Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143) - Page 76

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

read the update while listening to Raabta 😍

u can imagine my state 😍

i m lost in abhiya dreamland 😍

coming to the update, it was really a nice and romantic update. and i hope abhay's boss keeps her eyes off Abhay 😡

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Tanzie how can u call this even remotely boring? 😡 I loved it even more than your previous update It was so beautiful, the way 2 lost souls were trying to reconnect with the norms of human life. On one hand u have Pia, who was a reckless drunk diva n on the other u have Abhay who was an assassin. Its really hard to imagine anything between them but u have pulled it off brilliantly 👏Thanks a lot 😳 Thats why i had to describe their daily life..how they are trying to be in their best self being ordinary...

Abhay knew how to cook 😲 But I guess its reasonable enough since he had to stay alone for a long time. I still remember Pia's eyes going wide on seeing french fries that Abhay had got for her while she was his captive n now she's hogging on palak paneer, butter chicken, paratha n choco chip ice cream? 🤣 Kya se kya bana diya Abhay ki pyaar ne use? 😆 The part where she thinks of their grand children was so sweet 😳 Abhay being an english major was a shocker for me 😲 n now his spanish senior has the hots for him? 🤣 Poor Pia 😆 First hot super models n now senior citizens 😆 I hope Pia talks to Madhu. Though I know what Madhu did was utter cowardice on her part but still we can never fathom the reasons behind her actions 😭 Abhiya were apart for just 2 days n they were already missing each other like they hadn seen each other for eons n the last bit was hot ☺️ I loved the part where Abhay thinks of Bixie as a lazy dog 😆 Too cute. Overall a mindblowing update Tanzie n dont worry about the pace coz u balance the tracks very well 👍🏼

ditto... 😆 Love ke liye kuch bhi karega... 😆 See she didnt even care about fat, oil or her figure.. she doesnt care abt materialistic things anymore. Spanish senior will be almost blown away by Pia.. 😆 Pia will talk to Madhu but not now. Abhay is jealous of Bixie and so is Bixie 🤣 their have to share Pia's compassion thats why 😆

BTW wanted to know which breed of dog is Bixie? Don't know y but I kinda liked her 😳 it should be a white Maltese..little one..they are one of my fav kind 😳

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Outstanding update tanzie.
Each time I read ur updates I just feel that nothing can be better than this but everytime u prove me wrong. Thank you so much Romita. it means a lot me. 😳
The way u described their relationship was just brilliant.
I loved each and every part of it.
The part where piya sat on abhay's lap and it made abhay crazy, u have just shown the effect piya had on abhay, beautifully.
The part where piya said abt grandchildren, u have shown their desires to be with each other perfectly. I always portray Pia is crazy about abhya but the feelings are actually mutual. so i wanted to show tht...
wow abhay can cook too and piya wants to learn cooking from him, so cute.
I loved the summer festival part, abhay wanted to buy everything for piya and piya had to explain it to abhay, so sweet. thank you dear.
Coming to the last part their love making showed their longing and passion for each other beautifully. It was full of desires yet passionate.
U just showed piya's possisevness for abhay through that spanish lady part.
The part where abhay decided to sleep in his own room and piya's face fell, u have shown their pain and longing for each other perfectly.
I loved the way u wrote their obession, love, care, uncertanity of future and passion for each other.
glad u liked it... as I always said.. in this SS their relationship is very passionate.. though not supernatural..
All over it was a brilliant update and I don't have any words to praise ur writing skills so, no words on that.
It was not at all boring, it was just lovely.
I have never written such a big comment but I couldn't stop myself from praising this beautiful update of urs.
pls continue as soon as u get time and thanks a lot for the pm. im very glad with your long comments. it feels good when the writer sees readers actually pay attention. you are most welcome/😳

Originally posted by: flora212

WOW TANZIE..THAT WAS GREAT~!~ JUST AWSOME... PIA FEARS AND ABHAY CARING SIDE IS JUST GREAT!!!

