Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: hema_rawat
amazing update dear ..
abhay ,pia sufferd a lot ..
u descibe deir feelngs so well
panchi pia's mom 😆
nd dat rob😡 abhay should have killed him ...
pia knows dat abhay is a murder bt she feels safe whn he is around ...😊

Thanks Hema. Pia's feelings around Abhay will be very confusing...

Originally posted by: DonIsback
Awesome update tanzie.. But panchi pia's mother. God that funny but still I like the idea. Wow abhay feeling something for pia & pia she is not scare to him but trust him. Lets see how she fell in love with him

Thanks Prati 😳

I like the idea too 😆 Their feelings will be very complicated towards each other but yet they will simply feel safe... n different.

Originally posted by: flora212
Wow! Kya baat hah! Exelent update!! Ek baat mujhe samajh nahi araha, u said at starting that a girl with a baby leaving a man alone is it abhay and pia. I think abhay is feeling something fr pia. Lets see how abhay and pia falls fr each other. Hope u will give a happy ending! Now its henna's turn...i think.thanks fr pm.continue soon...

Thanks Flora 😳 No the man and woman in prolouge are Abhay's parents. Haseena and Bill...

Errr.. im not sure i will give it a happy ending or not...😕

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Akshi0019
awsum dr!!!! its really fabulus... so abhay started having soft corner 4 pia!!!! he has started caring 4 her!!! pia resembles his mom... i m loving it... d dream dat abhay have was really terible abhay killing pia.. i hope dat will never happen!!! but abhay killed john dat too in front of pia.. dats not gud!!! i loved d last part when abhay came 2 rescue pia!!! i hope he will start loving pia soon...
cont soon waiting 4 d next part.. n thanks 4 d pm...

Thanks Akshi. He has just started connecting with Pia. The dream is his fear about himself... nothing else. He is a killer... dark hero so dont expect good things from him. 😕

Originally posted by: abc123ca
awsome awsome...!!!!👏👏
loved it...👏👏
it was amazing...👏👏
love has started...yo...😃
continue soon...😊
Can't wait to read more...😃😆

Thanks a lot. Love is still very far... will continue soon. 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

Dear plz do try to give happy ending,plz. ITS A REQUEST!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: shivanirajput
awesome update tanzie
damn it was really good
abhay and pia's past was really scary i guess that will help them get together to feel each other emotionally
abhay saved pia and the emotional turmoil he was going through was described vividly
pia is already getting attracted to abhay thats gr8 hope abhay won't handover this "assignment" to anyone else
thanks for the pm and do update soon

Thanks a lot Shivani. in this SS abhay and Pia's connection will be very different from my other FF..not soulmate type but still very strong... 😳

Originally posted by: vampireking
first chapter :it was the wasy abhay behaved with piya !!its too goood 😆
second chapter :jay hold piya from behind dont like it !!
third chapter :just one word awesome !!the way abhay cares for piya is goooddd...i just loving it ❤️please !! please !!please !!show some real romance also😳update soon !!cant wait to read more

Thanks a lot. They dont even know each other till now properly... How do you expect romance from me 😆

Will write romance when its needed.. have patience 😳

Originally posted by: meerubzara
tanzie fabulous update...
abhiya pov"s r beautiful writen i loved it...
w8ing 4 nxt thx 4 pm

Thanks dear. Glad u liked it 😊

Originally posted by: abhiya07
amazing update!!!

abhay is already falling 4 pia!!!

Thanks. But no.. 😆 he is certainly not falling for her since he is very practical about life and knows it's not possible. He is just feeling different... it will take time. 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: mandy1024
Awesome update Tanzie 👏 Very well written 😃 Felt so bad for Pia 😭 n Abhay's past was also disturbing I really hope we get to see Abhiya romance soon 😳 It'll be nice to see how the bond develops between the captive n the kidnapper 😊 Please update soon.

Thanks a lot Mandi 😳 Since two are too much different people to fall in love it will take some time to fall in love but their pain will bring them together 😳

Originally posted by: anjali.K
OMG, amazing chapter Tanzie👏. This is the best piece of writing I have ever read even from accomplished authors. Kudos to you and Heena for this FF yaar. Are you a literature student. Seriously, this FF, till the end, broken mirror and love and deception should be published.

In just one update, you showed Abhay's transformation from a ruthless assassin to a kind hearted person. The love story hasnt started but I can feel the heat and passion already.
Continue soon!😊

OMG... thankss soo much Anji... you really made my day... I'm sure Heena will feel the same. It was such a huge compliment 😳

Their love story is different... they are themselves very different to fall in love but still they will fall each other... and their pain will bring them together 😊

Originally posted by: peehu24
awesome tanzie! Oh my! Abhay n piya both have scary past! Bt abhay is so mixed of emotions! U can never predict him! And the best part..piya is affecting him to the core!

Thanks Peehu... yes Abhay is always unpredictable and their past is more painful and it will be unleashed through time...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

Darling Will you update today? *Blinking eyes hopefully:-)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
Darling Will you update today? *Blinking eyes hopefully:-)

We are both working on the next chapter Snig... Don't think can finish tonight... but by tomorrow for sure 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: Jiya_tariq
Hey! Brilliant update dear plz add me in ur pm list and send me a buddy request! I m jiya.

Thanks Jiya. You are added to my PM list 😊

Originally posted by: pallavisarkar
thnx for d pm
gr8t n very interesting 👏👏
cont soon

Thanks dear 😳

Originally posted by: bellaaa
lovely update...poor piya abhay saw his mom in piya wow so thts y abhay is not so hard to piya...great scene when abhay saved piya to tht rob ...piya liked abhays face waiting 4 next update cont soon

Abhay hasn't felt any warmth, emotion or he has no one to whom he is emotionally attached. it was only his mom. when someone lik that suddenly comes...its difficult to keep your usual self infront of her... 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni
superb update tanz .

ahh abhay past was very dreadful . abhiya romance start with fight . but i loved this update . and abhay totally different here .. wonderful update tanz .
continue soon .

Thanks Sandy. Abhay really is different here. No doubt he is the hero but we don't have any intention to make him hero type.. he is a dark hero 😉

Originally posted by: sweetmonaya
I really love love love your story I mean it's just sooo amazing I really loved the abhay is caring for piya and loved piya personalty and poor abhiya both of them lives were hell before and just love this khadoos but caring abhay , hey plsss don't set piya free soon I know it's not gud but I m just loving this romance , awesome work tanzie and hena plsss update soon loved it

Thanks a lot dear. Pia will be free soon and that's how everything will change... because destiny will make them see each other again... thanks a lot for all the compliments dear... 😳