Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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kirti

@Andromeda001

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Posted: 13 years ago

#741

MINDBLOWING update!
Just loveed d growing n maturing relationship of abhiya,how u portrayed their feelings,their growing understanding for a family life especially abhay.
Pia seems to be very possessive,obssessive over abhay as she considers him d only truth in her life full of lies n betrayals.abhay also is very loving,caring,passionate n devoted lover but is taking time in understanding norms of a family life.
AT D END they r ABHIYA d epitome of love n love personified where there is no existence of two beings but a single personified love which is created by burning to ashes n then ressurection n reincarnation as a single being ABHIYA.

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#742

awesome update !!!!

Abhiya relation growing strong!!!! i m glad now abhiya life is peaceful !!! update was so romantic !!!! both r so caring and i m loving pia possessive behavior toward abhay !!11 hope they remain happy together !!!!!continue soon !!!

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ChelseaForEver

@ChelseaForEver

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#743

Gosh Gosh Goshhh!!..

Shame on me that i had not read this SS before, seriously shame on me.. 🥱

Tanzie, Heena - I read it today and i loved it so much!!.. Seriously!!..

Pls don't hit me nah - I'll be regular now 😃

The SS is simply fantabulous 👏

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#744

first tel me onething, what made u think dt it could av been boring ny hw??

being very honest this type of update was need of this story n u av done justice to it...

this one was soft, beautiful wid loadsss of light n passionate moments

i simply loved every single thing u av written in last update...there small small moments touched me inside out , their moments were like stars sparkling every where😳

the best was "grandparents dialogue" for me dt was sumthing beautiful nt new bt d one totally apt for d situation

ur this ff actually dipped wid hotness!!!! its actually taking d element of romance frm u!!!

luv u n miss being here a lot😭

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#745

Originally posted by: heena_mehta
first tel me onething, what made u think dt it could av been boring ny hw??
being very honest this type of update was need of this story n u av done justice to it...
this one was soft, beautiful wid loadsss of light n passionate moments
i simply loved every single thing u av written in last update...there small small moments touched me inside out , their moments were like stars sparkling every where😳
the best was "grandparents dialogue" for me dt was sumthing beautiful nt new bt d one totally apt for d situation
ur this ff actually dipped wid hotness!!!! its actually taking d element of romance frm u!!!

luv u n miss being here a lot😭

I miss u a lot sweetheart 🤗

i miss discussing the stuff with you and writing with you. but what to do, studies first. everyone thinks u still write with me but they doesn't know you ditch me for german n DU 😛 😆

i donno i thot it's boring atfirst after after reading it i changed my opinion. it's actually important to show the two complete different person adjust their relationship and be with each other. and they are in a livin relationship. thye are so different so they might face difficulty in adjusting but they have greater difficult to face in the future.

thanks for liking... even i liked the grandparents thing. it shows a side of commitment. 😳

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Ankita

@Fly_high

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#746

beautiful * clap * as always I don't need to say it * smile * aww Abhay cooked for Pia and she ate all those oily food which she always avoids just for him and also she didn't let Abhay know that he forgot to put salt in 1 veg dish so that he won't be sad so sweet of her and Abhay's 45 year old boss putting eyes on him LOL see Abhay ka asar har age ki lady par yahi hota hai * LOL * loved the way both were missing eachother seriously like Abhay even I don't want to think what will happen if some day they need to get seprated from eachother forever just want them happy and together sorry like button is not working

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#747

What a lovely gift I get after I come back...eee Love love love it!

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#748

thax fr such lovely update!!!!! update was awsm!!!! its nt at all boring... y u think lyk tht????? its was stupendo fantabulsly fantastical!!! abhiya ki relationship, unki understanding was so perfect!!!!!!
and abhay ki us witchy boss ko abhiya se dur rkhana ppplzzz!
and ya abhi un dono ko thoda or khush rehne do... i no ke chand chup nhi bhethega... :-( use itni jaldi vaaps mt lana.! abhiya ko thoda or vakt ek saath bithane do!!!! and ppplzzz next 1 jaldi update kro... m waiting!!!!