Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143) - Page 6

Originally posted by: anjali.K

the people in the prologue were abhay's parents!! so what happened to them. Are they also an important part of the story?

Originally posted by: priya.1

tanzie a diff concept n evn without supernaturals its great..

lovely start ... 😊

waiting for the nxt update...

thnx for da pm dr...

Originally posted by: PurpleFairy

Hi, Tanzie!🤗

I love the start and the concept. Abhay a s an assassin. TOO hot, man😍

Waiting for the next part. It'll be interesting to see who wants Pia dead =|

At first, I was upset at Pia being a brat because I have no patience for them but I'm already seeing other layers to her character. Waiting to see how you explore both the characters and eventually their love story.

Thanks for the PM! (:

Chapter 2 (Stalker)

PIA DOBRIYAL-a name of fame, riches, ignominy! A spoil brat, snobbish'.one can use so many adjectives like this for me n I accept them whole heartedly coz this is what I m , a 21 year old super successful model, imprisoned for drinking n driving at d age of 17, live her life on her own terms n conditions. Fantasy of every man, but not some dream fantasy like a princess one, but their fantasy of seeing me in their beds.

But I won't blame them, they are MEN, for them a girl who spend almost her every night in every damn disc on the streets of NYC, how can she refuse to become a one night stand'so TYPICAL!!'but here they are wrong, completely wrong, I m the one, who can strip in front of gathering of 1000's but hate to hear d word b***h for herself.

Today is the same, I m spending another night dancing n drinking after success of my show n throwing a shit on a man, who tries to reach me! b*****d! I said while gulping another bottle of beer'I was totally high. I got down n started making my way towards d exit from the crowd of 100 of men , who were drooling over me'but for me they all were D**s, not MEN.

I was stumbling while walking'.i passed a smile to George a young lad who was DJ there n next moment I bumped into a MAN, strange I called him a MAN'I tried to support myself bt couldn't, to my shock he put his hands around my waist, may b to support me but like always, I said 'hey MR. put your hands off me'..bt what surprised me that I didn't get d same response which I was getting till last night. He said- ok n left me, ouch- it came out of my mouth in pain. A moment later, he pulled me back n I was cursing him under me breath, I asked rudely- how could u let a lady fall, you jerk, to which he replied more rudely or should I say straightly without any single expression 'i did, wat u said. I swear, if I was in my senses, I would have hit him with my heels, but at that moment I was not even in a condition to stand on my heels, so hitting was far far away from my strength.

After dt , he said- he wl drop me, to which I replied my keys were at Jeh's office n till this time, I was totally out'.i started blabbering being a princess n all stupid stuffs'..nt paying ny head to my words, he scooped in his arms n took me to d car.

Stop 'I screamed, d moment d car came to halt , I jumped out n sat next to d car on d road , I was feeling puckish, I was holding my head which was spinning badly n then I heard his voice- beer is showing its color princess!! I started throwing d next sec ''..i was feeling terrible'.after a while I found him helping me, he took me to d car n then asked me about the way to my apartment n then about keys ''''''''''''''''''''''''''..

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Next morning

Bloody hell- my head was throbbing, I pushed my sheets away n while holding my head, I carefully lead towards kitchen, I took out a bottle of lemon soda n gulped it down only way to put my head straight in way. I made my way towards living room n fell straight on d couch only then I realized I was still in my party dress from last night. S**T - who dropped me here? I again looked down at myself carefully!! I'm still in full cloths so means nothing happened and my virginity is still intact!! My BB was ringing making my head more painful. I looked at the watch. 11am..damn..it must be my agent and best friend Misha. NYC fashion is starting next week and I'm the show stopper for the famous Designer Roberto Cavalli and I had rehearsal from 11am. I ran to receive the phone and as expected Misha shouting, "Piya, where the hell are you? This is the 7^th call and you must be having another hangover. Damn you, I have black coffee and lemon juices for you but please come to Roberto's office now. They need to finalize the dress for show stopper. You need to wear it for altering." I stammered, "So sorry Mish. Coming. Please 30 minutes."

