Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Hello my dear readers,

Me and Heena are both on our toes... very busy with work and studies... she is working on the next chapter right now. Once I'm done with replying everyone... will update... so please have and patience and be with us 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
Panchi is Pia's Mom??? how in the world did you come up with that???🤣 If I portray Panchi as a teenage mother its convincing.. n im crazy so these types of crazy ideas are normal for me 🤣

Now for the main thing I am simply short of words. Abhay's past, Pia's past. These two are like lost souls who may find solace in each others. Lets see. This is too beautiful Thanks a lot dear... glad u liked it 😳

Originally posted by: minibsp2007
Superb part abhay started developing feelings for pia wow that man should get more kicks from abhay continue soon

Thank you dear. He has simply started to feel something so it will take time. 😳

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu
What???panchi pias mom 🤣 🤣 🤣 gud tanzie...fab update...these both r meant 4 each other...

I know you are happy that I made her Pia's mom 😛 😆 Offcourse Abhiya belong to each other 😳

Originally posted by: sukusnavnit
awesome update beautifully thought and put into words 👏 .eagerly waiting to know what is more in store. 👍🏼

Thanks a lot dear. Will update soon 😳

Originally posted by: luckdiya
awesome...🤗 update... abhay is sooo swt... thanks 4 pm⭐️ & continue soon...👏

Thanks a lot Diya. Glad u liked it

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: priya.1
tanzie awesome update!!!!
a firecracker as da title suggests!!!
panchi pia's mom 🤣🤣 dat ws da best part 😆
so abhay already feels for pia...
both abhay n pia hd a painful past... 😔
continue soon dr... waiting for da nxt chap😍

I thought of bringing something funny because this SS is way too serious. so made Panchi Pia's mom 😆

Both have seen too much pain and it's their pain which will bring them closer 😳

Originally posted by: .rumki.
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awesome update tanzie👏
abhay and pia both were firecrackers😆⭐️
so abhay already feeling 4 pia gr8👏 and Pia in last i think totally fall 4 abhay😃
u made panchi as pia's mom lol😆🤣
abhay is killer yet he is kind as he saved pia😛
so chand killed hassina😲 then who adopted abhay? and how abhay became a killer?

Thanks a lot Rumki. No one has fallen for anyone here... their relationship will be very strange here and they will always feel each other... i hope I will be able to describe them as I have imagine 😳

Here Chand is not Abhay's father. I have written Abhay's father's name: Bill.

Originally posted by: abhiora
jst wow tanzie!!i have no words..the spark is already there between these two firecrackers!!! omg!!the writing was sooo vivid nd realistic!!i cud picture the scenes!!they have many things in common even though they r poles apart!!they already sizzle my cell screen!!

Thank you so much Tora. Yes...they are miles apart but the pain will always bring them closer 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: Rmuk
Nice update. I liked the way Abhay saved pia from Rob. I want Abhay to come to good path soon. Thanks for the pm and update soon. Pls pm me after updating.

Thanks you. Lets see because he is deep into the darkness and it wont be easy for him to comeout. will PM you 😳

Originally posted by: anukrati
WOW
SUPERB UPDATE
TANZIE
love u dear what a update
omg abhay kidnapper and killer.
abhay pia both have a tearful past.really love the idea. haseena is dead sad and i guess that plump man is chaand.
ABHAY-pia pov is superb. she feel safe when abhay is around so sweet
rob is jerk love the way abhay fight for pia .really excited 4 next update .i guess next will done by heena
waiting update soon
AND THANKS A LOT FOR PM

Thanks a lot dear. No no...Chand is not here. the plump man is simply another killer from the gang.

Yes, next will be donw by Heena 😳

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek
awesome...abhay was so sweeet

Thank you 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
Awesome update
I loved it tanzie
Oh so tht incident made abhay heartless
Pia is mesmerized watching abhay's face
I cant wait 4 more
Now its heena turn 2 update
Loved it
Plz cont
Luv u
🤗

Thanks a lot Shrish. yea it's Heena's turn. Luv u too n study well...I know you have exms 🤗

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
thanks for pm:))
awsum update
luvd it
pia is indeed very fiesty..would love to see her interaction with abhay...

