Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143) - Page 26

Originally posted by: anjali0111

thanks for pm!!!!!😊

awesome update!!!!👏👏👏 thanx dear😊

abhay is human yet so complicated in this ss😕...far more diff frm other stories n the way u r dealing wid his character (a murderer wid sum humanity still left in the corner of his heart) is jus amazing.👏⭐️👏. its nice to hear😊.he is so ruthless n cold that anybody can hate him...bt u made me luv him by showing his kind side❤️...so basically he is a assassin wid principles...right!!!😳 ummm, yuppp u cn say dt😉😉 "ASSASSIN WID PRINCIPLES"😊

pia's condition makes me hv pity on her😭...poor soul...first troubled past then empty luvless life was nt enough that nw she has been kidnapped n tortured 😭...n on the top of that she is feeling sumthing for her kidnapper!!!!🤪 Hehehehe...

bt actually this story is kinds like this only, dark, sad n painful

liked the way u described their confusion abt each other, kind of sexual tension building between them😳...n the way they r trying to stop themselves frm thinking abt each other!!!!😉 gr8!!! thanx😊😊

they hv developed empathy towards each other bt luv still seems far away.dts true😊..hw u gonna make them fall in luv 😍.diff to answer😉..will be eagerly waiting fr that.

continue soon.😊 sure

Originally posted by: kuttu

Is Pia breaking down the barriers he has erected for himself looks like that. But somehow the story doesn't seem to have that fariy tale effect where in the girl falls for the bad guy and he turns out to be an angel exactly this is nt a fairy tale . Abhay here seems to have some serious issues and very indifferent inspite of his considerations for Pia his considerations for pia is nt something out of his nature , he has same principles n he is simply working on them. And Pia she is having this sense of security with him Will he break that cn't answer nw. And why did Pia have to spell out the one week point in he rlife to Abhay so is going to use that against her.may b sometimes u find someone worthy enough to share ur biggest secret n rest depend d listener how he takes it😉

This is getting to be pretty intense now. hmmm

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

awsum update dr!!!!! tanazie n heena u r a brillient writer!!!!! thanx alot akshi😊

i loved it.. its fabulus...glad u loved it

are dey falling 4 each other.. about pia i m sure... but abhay is always so cold!!!! no they r nt falling in luv , this is a simple pull , dts too frm pia's side

i m loving dis different abhay!!!

finally pia tell abhay all d truth!!!!!

i hope he will understand pias pain...u wl get d answer in nxt update😉

n plzz give happy ending... dont give a tragic 1 plzzz...cn't promise dear😉

cont soon sure n thanks 4 d pm

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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awesum...beautiful...marvellous update 👏🤗 thanx indu😳
heena n tanzie...hats off to both of you... 👍🏼 awww😳
'tht room ws almst like mine empty n full of darkness' i lovd dis lyn..its so ironical..! ! glad😊
'I cnt deny is evn n darknss...cold-blooded nd deadly' oh...dis abhay is irresistable.. 😳 heheheh
Pia hs gt a glimpse of d real persn inside him... hmmm, she has
She is makng abhay uncomfortable ,quite natral,he isnt usd to d situatn of a victm depndng n hm(a assasin) ... 😲 dts true, any of his victim never gt so dependent on him like pia
Abhay's tryng hs best to terrify hr.. ya, coz dts his job😉
And dis 1 ws amazng..'WTH does he thnk of hmslf' omg pia will nevr change..! She is messing wth an assasin..!! this gal has all d guts😆
'I ws also nt ready...sum hlples woman...although ws 1 at tht moment' and tht ws humorous!! 😆
'd way she bats hr eyelashes...thoroughly distrbng me' aahaa..so our handsum assasin is fallng fr hs victim..!! ❤️ ummm nt xactly like u urself said abhay has never gt his victim depending on him so much
Oh..d way she refusd to eat d french fries ws Class ! Pia n only pia cn behave lyk dis...!! 😳
I Lovd dis line...'how stubborn,brave nd rathr intrepid...she does wat she says' that is why she is choosen for abhay... 😉 n i loved ur line😉
And by askn abhay , y is he so complex, pia hs set hr foot into AR's World..i thnk..!!! 😉😳 lets c , cn't say😆
Poor pia..she's havng a hard tym..
'took out a t-shirt n put it...distrbg me!' mm..abhay's gttng too much distrbd lately..!! 😉 of course his victim is nt a normal one this time😆
Ohh...poor abhaiya..bth need eachothr...hope thy find solace soon...!!! too early to say sumthing
M feelng the heat nd passion of d unspokn romance already...!!! 😍😳 u r hoping over hope😉

All ovr..its an mindblowing update...!!! 👏 thanx
Bth of you are doin a fav job... 😃
Do update soon... 😊 sure wl try

-Indu

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

r u guys updating soon????

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

nopes akshi, it wl take time!

Originally posted by: TISA07

ooohhh .. . . .i love this rough abhay.sooo hoottt .☺️glad dear u r loving him😉nw he knows all about piya.what will he do? u wl get d answer soon😊

Originally posted by: neha_dubey1709

thanks for the pm dear... Loved the update glad u loved it, thanx... Continue sooonnn :-) sure wl try😊