Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

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Posted: 13 years ago

#971

that was a really gripping update Tanzie. 👏

Loved both ABhay's pain and longing for Pia as well as Pia's confusions and longing for Pia. Pia did not eat anything because she wasn't sure if Abhay had eaten anything or not. That was really heart-wrenching. 😭 I know they both have lots of battles to fight before they can be together again. But I just hope that they their love and faith on each other do not fade away and that they manage to fight the world for their happiness😊

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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#972

Wonderful update

It was really sad update

Abhiya yearning for one another

Piya not eating food because not sure if abhay ate

About chand n madhu now

Seems like he really loved her n Now it's just obsession in form of hatred

It's true not every one can be like abhay

I am not sure if madhu did the right thing? But she could have given him a chance

Idk but I think there is a lot of misunderstanding between them

Chand wants to meet piya? Not as her father though but it did seem a little like a father but it was purely a mafia.

I know a abhiya will find there way back to each other

thanks for the pm

I just love your writing n I love this dark story

It's realistic

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kirti

@Andromeda001

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Posted: 13 years ago

#973

AMAZING UPDATE!
Once again a painful chapter! 😭
piya's condition literally made me cry!poor thing!her life s becoming more like a mystery as everyday a new truth comes out!she now knows abt her past bt is again uncertain abt d future.she is taking too much stress imagining d condition abhay might be in nd trying every possible way,ready 2 face d dark world 4 him! 😭

chand s really a heartless monster! 😡 he s torturing abhay 2 make him like himself!
Abhay s enduring so much pain 4 piya!
Chand will now play piya card,
waiting 2 see d confrontation nd struggle of piya with d dark world 2 get her abhay bak!

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#974

superb update tanzie!!abhiya condition made me cry😭chand is so so so heartless😡bt then again i was imagining ki agar madhu ne use chance diya hota to kya wo crime world sach me chod deta...????! bt then every1 is nt like our ABHIYA😉 tanzie u knw ROSELINE hamari chem tchr ka nam hai🤣she too is married bt she is young😆

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#975

fab update.chand seems like a stone hearted guzy so ruthless. Bth abhiya r in pain. Thanx 4 pm

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#976

Piya is headed into danger with determination...

Chand is out to take revenge...

Abhay is dead set on gaining freedom...

All in all the story is moving at a great pace...

Brilliant Tanz!

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#977

nice update dear! thax fr pm! finally chand ki problem to pta chali. next 1 update soon.

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#978

Tanzie i have this feeling that if Madhu had accepted Chand all those years back, she would've been able to bring him out of that dark life. And trust me, that is not a nice feeling, when you keep thinking about what could've been But I guess we can't blame Madhu either, after all that she heard. Is there any hope for redemption on Chand's part? 'Coz seeing his PoV, I do see a slight chance😛

I guess that's just another reason why I don't want Pia to give up on Abhay. He might go back into that world for now but only she can bring him back from it. She's done that once, she can do that again.

You have to stop making Abhay hallucinate Pia. It breaks my heart every time🥺.🥺 It is rather ironical though that he is in the same cellar where he had kidnapped and kept Pia once😛

God, every time I feel you cannot make this SS anymore tragic, you prove me wrong. But I am so looking forward to Pia in NYC. I do wish to see her encounter Chand at least once. And I feel comforted knowing she is equipped enough to protect herself and her baby. I just want her to keep that confidence in Abhay and his love, it just makes me love her more!

Are you sure this is still an SS? You might as well promote this to a FF😛

Waiting to see how you'll make Abhay and Pia meet again. If I know you well, the circumstances will not be very ideal for a reunion😉

Take care, hun🤗