberial...please to meet u all"
madhu and arnab-"same here"
madhu-"u look really gorgeous mrs.riachand i must say"
haseena-"ahh..thanks..u also look beautiful in this saree"
madhu-"thanks.. meet our daughters...she is panchi,elder one...then misha..and she is pia..(pointing to girls)"
chand and haseena were shocked to seepia and could not believe on their eyes.it was hard for them to digest to the extend of resemblence. it seems like the girl standing before them is not mathali but a mere human doppelganger.haseena and chand glanced at each other but soon composes not show any thing.
chand(to himself)-"sid was right. she looks like mathali.i can't read her mind.sid was right. she is different and may cause us danger especially to abhay. i have to careful,,very careful.and we need help.. and i know to whom refer. i must call him to come here but not now"
haseena-"please to meet u all. u all r pretty gorgeous."
all three in unison-"thank u aunty"
mr.doberial-"where r ur sons..they doesn't seem around"
chand-"they would be in anytime"
haseena looks at the stair case...
haseena-"ahhh ..there is one..."
points towards sid who was descending down wearing a black tux with white tie.haseena gestured him.he nodded, smiling his flaunting smile.
haseena-'meet our elder son-siddarth ...and siddarth meet doberial family"
sid-"hello mr.doberial.,hello ..mrs.doberial..no offence mr.doberial but ur lady is very beautiful.."
arnab laughes.
madhu-"thank u very much...u r also very handsome "
sid-"i know...(towards girls) ahhh...finally meet again...nice to meet u all.(stares at panchi)u all looks beautiful...(winks at panchi. she blushes).."
all three-"thanks"
sid-"my pleasure..."
chand-"so , sid where is abhay??"
hearing this name, pia became alert and started looking here and there
sid-"dad,i called him. he is on his way,"
chand-""deosn't he knew about his own party??"
haseena-"chand, let it be ...he is coming. relax"
chand-"he never listens to me"
sid-"dad,chill ok. he must have something important to do "
arnab-"mr.riachand , never mind., youngsters are like this. by the way party is really good.i m impressed"

misha(wispering)-" what r we doing with these oldies mannn...lets move . before they start their investigation yarr"
pia & panchi-"shut up,,misha"

chand-"thanks,mr.doberial...please make ur self comfortable..sid help girls..."
sid-"as u say..."
haseena-"ya right..lets leave the kids...we should move ahead..aaye mr.& mrs. doberial..please"
both parents leave to meet their other collegues and guests.
sid moving towards girls. standing in front of panchi.
sid-"so how can i help u all??"
panchi-"oh look.who is helping...i wonder what u want know after insulting me??"
sid-"ahhh...ok lets start fresh...bygone be bygone..i m sorry what i did..lets be friends."
panchi-"u know...u r such a.."
sid-"good looking...i know..."
panchi-"no ur a pain on ass.."
sid-"hey come on beautiful..."
pia-"panchi...let it be"
panchi-"whatever.i m off now...bye. i have to meet my friends"
panchi moves from there..
panchi(to herself)-"oh come on panchi hold on...what was that..why u blush like idiot...u know he is big time flirt..just focus...sid.ahhh"
sid looks at her direction.

misha-"okk only because u r abhay's brother..lets be friends..but let me warn if u miss again(points towards panchi)..i will my self scratch ur handsome face.."
sid-'i get it...so u find me handsome"
misha-"oh..just bugger off."
pia-"so when will he arrive"
sid-"who??"
pia-"oh don't u...i m talking about abhay"
sid-"ohhh i see..."
just then abhay arrives who busy on his phone.
sid-"there he is"
pia & misha turn.
sid-"hey little brother..over here"
abhay looks at his direction and notices pia.
abhay(to herself)-"mann...she looks too gorgeous...wish i could wrap her in arms...hold on abhay..what r u saying..get a grip man . u have to stay away from her"
abhay moves towards them smiling...
pia-"gosh.. his smile mann..wish i could kiss his luxirious lips...damm he is too hot to handle.."
abhay-"yup bhai...hello misha ,hello pia.."
pia & misha-"hi..."
sid-"where u were.. u know na dad..what takes u so long"
abhay-"bhai relax..we can talk later...i think first i should go and get ready. ha.."
sid-"okk..be quick"
abhay-"ya sure...till then bhai treat my friends well"
misha-"its better we serve our selves own but u make it fast.."
abhay-"fine.."
abhay leaves..pia looks at him going disappointed,,
pia(to herself)-"he doesn't complement me..."
misha looks around and found her gang near bar counter.
misha-"i gotta go now.."
pia-"mish...listen.."
but misha already left leaving sid and her alone..
pia(to herself)-'what do i do know??"
sid-"well pia..u look really awesome...beautiful.'
pia-"thanks..."
suddenly some one pushes the waiter who was holding drinks and was passing by pia and all drinks spill on her dress.
pia-"shit mann...my dress"
sid(to waiter)-" don't u have eyes"
waiter-"sorry sir. sorry mam... its not my mistake..some one pushes me. i m really sorry."
sid-"oh ur sorry will clean the dress. right...u r fired..get out now.."
pia-"sid ...no its okkk. i just go clean it up.wheres washroom??"
sid-"i m sorry for inconvience..."
pia-no worries...washroom...??"
sid-ya sure..first floor left side second last door"
pia-"thanks" and leaves

precap-
part 2-sid and gang having fun
pia seduces abhay

sorry i m not good in desciption of house, dresses.
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next part will be soon

Edited by laxmii - 13 years ago

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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

nice update thanks for the pm.

Edited by shivanipandit29 - 13 years ago

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vikramdey

@vikramdey

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

thank u for this lovely update but plz cont soon

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Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Wowww... What an update:-) Party was Amaging:-) SUPERB SUPERB SUPERB... Cant wait 4 next part... I LOVE IT:-)

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

wow great story plz update soon

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Akshita

@Akshi0019

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#130

Amazing dr... i loved it...
Pia is taking so much pain 2 impress abhay...
i hope abhay react this tym...
Precap is interesting... waiting 4 it...
cont soon... n thanks 4 d pm

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