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Posted: 13 years ago

nice update tanzie.poor abhiya both r so much in pain.chand is just so evil.hope piya will meet abhay soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
sry 4 da late rply
nyc update
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update
feeling bad for abhiya...
chand is very cruel person
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for late reply as I was not well
awesome update
loved it
So Piya is going to search for Abhay
I hope they reunite soon
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: flora212

TANZIE THIS IS SUPERB!!! I REALLY FELT PITY FR CHAND... DONT NO WHY? BUT IT SEEMS THAT HE HAS SUFFERED A LOT... I THINK IF MADHU GAVE A CHANCE...HE WOULD HV BEEN GOOD.. .BUT I ALSO CANT SAY THAT MADHU WAS WRONG!!! BUT OUR ABHAY IS UNIQUE..😆.AND UR SS IS REALLY GETTING MORE INTERESTING AND EXCITING DAY BY DAY!!! I JUST WISH ABHIYA WILL OVERCOME EVERY TROUBLES IN THIER LIFE AND BE TOGATHER BUT IT ALL DEPENDS ON U... ANYWAYS JUST KEEP ON GIVING UPDATES JUST LIKE ALWAYS U GIVE... I REALLY FELT BAD ON ABAY WHEN HE WAS HILLIUCITION AGAIN!!! POOR HIM BUT I GUESS HE STILL DIDNT ACCEPT TO BECOME A KILLER MACHINE... I GUESS HE WILL ACCEPT NEXT UPDATE!!!

TANZIE GET WELL SOON TOO...UPDATE SOON...


Thank you. love you kitty emos 😆 about Chand and Madhu you never know. Maybe Chand would have changed and maybe not. there's always a MAYBE and until you really tried, this question will always be handing.. i wish i could.. did i do the right thing? so its very disturbing. you are right, next update Abhay will accept Chands offer.

Originally posted by: luckdiya

1st of all tanzie get wel soon yaar

nw cumin 2 d updt...
it ws amazing...
i m SPEECHLESS
piya cm 2 knw abt her biological dad, again hallucination prt ws emotional, d way she felt 4 abhay ...
ahhh!!!!!!!!! i feel lik cryin... uff uff ufff
🤗🤗🤗dnt hv wrds 2 praise ur writing skills


Thanks Diya. Next Abhay will regret and remember Pia more after accepting Chands offer. I have cried many times while writing this FF. its unusual for me but i couldn't help it either...
will try to update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: .rumki.

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nice update
finally Pia got to know the truth but it is a big shock 4 her. Chand's story is very dark but Madhu should have given him a chance.Then may be Chand wouldn't be like this 2day

So Pia already started searching...hope soon she will get clue


Thanks RUmki. Madhu should have then maybe he wouldn't be like this but what if he didn't change so its always a maybe.
She will get more clues which will shock her...

Originally posted by: -Sonia-

awww! I feel so bad for abhiya.. I felt like crying when abhay was hallucinating abt piya!
Finally, piya knows the truth ! Madhu shud hav given chand a second chance..
Waiting for more
continue soon.. Thanx for the pm
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Thanks you Sonia. I know that part was really sad. it for showing Abhay never wanted to go there again but he just has to.
will try to update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mandy1024

I missed this time 😭 😭 😭 Awww 🤗

Tanzie I was already feeling sad for having missed the first post for comments n now your update made me cry even more 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
Pia finally got to know the truth about her real father Poor thing. She's pregnant, she is desperately trying to reach out for Abhay n now Chand 😭 But what Madhu did was selfish 😡 I dont blame her for wanting to leave Chand but how could she do this to her own child and worst of all how could she put another man through all that pain? Did Arnab really deserve that? If she had an ounce of self respect she would have left everything behind and started a new life with her child rather than put this burden on someone else. There are many single moms out there who bravely face the society for their child's sake 🤢 I was disgusted with her. Had she given Chand a chance maybe he would have redeemed At that point in time he still had affection for her n their child n the saying u posted in the beginning of the update holds true. Nobody is born bad. Its only circumstances that mould u into what u r today but that surely doesn serve as an excuse to one's wrong doings. A circumstance will place a person at crossroads n the path u decide to tread on is entirely left to u. Thats what I firmly believe in. At the end of the day its the choices u make that shape u into the person u r. I do agree with you. noone is born bad and situation shapes the persons life or future. There's always a maybe in Madhus situation cause Chand may or may not have been changed. not all people have redemption so there's always a MAYBE. a very big one. do you really blv every1 is brave enough in this world to be single mother? 😆 no.. otherwise why they would abort their child. many people prefers a happy life and rather trouble free life then having a child alone and fighting with the world. everyone hasn't got the spirit. Pia has that and so she is ready to fight against everything to bring back the father of her child but not necessarily her mother has to carry the same spirit and bravery... there are all kind of people in this world...


I am feeling so bad for Abhay 😭 more than Pia. He didn even get to know that he's about to become a father But he's still determined to fight his way back for her 👏 Pia on the other hand is spoiling her health. I know she's torn inside out but she should pull herself together for her child n though its a lil late now I am glad she decided to take a stand in life. She will now go in search of Abhay n I wonder where this will lead her to. The fact that Pia took the gun with her seems to suggest that the upcoming updates will be action packed where we will get to see Pia as femme fatale 👏 Brilliant ⭐️
Well no words this time coz I know what u will say again. I cant feel more bad for anyone here because I write it 😆 and I kind of feel how they do. Abhay will accept the offer of Chand but he will be locked up because they wont be able to trust him. Pia will get into her investigation and find truths which will scare the daylight out of her. real mafia world truth. yeap.. she has to be a femme fatale otherwise whats the point of teaching her shooting?


So from my side its:
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Hope u got what I am trying to say 😉 Anyways will get started on the summary tomo 😊 thanks a lot dear... n thanks so much for the summary 🤗 will try to update soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shria

awsome update & very emotional😭 i just loved the way u wrote⭐️


Thanks you dear. 🤗


Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Awesome update Tanzie. Oh why do I feel Chand is actually the most broken from the inside?

Felt terrible for Abhay and Piya...Oh gosh...25 days...Wonder what's going to happen in NYC!

Beautifully written tanzie...👏


Thanks Shreya. He was but the hurt has made him stone like. and now he wont feel anything. "people who are heartless, once cared too much" - remember it. Abhay will accept the offer.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

😭 poor abhay feeling so bad and pia is also suffering...fab update tanzie...


Thanks Rashu... dont worry the sad days wont last long...😳

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm


Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: Cute_Gal

dat was awesome update,
very well written,
waiting for d next part..
continue soon.. thanxxx for d pm.


Thanks you so much. next part will be in Book 2.. will update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.

awesome update once more tanz👏...brilliant..so pia came to know that chand is her biological father...hm..and poor poor abhay,oh god,he's suffering so much...so piya's gonna start her search for abhay..hope their love helps them through the dangers and tragedies ahead...


Thanks a lot Tora. Pia will start knowing truth about mafia world and it will scare him but she wont back off. she will make abhay come out eventually... but not now.. will take some time..

Originally posted by: DonIsback

Awesome update, pia love biggest then anything, i know abhiya will fight and win too; madhu is right or wrong i dont know, but abhiya love keep them together


Thanks Prati. yes, they will fight and eventually Pia will make Abhay come to her. 😳


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