EVERYTIME U BRINGS AN AWSOME SUPERB UPDATE THAT I HV NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE..

BUT I GOT VERY TENSED WHEN U SAID ABHAY GOING TO ROTHAD ISLAND...AS I THOUGHT CHAND WILL COME THERE!!!

ITS GOOD THAT U R TAKING THE STORY SLOW...ABHIYA MUST ENJOY NA!!!

HOPE U R PLANNING TO GIVE GREAT HAPPY ENDING!!!

LAST PART WAS AWSOME...THE ROMANTIC WAS HOOTTYYY...

UPDATE SOOON...

Originally posted by: _Sonu_

Wow..!! Love u for this amazing update Tanzie...

Abhay made lunch for Pia..aww..how cute..and Pia who refused to even touch french fries when she was literally starving..ate all the oily food Abhay made for her with so much of love...

I love the way both make each other happy by doing small things for each other...

Both are so passionately in love ..I just can't stop admiring them... Thanks Sonu. relationship is all about accepting each others flaws n traits.. so just wanted to show it like this...

He wanted to buy everything for me even on which I rarely set my eyes on. Then I have to explain it that girls look at lot of stuff to check doesn't mean they will shop everything. He just smiled and shook his head in disbelief.

This was so cute...

Moreover, Pia is tagged as 'handle with care'. She is very sensitive and irrational at times and doesn't matter she says it or not she loves me insanely. She might be frustrated with my stubbornness and often insecure about my past but deep inside I know there's noone who would love me like she does and that's why she is so possessive about me.

Loved this part Tanzie...

and someday I would love to see Pia meeting Abhay's boss..kya scene hoga..

And the last part was so hawwt...and lovely at the same time...

continue soon Tanzie...

And I would love to read this even more..if u make the story go a l'il slow..which means we would get to read small cute things which make us feel even more connected to this ss... glad u liked it dear.. pia will meet his boss soon. it will be hilarious. this SS has already became FF 😆

Hello Hii 😃
I remember you once told that you suck at writing romantic scenes. Really ? What a joke it was ?!! "Beautifully destroyed" - I read this chapter 4 times. 😈 😳 Mere bare mein jo sochna hai,soch lo. I know I am already spoiled 😎 🤣
Seriously that was the most passionate writing I have ever read. To say the least,i loved it to bits <3

The next chapter is also too too cute.. I was listening to 'dil ibadat' while reading it.. You can imagine my condition 😍
I miss pkyek so much 😭
Hoping beyond hope that we will ever get pkyek season 2 !!! 😒
Anyways, I hate abhay's boss 😡
Huh..itna kaam bhi koi karwata hai kya :-/
But the last scene compensated everything <3

Brilliant update(s) :P 🤗

Originally posted by: luckdiya

wow!!!!!!!!! its amazing😍 & nt bored at all 😃
in d mrng 1st thng which cm in2 my mind is "i hv 2 read tanzie's updt"😆😆😆 Woww..thanks a lot.. great to hear tht 😳
abhay is sooo caring d way he md lunch 4 her,at ngt dey slept in each othr embrace , piya's jealousy , obsession ,fear 4 2mrrw.👏everythng ws PERFECT!!!!!!!!! thank you so much..
i enjoyed each & every moment😳😳... last para. ws breathtakin abhiya in bathtub ...☺️☺️☺️ their relationship is very passionate so it was just a glimpse of it
pkyek is stil livin in deep in2 my hrt & all credit goes 2 u all ff writers.. thx 4 mkin it sooo special 🤗🤗🤗 this is our strategy too for reliving PKYEK in our heart..we miss abhiya 🤗

Dear update kab milega! Sorry i dont mean to distrub!

Originally posted by: flora212

Dear update kab milega! Sorry i dont mean to distrub!

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660099">Tonight after replying everyone😳</font>

yeppie i am waiting!