Thanks a lot for liking it dear 😳

She is very different from my other FFs/SSs here 😳

Originally posted by: rashi.rose
WOWWW... AMA4NG UPDATE dear:-) loved it:-)

Thanks a lot 😳

oh dear both abhay and pia had troubled childhood and both are surrounded by darkness in a way. hope they find solace in each other.

They both has endured too much pain now time to lessen it 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: love-piya-abhay
love it ))) amazing start

Thank a lot

Originally posted by: kuttu
Felt very bad for Abhay. He seems to have become so cold blooded because of his bad past. I think Pia has already penetrated the dead heart of his. So now what is it going to be is he going to go against the master. And Rob he deserved it.

Kind of. Pia's pain has already touched him. he will feel connected to her because of their horrible childhood.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: PrincessKhizra
👏OMG... Tanzie that was superb yar, this ss is even more darker than any supernatural story. n abhay is also very ruthless that i wanted to hate him (for the 1st tym in my life) but his mercy towards piya compensated the loss n yar this is the SUCCESS of WRITER's way of expressing a character, evn if the character is favourite for sm 1 u can make the reader to hate him with the magic of ur words n at the same tym u make the reader to love him again amazing yar... 👏 👏 👏 Thanks a lot dear... such huge compliments 😳 Yes.. abhay's character is very dark here and that's how I wanted to portray him but his softer side will be unleashed by Pia... through processing... it will take time.

I just loveddd the way Abhay cares for Piya 😳
I think v'll hv to wait for a long tym to c their love blooming bcoz both r hard nut to crack n especially the circumstances r mosttt worst (she evn saw him killing jhon) 😕
Anyways, hope for best, n i must say that this part was 1 of ur bestest loved it HATS OFF TO U 🤗 Yes...their love is not supposed to be a love at first sight here...

Yar i wanna say smthing, hmmm... as v know that u n heena both r writers of the story then plzzz try to update ths ss twice a week (with 3 days interval), but if possible update it daily 😉 u know na how greedy i m in ths matter 😳
so plzzz... update soon...
❤️ Haww... are you trying to kill us? 😲 See we could barely update even a week and you want daily update thn it will finish very soon na so please keep patience 😆 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: anjali0111
wow amazing update!!!!👏

so abhiya finally started falling for each other.😉.

i loved the part where pia called out abhay's name for help n he helped her by kicking that 🤬 rob n took her out of there...

both of them went thru a lot in the past.😔...i hope soon they'll together n abhay will protect her frm his master...😍

i also liked it where pia saw his face n thought he cud give all the male models a tough competiton.😉...hey that can be used as perfect happy ending i guess.😆😆😆

update soon.😊

Thanks a lot Anjali 😳 Its not falling not actually FEELING 😳 It will take time to fall in love since here itz never gonna be love at first sight 😕

Rob will suffer more...no worries 😆 Their painful past will make them feel connected. I donno if I will be able to give it a happy ending... noting is decided... me and Heena will think about it as the story continues 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#179

WHN R YU GOING TO UPDATE 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: sdoll
awesome update tanzie... panchi pia's mom!!🤣🤣hmm, so feeling r getting stronger ...😍thnx 4 the pm..

Thanks dear 😆

Originally posted by: pkyekfanclub
beautiful update Tanzie 👏 😊both Abhay n Pia r lost souls n have a troubled n painful past yaar feel bad for them😭 so Arnab Dobriyal is a drug dealer hmmm n this Abhay aaahhh what should I say about him loving him this way n u made Panchi Pias mother 🤣 n that 🤬Rob 😡 good Abhay kicked him he deserves more this is what i want 2 do 2 him 😡

Thanks dear. Glad u liked Panchi being Pia's mother... she wont be here in the story or she might be...Lets see.

Rob is more to be kicked...😆