Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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sonia

@-Sonia-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#611

OMG OMG OMG OMG...tanzie !

That was one hot and awesome update!

Abhiya just doesn't seem to get enough of eachother..

It was perfect..sensuous & mindblowing ... totally sizzling chemistry ...want 2 read it again & again..my PC is burning r8 now ! Lol

the morning scene was gr8 ! The way piya got scared shows how much she loves abhay.. Abhay got a job .. He wants to have a normal life with piya! So sweet ! I hope, his wish is granted !

Continue soon
thanx for the pm
tc

Edited by -Sonia- - 13 years ago

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Anj01

@Anj_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#612

wow⭐️
awesome⭐️
mindblowing⭐️
fantastic⭐️
gr8⭐️
excellent⭐️
hawwttt☺️
...oh i don't remember any other words for now...so isi se kaam chala lo😆😆😆
i m still blushing☺️☺️☺️ ...it was something😳...beautiful n amazing!!!😳😉👏

abhiya r finally together!!! yippee🥳...liked their convo in bathroom😊😉...lovely
they have gone through a lot so they deserve every happiness in life😊...thank u for such hot n passionate yet lovely n beautiful update!!!🤗

Edited by anjali0111 - 13 years ago

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Sheena

@Abhiya-gunner

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#613

Wow kya update tha ☺️

loved it

i am sheena btw😊

Edited by abhiya0006 - 13 years ago

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#614

aw what a fabulous update tanzie!'it lived up to its name...beautifully destroyed...yes,they r slowly destroying the darkness of the past and building up a beautiful present...where there is only abhay piya and their love,...they vl heal each other's scars...so much passion,and love!!its hot bt their love is jst so pure nd beautiful...of course i knw the darkness will cum inevitably,bt they vl b each other's light,right??one of the best updates in ths ss..nt coz of the scenes,bt 4 the depth of their emotns

Edited by ..tora.tangled. - 13 years ago

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#615

Res(LOL tanzie teri woh darwani daat nai kuch bacho ko dara diya.Itni hot hai tu pta nhi tha😉😆😆)Oh god res hota nhi hai ki saare nikame comment karne aa jate hai.Meri jagah 1st honi chahiye thi sabko mai maar daalongi 1 din😡😆😆 ------------------------------------------------------------

Thank God I m 16+😉😆

I know tanzie tu sabko daat sakti hai but mujhe nhi.I m the only prsn who has right 2 spam & irritate u by asking 'Whn will u update? & can evn scold u if u r late 😉.So rest ppl better back off coz only I can handle her hotness:P😆😆.And nxt time better PM me b4 u res nhi toh I will push u frm Mt.Everest & u know I can do tht😈.Chalo bahut bark kar liya now time 2 comment

Haye tanzie kya hot update tha.Abhiya were lke drug.The way u described Abhay's trauma whether 2 confess his love openly or not was well described & the wild cat in Pia was evn more hot who actually forced saint Abhay 2 lose his virginity.Frankly speaking evn I thought 4 a sec ki Abhay might regret abt his passionate night but was happy 2 read tht he acted normally.And now lets come 2 the main scenes 'Abhiya's passionate & intense nite'.Ur update was oozing hot & so were my Abhiya.The way u described it was wow.Some ppl make these kind scenes luk cheap but u did it wid dignity😳.But I know ki yeh awesome post dene k baad tu tsunami pheke gi humari aur lke u did wid ur other FF'Till the end' I m still angry wid u 4 tht update😡.But koi na v all know at end Abhiya ko milna hi hai.So who is Pia's dad?Plz koi bhi ho bas Abhay k dad na ho:P😉😆😆

Love u🤗

Edited by cuteshrishti - 13 years ago

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flora212

@flora212

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#616

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
Res(LOL tanzie teri woh darwani daat nai kuch bacho ko dara diya.Itni hot hai tu pta nhi tha😉😆😆)Oh god res hota nhi hai ki saare nikame comment karne aa jate hai.Meri jagah 1st honi chahiye thi sabko mai maar daalongi 1 din😡😆😆

HEY DONT DARE OK..😆.JOH PEHLE AYGA JAGAH USSE MILEGA😎

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#617

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
Res(LOL tanzie teri woh darwani daat nai kuch bacho ko dara diya.Itni hot hai tu pta nhi tha😉😆😆)Oh god res hota nhi hai ki saare nikame comment karne aa jate hai.Meri jagah 1st honi chahiye thi sabko mai maar daalongi 1 din😡😆😆

🤣 Mein isse bhi HOT hoon... Afterall Im Abhay's fan so some qualities should be there 😎 but I dont show it... sorry i forgot to PM...next time will surely do.. still writing 😆

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#618

haw..u in new angry young woman avatar tanz!!baapre...tmar post dkhe i gt a heart attack...u write so fab..dats y nobdy cn resist asking 4 an update..bt ya its true u hav othr work..of course...take ur tym.,.and hpe ur eye infectn is ok nw

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#619

Res
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tht was really a wonderful update tanzie!!! 👏

the title was apt, perfctly in sync with their current emotional turbulence!!

Am waitng for that turn nw where d story gets evn mre darker, and destructve... wth them paving their way thru adamant diffculties by their sheer power of love!!
Hope however dark it becomes their love will shine thru till d very end!!

The pain relatd to their dark past, and their heart desparately in search of peace..ws wonderfuly described!!

Continue..awaitng d nxt part...
Thanx for the pm..
And m really very sorry for nt being able to comment n the previous update.. :(

P.s. Howz ur eyes nw? Just saw you hd an infectn!!
Hope ur mom is better nw?
Do take care of urself...

--indu

Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago