Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#951

Originally posted by: Rmuk
Amazing update tanzie as usual. U described each and ever part of it amazingly. Both abhiya are in so much pain, I just hope piya don't loose her trust over abhay. Omg piya found a clue abt chand, just hope madhu will be able to help her. I literally felt like crying seeing abhay's pain, piya is in pain too, but I don't know why but I felt abhay's pain more from my heart. I think bcoz he is physically hurt too. Abhay will be back into his killer machine self again. I just hate chand, how can a father be so cruel. I just want piya to find out about abhay soon, and both be safe and their baby too. I know it's a dark story, but darkness have a end so waiting for the ray of light to arrive.
anyways loved it tanzie, ur writing skills have given a new look to this brilliant ss. Plz update soon. Love u for ur wonderful job dear.

Thank you so much 😳 Pia will know the truth about Chand now. Pain cannot be measured here. Pia is pregnant with a man's child whom she has known as a murder but yet she has accepted him, healed him with her love so when he leaves without telling her. it's supposed to shatter her faith on not only him but also entire mankind to never trust someone or love someone that much.

Chand was never really attached to Pia emotionally so he doesnt feel anything for her. sorry dear, Abhay wont know about the baby any soon dear sorry.

will update within friday 😊

Originally posted by: Pavi.Dravid119
Tanzie that was a very painful update but ur writing skills r 👏 👏 👏 That's y this SS is on of my favs !! Seriously, it's so hurting to c both Abhay and Pia suffering so much.. Especially Abhay who has been beaten so cruelly, i know he's done worse to other people but i just can't take it !!

Wish all this ends soon 😭 😭

And i donno where i reserved, n my net is too dead slow for me to go to my posts n c 😕

Tc n continue soon Tanz 🤗

Thank you so much sweetheart.

Yes, its the reality that Abhay has even killed people. doesnt matter how sweet he is to Pia or he has changed but he has taken lives and done worse to people and now when he will endure same pain he will realize what he has done. its kind of final redemption for him.

don't worry about the res post...come back soon 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#952

Originally posted by: Eowyn
The gory world of mafia is about suck in AbhIya's beautiful world...
Hard - that's an insufficient word- times ahead for these lovers...
But after every night there is a day...
Until that hope remains, people will survive...
Good job once again, Tanzie.

Yes Nidha. it was always supposed to be a very dark story and I have always loved mafia stories so finally got a chance to write my own though the underworld part is small in portion.

beautifully said, until the hope remains, people will survive 😳

Originally posted by: matwamango
So this was due ages back but i have had problems with replying. Thiss SS i have read from start to finsih and my goodness have U knocked my socks off with the MAFIA. BTW This is one subject i am heavily intrigued by ever since i have seen the GODFATHER movies. thank you Ayesha 😳 I have been always intrigued with GODFATHER book.. its one of the most brilliant stories I have read. always wanted to give one of my story that touch and finally got the chance 😳

The ruthlessness, is beyond belief but U have depicted this story with raw emotions i felt i was literally in this story watching the whole event except it wa all in my head.
thanks a lot... its great to see such comments from someone who is so brilliant writer herself 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#953

Originally posted by: shria
superb ss tanzie😳thank god i read this ss otherwise i would never knew what a great piece of writing on abhiya i would have missed
i was literery crying when abhiya were being seperated after abhay released piya
now those happy days are gone & now both have to face darkness
does not chand feel anything for her daughter?😡😡 will abhay accept the offer??
continu soon...& pm me😉

Thank you Shria. glad u liked it 😊 glad u liked it. I literally cried many times when I wrote some chapters of this SS. its very close to my heart. Chand was never attached to Pia emotionally so theres no scope for feelings. Abhay will accept the offer to save Pia

Originally posted by: mandy1024

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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TANZIE THIS IS SUPERB!!! I REALLY FELT PITY FR CHAND... DONT NO WHY? BUT IT SEEMS THAT HE HAS SUFFERED A LOT... I THINK IF MADHU GAVE A CHANCE...HE WOULD HV BEEN GOOD.. .BUT I ALSO CANT SAY THAT MADHU WAS WRONG!!! BUT OUR ABHAY IS UNIQUE..😆.AND UR SS IS REALLY GETTING MORE INTERESTING AND EXCITING DAY BY DAY!!! I JUST WISH ABHIYA WILL OVERCOME EVERY TROUBLES IN THIER LIFE AND BE TOGATHER BUT IT ALL DEPENDS ON U... ANYWAYS JUST KEEP ON GIVING UPDATES JUST LIKE ALWAYS U GIVE... I REALLY FELT BAD ON ABAY WHEN HE WAS HILLIUCITION AGAIN!!! POOR HIM BUT I GUESS HE STILL DIDNT ACCEPT TO BECOME A KILLER MACHINE... I GUESS HE WILL ACCEPT NEXT UPDATE!!!

TANZIE GET WELL SOON TOO...UPDATE SOON...

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Diya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#956

1st of all tanzie get wel soon yaar

nw cumin 2 d updt...

it ws amazing...

i m SPEECHLESS

piya cm 2 knw abt her biological dad, again hallucination prt ws emotional, d way she felt 4 abhay ...

ahhh!!!!!!!!! i feel lik cryin... uff uff ufff

🤗🤗🤗dnt hv wrds 2 praise ur writing skills

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Posted: 13 years ago

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nice update
finally Pia got to know the truth but it is a big shock 4 her. Chand's story is very dark but Madhu should have given him a chance.Then may be Chand wouldn't be like this 2day

So Pia already started searching...hope soon she will get clue

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I missed this time 😭 😭 😭

Tanzie I was already feeling sad for having missed the first post for comments n now your update made me cry even more 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Pia finally got to know the truth about her real father Poor thing. She's pregnant, she is desperately trying to reach out for Abhay n now Chand 😭 But what Madhu did was selfish 😡 I dont blame her for wanting to leave Chand but how could she do this to her own child and worst of all how could she put another man through all that pain? Did Arnab really deserve that? If she had an ounce of self respect she would have left everything behind and started a new life with her child rather than put this burden on someone else. There are many single moms out there who bravely face the society for their child's sake 🤢 I was disgusted with her. Had she given Chand a chance maybe he would have redeemed At that point in time he still had affection for her n their child n the saying u posted in the beginning of the update holds true. Nobody is born bad. Its only circumstances that mould u into what u r today but that surely doesn serve as an excuse to one's wrong doings. A circumstance will place a person at crossroads n the path u decide to tread on is entirely left to u. Thats what I firmly believe in. At the end of the day its the choices u make that shape u into the person u r.

I am feeling so bad for Abhay 😭 more than Pia. He didn even get to know that he's about to become a father But he's still determined to fight his way back for her 👏 Pia on the other hand is spoiling her health. I know she's torn inside out but she should pull herself together for her child n though its a lil late now I am glad she decided to take a stand in life. She will now go in search of Abhay n I wonder where this will lead her to. The fact that Pia took the gun with her seems to suggest that the upcoming updates will be action packed where we will get to see Pia as femme fatale 👏 Brilliant ⭐️

Well no words this time coz I know what u will say again. So from my side its:

👏 ⭐️ 👍🏼

Hope u got what I am trying to say 😉 Anyways will get started on the summary tomo 😊

Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#959

awww! I feel so bad for abhiya.. I felt like crying when abhay was hallucinating abt piya!
Finally, piya knows the truth ! Madhu shud hav given chand a second chance..
Waiting for more
continue soon.. Thanx for the pm
tc

Edited by -Sonia- - 13 years ago