I donno how I reached Roberto's office in 30mins. I never put too much makeup but paparazzi follow me all the time so I have to be prepared for public appearances all the time. I saw a man standing across the road and suddenly he looked familiar. .I tried to recognize him, but my BB started ringing again, I saw it was Misha. "Reached" 'I exclaimed n hung it. Before entering the building, I turned around to find out that familiar face on the opposite side of the road, but to my surprise no one was there. Pulling myself out of my thoughts, I rushed towards d Roberto's office n d moment I stepped in, I said with a high tone- "I m sorry, I m sorry, u know na'I got lil high yesterday!!"

What's new in that Pia Dobrial? Misha said while raising her eye brows. Marry send a black coffee for ma'am- misha ordered while turned her gaze towards Roberto's secretary. Fine'I m sorry 'I said, pouting like a child n hugged her! U know very well how to get me back- misha said while chirping. We decided to go for a coffee n as per our rule, no phone calls, no messages during our personal time. We both ordered our favorite Irish coffee and my eyes fell again on that same face which I located back near Roberto's office, he shifted his gaze d moment our eyes came in contact. His black hat and too much black cloth were making his face almost hidden.

What's wrong pia- misha asked while snapping her finger infront of my eyes. "Nothing serious mish, ummm do you know that guy, across the road? I said while turning my gaze towards outside, but no one was there!!!"

Who pia? There's no one. seems u r still under rush - misha said while teasing me.

After enjoying our coffee date for more than 2 hours, I took out my cell which was on offline mood n there it was 10 missed calls by Jeh. Gosh 10 missed calls, what he might b thing- I said while panicking. Don't tell me pia you are talking about your beep beep beep Jeh- misha said while showing disgusting looks just by taking his name from her mouth. Please mish, I know u don't like him- I said while taking driver seat n she adjusted herself next to me in my Porsche. Hold on Pia , who told u I don't like him- she said while confusing me. Pia darling I hate him. He just wants to sleep with all the classy models and you are his new muse. He is taking so much interest in you only because you are not so available to him like others- she said while rolling her eyes n this time I was not confused or shocked!! I knew there was no point in arguing with misha over Jeh thing'.. So I dropped the matter there.

After dropping misha , I drove to Jeh's office, parked my car leaving my thoughts behind , I started taking my steps to Jeh's office. I was waiting for the lift, coz his office was on 11^th floor. Gosh, why is it taking so long, I murmured to myself while adjusting my glares at the top of my head. I started checking messages in my BB n got so busy that I didn't bother to look while entering into the left, but soon my gaze turned towards the strong masculine body, in whom I bumped while typing'I m 'my words got dead in my mouth because he was already gone without caring about my apology. I couldn't see his face. What the hell, this can't b a coincidence, he was also covered in black just like the man I coincidently seems to meet for the third time today!!!

I was so lost in my thoughts, that I didn't realize I have reached 11^th floor. I moved out of d lift n entered Jeh's cabin. My mind was still filled with d thoughts of that stranger, only when I found someone's arms around my waist I came out of my thoughts, I didn't realize Jeh was not d office n not even when he entered!

Where were u- he asked still hugging me from behind. I got a lil smile on my face n turned around, actually Jeh I was with mish n u know the rules- I said while blinking my eyes. Your rules shouldn't apply on me 'he said while pouting, his hands were still on my waist. I again smiled- sorry Jeh, can't do anything, these rules are laid down by misha!! I just- Jeh was about to say something about misha but I stopped him, please Jeh'.u know that I can't hear anything about misha- I said, while getting a lil angry! Okay, so what will I get, if I stop complaining about your best friend? What do u mean by that Jeh? You know I never get your double meaning talks- I said, although I got the idea exactly where he was heading! "hh please, you are Piya Dobrial and pretending like a teenage who doesn't understand adult talk'huh" and his one hand was still holding my waist n another he moved towards my shoulder making the way through my arm. He slid strap of my dress a lil n kissed on my collar bone n this was something I never liked about Jeh, didn't know y his touch always made me feel creepy. I pushed him a lil, tried my best not to act like freaking plane Jane. He looked frustrated, but I was helpless'.I quietly moved to d chair n sat, I didn't apologies coz I didn't feel like to do it! After a while another co-coordinator came and Jeh started telling me about my new project with his company n after the discussion I left his office.

