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Posted: 13 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

amazing dr... gr8 start... is abhay did all dis?? u always write amazing story...

cont soon n thanks 4 d pm

akshi news paper mein kidnaping news padi to idea a gaya .😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great start...i'm already loving this..continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni

akshi news paper mein kidnaping news padi to idea a gaya .😆

gud dr... acha idea tha!!!!!
ayse idea humesha tumhe aate rahe!!!!!
😆😆
chal kal final prac hai... wish me luck
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I thought I was reading Interview with the vampire only it was about the vampire by his victim. Chal continue kar aur tadpao humain apne updates ke intezaar main
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting story. Who is the kidnapper??
continue soon sandy. It sounds quite exciting👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sounds wonderful Sands !! N finally u bringing up Abhay as a vampy is great 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: peehu24

lovely concept! Is it abhay who did this? Or he is the saviour? Continue soon..
P.S : U were getting bored na sandy? Then update ur other ff na..update hum tum na 😆


agree😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akshi0019

gud dr... acha idea tha!!!!!

ayse idea humesha tumhe aate rahe!!!!!
😆😆
chal kal final prac hai... wish me luck

best of luck for prac 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beware guys its kind of filler . 😆 isle pahle hi warning de rahi hn . thnx everyone who like concept . here is first part hope u like it .
part 1


"pia, do you think I look ok?" misha asked, as we got out of the car in the parking lot. She was beautiful. She was tall

and slim,with a flawless face. Her eyes were a toasty brown, and she had long, full, golden brown hair. "You look

stunning." I replied. "Really?" she asked, looking down at herself. "Yes really! Your so modest. That green dress

makes you look even better." I smiled. "Thanks." she smiled back. We walked across the street to the club. The usher

took a good long look at us, then let us in."What a perv!" misha exclaimed, as we walked up to the bar. I smirked, then

looked up at the bartender "Can we get two Cozmos over here?" I asked"Can do!"he winked. I reached into my wallet

to get my money out , but a hand flew up and stopped me. My eyes followed the hand up to its owners face. A very

handsome face. "I'll get this for you, ladies. "the man said, pulling out his wallet. misha giggled. But he didn't look at

her, he never took his eyes off me. "Thank you." I said, with no emotion. "You're welcome." he smiled.

He handed the bartender the money as he came back with our drinks. We took them. "So who are you?" misha asked

the man,taking a big swig of her Cozmo."kabir, and you two are?" he asked. "I'm misha, and she's pia."misha answered

for me. The question was directed at me. He was only looking at me,but it was obvious that misha had calmed him for

herself. I took a long drink, will staring at kabir,and by the time the glass came away from my mouth the drink was gone.

He laughed at me, then call the bartender for another. As the night went on, we got more and more drunk. kabir kept

buying us drinks. We danced, and I think misha made out with kabir at some point, but I don't remember. It felt like we

danced forever, before I had to stop. I felt sick."Hey guys, I'm gonna go sit down! Ok?! "I yelled at them over the loud

music.

They nodded wearily, still bobbing their heads to the plus. I sat in a booth,fare from the dance floor. I put my head in

my hands. When I looked back up, I saw guy. He looked at me, like I was only thing in the world. I frowned. He didn't

stop looking. I sighed,and decided to go home. I walked over to kabir and misha on the dance floor,and told them I

was leaving. "So soon?!"misha yelled. "Yeah, I'm not feeling so good!" I yelled back. "All right. See you later!" she

smiled. "Bye kabir. Nice to have met you!"I yelled to him. He turned and winked."You too!" I walked away, to the

outside doors. When I stepped outside, I got dizzy. My vision blurred. I stumbled to the curb to pick up a cab. I saw a

yellow blob of color coming toward me, so I held my hand out. It stopped in front of me. I felt for the door handle, then

the door opened. I slipped into the car.

"Ummm...Can you take me to-"I didn't finish,because I felt a hand stroke my leg. I flinched away."What the hell!" I

snapped. The hand pulled away and the car started to move. I didn't want to be trapped in a cab with a perv. "Pull

over!" I yelled. I heard a low chuckle, then a hand clutched my neck and squeezed! I tried to scream, but nothing came

out. Then I lashed out at my attacker. He never let go of my neck!I fell over in the leather set, and darkness over took

me.
...
I was woken up by yelling. My eyes flicker open. The man who kidnapped me was standing at the end of my bed with

(himself?) I thought. I was seeing doubles. They both looked like the same person. They were twins. "aryan(BAD ONE), what were you thinking?" the other man, I didn't know said to my kidnapper. Aryan. "She is just so beautiful. I

couldn't let her go." aryan explained. "Yes, brother she is beautiful. But, you know you're not in the best of health.

