Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#821

Originally posted by: DonIsback
wow awesome update. so finally misha find about abhay. i love interaction between them . abhiya damned good always. pia wanted to learn shooting. and she is scare seeing james. well i don't blame her . well did she find out about master in next update. how will she react?

Thank you Prati. yes Misha knowing about Abhay will have a important part in the story. no she wont find about master in next update but update after that maybe. she will be shocked and shattered.

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987
😃 AWWSSOOMMEE UPDATE!! 👍🏼 so as u said dis chapter will show d possessive side of abhay.
Luved d cute sulky xpressions of abhay when he came to know about jeh.
Misha teasing abhiya n best was d answer of piya to misha while introducing abhay"he s my life".
Personally i also find words like bf,dating as too shallow n superficial to describe even iota of feeling called "love".(may be i m too old fashioned). Thanks dear. what's your name? Misha meeting Abhay will have a important part in the future. nothing to be old fashioned. its personal choice.some relationship are larger than being only boyfriend or dating. n here, their relationship is beyond any simplicity.

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so chand is piyas father.piya getting d training of shooting 4m abhay which cn be well understood as an desperation to protect a beautiful future wid abhay.
Dunno what hurricane is awaiting dem in future bt it s crystal clear dat "noone n nothing cn separate abhiya maybe death bt even death cant separate d soulmates"
they wud always be there 4 each other whatsoever may be d condition!
Loved d feelings of abhiya when dey came 2 know dat how much dey changed themselves 4 eachother inspite of not knowing whether they wud be able 2 see each other in this life time or not!
This s called true love n dat s why we all lov abhiya n u described everything perfect beyond d words. Pia is afraid of loosing Abhay which is pretty normal because of Abhay's past. I have always said from the beginning here, there relationship is bonded with pain. its intense and passionate. true love it which will find them back together even in grave danger.
Superb work n continue soon!

Originally posted by: kuttu
Abhay playing hide and seek with Pia is not going to be great for their future. So when the secret is out will she trust Abhay again. Mahu sure is going to give the biggest blow to her life. Looks like Abhay will have to step back into his old life for Pia. Chand surely would want his daughter back alive for revenge from Madhu.

It will cause Pia a lot of pain but it wont create any rift in their relationship. Madhu will tell Pia when Pia will confront her directly. Chand has big plans for Abhay and Pia both. Abhay knows many secrets about Chand which will make Abhay's life in stake.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#822

Hey tanzie!! I m niti nd i m new here nd i m big fan of ur ffz nd this ss plz add me in ur pm list nd pm me next time!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#823

Comment updated on pg-110
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Posted: 13 years ago

#824

Originally posted by: SheIsTheOne
Very nice update ya...👏👏 Misha got shocked cum surprised seeing Abhiya together..😆.her lines were very funny...😆 especially that shower line...😆 Piya is afraid of Abhay's safety...she's trying to learn how to use a gun... and...Chand...why does he want to kill his own daughter... how pathetic...😡 and Abhay told Piya the half-truth...I wonder how will she react when she will come to know that who is her real father...I guess she'll be a little upset with Abhay but I guess she'll understand also why did he hid the truth from her...😵 Abhiya are very supportive of each other...😳that's very sweet...😳 over all...really nice chapter...👏 Please continue as soon as you can...😳 no pressure ok..😊 and thanks for the PM dear..😃

Thanks dear. Misha is Misha.. tried to put her usual flavor 😆 In Chand's world there's no room for emotion and relationship. She will be shattered. my pleasure... i said i will update by tuesday but wont think I can 😕 maybe it will take wednesday 🤔

Originally posted by: anjali0111
superb update!!!!!!👏

liked first part where misha was surprised to see abhay...liked their whole convo.😃 Thanks a lot dear...glad u liked it 😳

really love can do wonders!!! abhiya have changed so much for the sake of each other...it can only be possible because of true love.❤️ 😊

liked the possessive side of abhay😉...liked the scene when pia introduced abhay as his life...just wow.😍 both are insanely in love with each other.❤️ They are so passionate about each other..thats what i love to write about them

so james has seen abhay...this is not a good sign😒...i can feel soon abhay's past gonna haunt him. chand is pia's father...abhay is not telling her the truth...hope pia forgive him after knowing it. Abhay's past has to haunt him. people pay big time for this kinda past. Pia wont be mad at him.. she will understand..

pia is learning shooting...i can understand her fears. she is so scared for abhay n so is abhay. the scene when abhay console her after nightmare was very good...i can imagine pia feeling scared n abhay trying to calm her. problems in their life is inevitable but i hope they'll fight it n be together in the end😍 Pia has seen how easily they kill human and it scared her. they will always find their way back to each other..

