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Posted: 13 years ago
Dear writers, what a brilliant story 😊please don't move story too fast, I am hoping you will show pia taking care of Abhay like feeding him, or giving him a sponge bath as poor guy is too sick to take care of himself 😉 and he should continue to stay in pia's house for at least next 2 updates😆 please please😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
heena and tanzie wwow yaar way an upd I just luv your SS. poor abhay I wonder who did this to him and thank god piya saved , waiting to see the reaction of abhay seeing piya and awww poor abhay misses his mom soo much , jeh and misha well what should I say I m speechless eagaerly waiting for abhiya moment and ofcource next upd soo plsss upd soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Wow wow wow! Heena and Tanzie wonderful writing guys .thankuuu so much guys
So Jeh and Misha got married... And Piya saved Abhay's life this time- thank God Kabir didn't force her to take him to the hospital!
Poor Abhay having nightmares...at least Piya was with him. I want to read what he says when he wakes up!Continue soon guys wl try to continue soon😊



Originally posted by: abhiora

great update!!thanx tora😊oh poor abhay!!he must b in soo much pain!'bt at least abhiya r together!!! 😊




Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

thanx 4 pm.superb thanx mehga 😊update.finally abhiya met.kabir vas sweet.he helped her so mch he is a totally positive man here.




Originally posted by: Neetsandhu

Awesme update..thanx dear
Loved pia's emotions..glad u loved then
Thnxxx for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kuttu

Jai marrying Pia was truly unexpected v wanted it to b like this only. So abhay is back again in Pias life and looks like its going to be a rocky road ahead xactly, nt something smooth n all happy. Abhay injured is not a good sign. So something bad has happened after Pia left looks like.v wl b giving all d answers soon Kabir should be asking 101 questions. I admire the way you have potryaed him a best friend who did not even question her. glad u liked hi character

So what is abhays next mocve scare her away again.




Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

Lovely update both of u thanx rashu😊hehe heenu thanks for the warning of teary eyed update i am ready with my paper napkins.hehehehe..aww still crying yaar




Originally posted by: -Sonia-

wow
amazing update
loved it

thanx a lot sonia n glad u loved it
finally abhiya meet with each other.. Yippee .. The wait is over..
Why was abhay in such bad state when piya found him! wl b getting ur answes most probably in nxt update
Continue soon wl try our best😊
thanx 4 d pm
tc



Originally posted by: priya.1

brilliant writing heena n tanzie👏 thanx dear😊

pia saved abhay... good that kabir didnt force pia much to take abhay to the hospital & helped her save his life😃 he is a true to her n he acted d same in dt situation
poor abhay... having nightmares 😔
but who shot abhay? 😕 was it the police or his gang? wl b getting ur answer soon
good that pia is with him ... he really needs someone to care about him..😊
continue soon guys...wl try


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Wow splendid update. thanx dear😊Abhiya meeting once again was really different. I am happy as kabir is with piya here glad. Hope that Abhay get well soon. Jay and Misha wedding was also nice. Ur story is really mysterious. thanx once again pls update asap v wl try our best😊and add me in ur pm list.sure😊






Originally posted by: raichandroxx

Oh my my this was a mindblowing update thanx dear😊
abhay was shot nd bitten 😲 😲 i wish he becomes fine soon...he wl bt sure it wl take some time😉

another astonishng thing JISHA MARRIED?????? 😲 chalo atleast isme jeh abhiya k bich to nai ayega...heheheh...
kabir is a true frnd he helped pia i m glad abt it 😊 n v r glad dt u r glad abt it😊
i cant wait to read futher plz update asap ur story is soo amazng... 👏 ⭐️ thanx n v wl try tp update soon




Originally posted by: -sunshine--

hi heena& tanjiee! hi dear, may v knw ur name?😊

i jst loved this ff!its awesome! thankuu so much for ur warm words

now abhay had bitten by his boss-i think may b😉-i read it alwys...waitng eagly for nxt chptr!


do pm me& add me .k.! sure

thank u very much for this ff! completely our pleasure

love u both! v love u tooo



Originally posted by: luckdiya

beautifulll.wrk... heena & tanzie...thanx alot diya
luved it... glad u loved it😊
omg!!!! j & misha gt married... i m surprised... 😉 v preferred to keep this thing under wraps only
oh kabir is sooo swt...he helped pia ...& abhay
feeling bad 4 abhay...he ws shot & beaten... & pia is changed nw... totally😳
continue soon i really wnt 2 read abhay's reactionsss... wl try
thanks 4 d wonderful ss dear...our pleasure



p.s- diya ur emoticons r damn cute...😳


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: .rumki.