"aryan's brother said soothingly. I coughed. The men turned. The brother went to run to the bed, but aryan stopped

him. "abhay, no. Stay away from her. "he growled. "Why?" abhay asked, confused. aryan didn't awsure. abhay pushed his brother's arm away, and ran to my side. "Miss, are you all right?" he asked. "No." I said weakly. He sighed. "What

did he do?" he asked. "He..." I didn't finish because I began to cry. He looked scared for me. He stud up and went to

untie me, but aryan ran at him at an inhuman speed! aryan through his brother across the room, into the wall. I gasped.

"What are you!?" I asked, in a scream.

He looked at me, his teeth bared like an animal, his eyes fierce. "You don't need to know." he growled. abhay got up off

the floor,brushing himself off. "We are vampires." he hissed. I was shocked. "I'm telling mother and father." abhay said

to aryan. "I'll just tell them you told her what we are." aryan snapped. "I don't care." abhay said walking out of the room.

(How old are they? To old to toddle on each other, and vampires?) I thought. aryan scowled at me. I looked innocently

back at him. "Father is going to kill you." he told me. I shook my head. "You know what we are. He won't like that. "he

said, leaving the room. (I'm going to die!!) I thought. I began my thrashing again, and screaming. I could hear over my

screams, the brothers fighting. They were fighting over me. "Our family is on their way." abhay told his brother. "She is

mine!I found her! You can't have Father take her away." aryan yelled. "Its to late aryan.

Everyone knows you have a mental disability, the people in your head are getting to you,and you're not supposed to

torture your food! "abhay yelled back. (I'm his food?)" There not people! There her! She is in my head!"he roared. I

stopped screaming.(Me? I'm in his head?) I asked myself. "Your crazy! That makes no scene! Our family will be here

tomorrow night, go to bed. "aryan said. I heard stomps, then a slamming door. Someone sighed, then the door to my

room opened. I tensed, not knowing which twin it was. He walked to the bed. "Miss, I'm sorry." he said. It was abhay.

"I'm pia." I whispered. "pia. That's a beautiful name." he told me. "abhay?" I whimpered. He smiled at his name, not the

smile of his brother, a soft, warm smile."Yes,pia?"he replied. "What's happening?" I breathed, tears running down my

face. He wiped the tears from my cheeks."You have the right to know. I don't think you're going to like it though, sweety.

"he said softly. I took in a shaky breath. "My family is coming here tomorrow to access the problem with my twin.

My Father wants you dead. I told you what we are, and now you must pay for my mistake. I'm sorry. But, I will do

whatever I can to protect you. "he told me. I gasped." I can't die. Please, don't let me die, abhay. "I pleaded. He

touched my face." I promise, I will do everything I can and more. "he whispered. I stared into his deep blue eyes. He

looked away from me and got up. He walked to the door. "Don't go." I begged. He kept walking. "At least untie me?

abhay, don't leave me here alone! He try to rape me! Your brother try to rape me! Please come back! "I screamed.

He rushed back to me in that speed faster than light,and put his hand over my mouth. He glared at me, until I calmed

down.

Then he removed his hand and wiped the tears that had escaped my eyes. "I won't leave. But, you must stop

screaming. "he hissed. I nodded." Good. You should sleep. "he said." I can't sleep. I'm scared. When I fell asleep

before, I couldn't help it. "I told him." If you promise you will sleep, I will untie you. "he bargained. I thought this over. (If

I'm untied,I can run.) I nodded."Alright. I promise to sleep."He smiled and began to loosen the straps on my wrists and

ankles. When the ties were off, I curled into a ball, as I had wanted to earlier. abhay laid beside me, watching my body

tremble. He reached out toward me and I flinched away, afraid. He sighed, then closed his eyes. I closed mine as well.


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Edited by abhiyan_soni - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏👏👏great concept⭐️⭐️⭐️continuue soon😉

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