Originally posted by: himanshu1990
FABULOUS UPDATE!
Best quality of ur ffs is that u depict emotions very well.
Ur writing style is excellent!

Thanks dear. thanks a lot for the complement. emotions are the key to a story will can create connection with the readers so its important for me to portray it well 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: lost_in_love
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Fabulous update tanzie..👏 👏
after reading ur updates it no more seems tht the show hs stopped! The impact of ur updates are as powerful as the effect we perceive visually! Its as if pkyk/abhiya are still there..and its nt mere words bt pictures shifting infrnt our eyes!! 👏 ⭐️ Thanks a lot Indu 🤗 such a huge complement.. your comment always flatter me huh 😆 I heart them and miss them so they are alive in my stories as well 😳

abhay's possessives was really enjoyable to read! Loved misha.her entry brought sum light moments..
Well i wnt predict anythng dis tym regarding james,as in a world anythng n everythng is possible,so its better tht i wait for the action..
Wow!!!tanzie!! Am bowled! Pia taking lessons on shooting was surprising yet sumwhat expected!! Wonderful description..i truly felt i was watchng a hollywood flick!!! ⭐️
the nervousness,fear,anxiety..inexperience of a starter was wonderfully shown!! Awesome!👏
abhay's face changing while holding the gun was again explained wonderfully!👍🏼
wow! They both are so stubborn! Bt i like this thng abt them! 😉
hm..so chand is pia's true father! Why i dont knw bt i feel chand wnt try to kill pia! Abhay's fear regardng pia is going to prove wrng i guess!! 🤔 Agreeed.. possessive Abhiya are a treat. I actually personally learnt at a young age how to hold guns. I know how to shoot with a rifle too but they are too heavy for me and once I tried I thought my shoulder will come separated out of my body 😕 even guns are so heavy. half of my family are in defense so I have seen lots of guns from childhood. I have never really shoot though but I have seen my mamu's goes to bird hunting and all that and I have gone with them too. so that lesson came handy finally. I was really young though... 15 only 😆 see every experience in your life can be important for you one day 😳

the part were pia ws afraid aftr they met james,and abhay gettng worried 4 pia,as to wat wud happn to her ,if sumthng happns to hm, was remarkably written! It shows again how deep their Love is!😊
the end was again beautiful...😊
In short the entire update was just fantastic!!!⭐️ Thank you so much. They are inseparable and in their little world when both have lost everything without each other,loosing each other can be the worst thing that could happen to them and you will see soon what it will make them...

plz continue soon..and thanks for the pm..dear..😳
p.s. Extremly sorry,tht i cudnt comment n d previous update as my xms were going on..

and...do tak..cre..🤗 No need to be sorry. study comes first. all the best for your exams dear... you take care too 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#826

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta
awesome update
loved it
so Chand is Piya's father but why he wants to kill her to avenge Madhu?
Piya is now trained to use guns i have a feeling this would be quite useful
cont soon
thanks for the pm

Thanks Pari. He wants to take his revenge against Madhu because she left her. Pia's training will surely come handy.

Originally posted by: _Sonu_
Awesome update Tanzie...👏
So finally misha knows about Abhay...I liked the way Pia called Abhay her life..😳
I really dont trust this James guy...😕
The part where Abhay teaches Pia how to use the gun was nicely written dear...👏
Continue soon...

Thanks Sonu 😳

I wanted to sure the intensity of their relationship and passion. You shouldn't trust James. Glad u liked that part.

Originally posted by: bellaaa
tanzie superb update yar
piya is so afraid to see james and even abhay
loved the misha scenes
piya is rite abhay trained piya thts gud
both meant for each other
ohh yar chand is piya dad
when it came to front of piya she might be angry to abhay
but loved the bonding of abhiya
and the scene when abhay held her and said those wordzz u r mine loved it
cont soon
liked it soo much as alwayzz

Thanks a lot Beenish. No Pia wont be angry on Abhya and she will understand Abhay lied to protect her. Its great to portray Abhiya as possessive lovers. 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#827

Originally posted by: ..dishu..
sorry for late comment tanzie
coming to the update: it was brilliant and i guess going to turn towards dark now. yup i guessed right, chand is indeed pia's father, but then would he kill her? 😲

No worries Dishu. It will surely turn darker now. Chand has bigger plans and they dont really have the emotions of being a father. otherwise he would have claimed her ages ago.