beautiful wonderful update heena and tanzie thanx dear
finally abhiya met
but abhay was beaten by his master,why? ummm, wl b giving ur answer in nxt update
Kabir is very kind.he helped pia
the part where pia cried touching abhay's coat was really heart touching glad u loved dt part😊
finally abhay got conscious.why u have stopped at this place? hehehe😛now cant wait 4 next update





Originally posted by: anjali0111

ohhh superb update!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏 u both deserve a big hug!!!! 🤗 thankuu so much dear for ur sweet hug😳

first i was shocked to read abt jeh-misha's marriage!!!!!! 😲 😉

n as u said that abhiya will meet in nxt update so i was eagerly waiting for this update but never imagined that they will meet like this.😲...in such circumstances... ok, v r reli glad dt this story is xactly shaping d way v wanted, always giving surprises to u all.that was a total surprise for me😲. so fianlly pia had developed feelings for abhay😉...although unknowingly...waiting for abhay's response.😍

u have beautifully described pia's pain which she was feeling for him.😔.thanx ..i also felt like crying.😭...n that scene where she held his jacket..😭...awesome!!! glad u found dt scene worth appreciating 👍🏼very beautiful portrayal of her mixed feelings of love, longing, pain, confusion etc.😊

n the way she managed to console him abt his mom was amazing!!! 😊 😊 it made me pity on him...poor abhay..😭..suffered a lot. now jus waiting for their conversation...update soon. sure wl try




Originally posted by: ANTARA-2244

Caught the last 3 updates together!! Fabulous job done by Tanzie n Heena!!👏 thanx a lot dear Plz update da next chap soon!! v wl try😊Can we get sum close AbhIya moments!!😳


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: m-g19



thanx dear, glad u found it beautiful😊



Originally posted by: rashi.rose

OMG Hillarious update... Great..thanx rashi😊.




Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek

finally abhiya met...pia was awesum n misha n jeh OMG!!!...AWESUM UPDT..thanx a lot dear😊.CONTINUE SOON sure wl try😊


Originally posted by: pkyekfanclub

awesome Heena n Tanzi thanx alot dear boy Jeh married Misha was really unexpected yaar😆 😉but happy for them 😊 n finally Abhay is back in Pias life n it was so sweet of Kabir 2 help Pia save glad u liked it Abhays life poor Abhay something bad must have happened with him 2 make him reach in this condition 😭 Pia has got 2nd chance in her life want d same for Abhay both of them has gone through so much they deserve their happy ending with each other. hope so, for this all u av to wait for a while😉



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mandy1024

WOW that was some reunion I must say 👏 Brilliantly written. thanx a lot dear I am lost for words. Loved the unspoken bond Pia felt for Abhay More intense than any other story so far. v r totally glad dear dt u found our ff worth reading n enough good to put ur warm words here So Pia now knows that his mom was killed by his dad? 😭 Poor Abhay. Why was attacked in the first place? Was it bcoz of Pia? n't answer nw But Arnab had paid off his debts. Then y? U guys bring on dramatic twists and I simply love them. This is too good. Wanna see a screen adaptation of the same.omg, thanx n wish it could happen😊

So we finally have Jisha in this SS? 😳 Happy for them 😊 Waiting to see some intense Abhiya moments where Pia will be able to break down all the walls Abhay has built for himself n reach out to him.may b u wl get them or may b nt 😆 Abhay made sure that Pia realised life does give second chances n now want Pia to show the same to Abhay. Please give this SS a happy ending with a happy Abhiya 😊 phewww" don't demand so much"😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
Must say that our forum is blessed with Amazing writers!
You both being two among the best...love u two dears!
Human beings are more intriguing than supernaturals in my opinion,
Becoz none except our Creator can ever really figure us out, hain na?
U bth have done a brilliant job portrayin the complex,subtle yet plain at time emotions of Abhay and Piya
Thank u for this treat dears!
Hugs nd love
Nidha
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing...loved it...continue sooonnn
thanx for the pm dear...

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