I came out of his office n walked towards parking lot; my head was filled with what happened back at jeh's office. I was again justifying my act to myself'it was so annoying. Maybe Misha is right.. Jeh doesn't love me but just wants to' all the guys are same. All I wanted was felt to be loved... but why I never feel it around Jeh? It's just that I like him but love is he always says love is overrated for him!!

I took my driver seat n turned on the music system, I was about to turn on d ignition n apply first gear when I saw that guy again, standing at a lil distance. I came of my car to make it sure it was not hallucinating but to my shock, he opened d door of d car , next to which he was standing n got vanished from my eyes' this time I could see his eyes'deep blue eyes'

I drove to rehearsals of my next show, my whole drive went thinking about that guy. Rest of the day I was so busy but still that blue eye stranger thoughts keep haunting me . The same day night, I n misha went for another party; there also I found someone was keeping an eye on me, but I couldn't find out anyone. After the party , I was in my full senses, thanks to mish, she didn't let me drink that day, I couldn't believe I had attended a party without drinks!!

Next 3 days , I remained very busy with my rehearsals, dress selections n practices but my fear got depend with every passing day, somewhere or other I knew someone was following my every move. Holy S***'.someone must be stalking me

n dunno y that blue eyes came infront of my eyes, whenever I thought about MY STALKER.

I had an another short of tequila, wooo, it felt amazing almost after 3 days'..one BLACK LABEL now- I ordered the bar tender, I knew whisky after tequila was not such a good combo but who on this damn earth was thinking about good ideas'while taking my glass, I stumbled towards George, my fav DJ- request by me George, I said while fumbling with words- ON THE FLOOR, JLO.

D music n I started swaying with d beats'while dancing I saw those blue eyes again, for a moment, I thought, I was under rush, I again started following d beats but his constant stares made me leave dance floor making it sure but I was not just imagining him. I was taking my uneven steps towards him n to my surprise, nooo not surprise actually I was scared, but this time he didn't get vanished. I reached to his place n said while pointing my finger towards him- U R MY STALKER.. I have been trying to catch you for days. He didn't answer and keep looking at me. His eyes' deep blue and so cold. Never seen such cold eyes that I shuddered. I tried to talk again but everything blacked out'..

When I woke up, I tried to move but something hard was disturbing my hands. I opened my eyes with difficulty but the room is so dimly light. The cold floor and the damp smell of the room is certainly unfamiliar when I realized my hands were chained. I panicked and screamed in fear'

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first of all sorry fr nt commenting on d 1st update...!! :-((

nw cming to d ss..
Amazing start nd an enthralling story...!!!
U already knw na tanzie,tht hw much i love ur writng..as well as heena's !!! So dnt evr frgt to pm me whtevr u write..!! :-))

superb job..both f you..!! Thumbsup

abhay an assasin nd piya a super model leadng a lonely lyf...nd finaly she hs been kidnappd by abhay..!!

Though its nt a supernatural story bt still it hs d mysterious nd dark aura making it even mre appealing...!!!

Bt M nt going to ask u to diverge details dis tym as m lovng dis suspense...wink

m eager to knw wht happns nxt...
Plz update soon..

And Once again ...well dne bth f u..!
Its a totally refreshng storyline...
Wht an idea tanzie.!!! Thumbsup

thx fr d pm..
Tcr..

-indu

1st congrats to both of u for ur ss and sorry i didn comment on 1st update...this update was lovely after ayshu u both are really good writers seriously publish a book..

wow great story plz update soon
what is going to happend to pia

Nice update...
OMG !! Abhay stalking piya..thats a change..lol
jeh seems like all the typical men who wants one thing..he doesnt love piya!!
Misha n piya sisterly bond is amazing..
So, abhay finally kidnapped piya!
Continue soon
thanx for d pm
tc