Originally posted by: sweet_neetu
Amazing tanzie
loved the overprotective abhay...enjoyed hilarous misha..omg chand is her father ..how sick still wants to kill pia...hope james doesnt brings any trouble...
Thnxx 4 pm

Thanks Neetu. Chand has huge mission and you will know his plans once he enters the SS. James will bring trouble intentionally or unintentionally.

Originally posted by: Monami_50
Hope pia won't be too mad with abhay when she finds out about her dad

She wont be mad.. dont worry 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#828

Originally posted by: TISA07
awesome tanzie. . loved misha's entry. . . Chandu is piya's father. . 😲

Thanks Tisa. yea Chandu is 😆

Originally posted by: -Sonia-

Awesome update! Tanzie..
wow! Misha finally knows about abhiya.. Glad to see her in this update.. Atleast there is some1 genuinely happy for them..
A possessive abhay definitely means a hot abhay.. Lol ... Loved that part..
OMG! James saw abhay.. I hope , he keeps it a secret !
The training session was superb.. Very realistic..
Eagerly waiting for the next part
continue soon
thanx for the pm
tc

Thanks Sonia. Glad u liked all the things. i love the training session too 😆 will update tonight or tomorrow..

Originally posted by: priyabhay
its was quite emotional misha was cool as always bt very less romantic moment nice part n thanks for pm

See its not possible to include romance in all the updates because there are other elements in the story as well. 😆 and from next update, things will get even more dark so no possibility of romance soon. sorry for that 😳

Originally posted by: rashi.rose
Wowww di I m speechless:-) AWESOME UPDATE:-):-)

Thanks dear.

Originally posted by: Cute_Gal
awesome update..👍🏼
abhay so possessive..gud..
loved it.. continue soon..
thanxx for d pm..😊

Thanks. glad u liked it.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#829

Originally posted by: Eowyn
Abhay's secret has a great damaging potential.
Gosh! Why do most people think that keeping quiet will solve matters!
In more than 80% cases it won't!
I knw they do it bcoz of their love!
But heck I hate it when they do that!
Nice update Tanz!

Sure it will Nidha. even in real life it happens all the time and misunderstandings create because of the silence. But sometimes some truth better be left hidden. here Pia wont be mad at Abhay once she will know the truth.

thank you.

Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni
Superb update Tanz

love the way You describe !!!!! Misha part was superb !!!!!Abhay is so possessive but i like it the way he said your mine only mine Pia i loved it !!!!!
pia learning to shoot gun was amazing !!!!I oh no Chand is pia real father . hope he does not harm abhiya and james keep his mouth close!!!!!!

Once again Lovely update !!!!!
Can't wait for next part !!!! continue soon !!!!

Thanks Sandy. Abhiya are very possessive about each other. Chand being Pia's father wont do any good to them for sure. lets see what James will do.

will update very soon.

Originally posted by: meerubzara
awosome update
misha & abhiya convo was nice
part where pia get training of shooting from abhay was beautifully written
so chand is pia,s father ...
continus soon
plz pm me

Thanks Zara. Glad u liked the training part. will update very soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#830

Originally posted by: Mohit-deewani
outstanding upd tanzie 👏
really loved it , abhiya r too cute yaar
well misha 🤣... and i just love the possesive abhay always makes me doo awww and the best part was abhay teaching piya to shoot , tat was just awesome , well i really dont like chand realy hope james doesnt backstab abhay 😊
u r faboulous writer , thanks for pm upd soon

Thank you Roshni. Misha is always like Misha 😆 Abhay's possessive makes their relation more intense and passionate. thanks a lot for the complement dear 😳

Originally posted by: Pavi.Dravid119
Awesome chappy, Tanz .. Yur update in any of yur works makes my day .. 😳😃

I feel Abhay - Pia r unsafe in tht city now .. 😕

Misha will be Msiha!!..

The training sessions had so many emotions ...

Tc, continue soon .. 🤗

Thanks a lot Pavi 🤗

They are indeed and Abhay will soon realize Pia's proposal of leaving the city was better. will update within tomorrow...

Originally posted by: darkcocoa_renu
I can smell sumtin fishy abt james..hope pia's worst fears dnt cum true..abhay teachin pia of gunshoot..tats very cute..will abhay becum a killing machine again??even afta sharin a bed abhia have seperate rooms!!dat cracked me up..will w8 4 nxt update..:-)

You are right Renu. james surely is fishy. The assassin is a part of Abhay which is always stay in a way but he wont be a killer again. Abhay went ot his previous room where he used to live when he came here. n see even husband n wife sometimes spend nights in separate rooms when they fight or dont wanna see each other's faces. it can happen to anyone 😊

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