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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sonia-


AWESOME UPDATE
loved it..
I feel so bad for abhay..
Jeh is so evil..hate him..
I hope, piya remembers everything soon
thanx for d pm
continue soon
tc



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of the story



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

dt was an amazing update dear

i so hate jeh...plss i want pia to gte her memory back..or taleast i want her to fall in love wid abhay again



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: love-piya-abhay

very nice ff please write more i am waiting it eagerly




THANX YAR!!!😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luckdiya

oh!!!!!!!!! poor abhay
i hate jay😡
update soon dear


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni

lovely update dear .

poor abhay feeling bad for him .
hope pia soon remember his past.
jey i hate this man .
waiting for next part .




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Posted: 13 years ago
osm yaar i want abhiya reunited
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Posted: 13 years ago
how much takes time to up date next ,please write fast
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update.. sorry maine ate padha was out of station

thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for late update ...😳

PART 10
INDIA
KURANA'S HOUSE
JEH'S POV
y did u made me do this pia y..i told u be quite but u...i
loved u i cared for u...but damm it abhay came between us...and my
other damm secert...that secert runied everything...everything...i still remember...when electricity went out i went inside the icu and picked u up..but u woke up and started shouting..my other men
replaced u by a burned body and put the fire in ...i carried u from
back door but before going we could hear abhay voice ...but i put
my hand on ur face...took u away...later we reached an broken
factory put u down but u stood up and slap me...and said"jeh what
the hell?"she was breathing fastly...and ofcousre u need rest."pia
i luv u""shut up jeh!!...just shut up""pia,,,""i hate u did u hear
i hate u...how can u do this to ur best firend...jeh abhay cares
for u...and u ...grrr!!u disgust...u make me sick""i hold her from
her shoulder..."oh c'mon...i luv u more then him"...with
confidence u said"u never understood abhay...when he will know
about how much pain u have given to his pia...he will kill u!!!i m
only and only abhay's...did u hear me?..i was,i m and i will be
abhay only...""oh really?..then i will kill ur little child and ur
sweet abhay"..u slap me again"don't u dare try u threaten me!! abhay
will protect my and his child...""pia u even don't know that ur
child his a girl or a boy!!u didn't got to see or touch ur child""y
r u doing this?!?!..i m happy jeh..i beg u to leave us alone in ur
small world""and what about my world?...there is no world for me if
there is no u...u r not mine then u r not abhay's""for god
sake!!!i m married women...i m one child mother plzz leave me
alone..."sorry pia no" i turn around..."fine but i will escape from
hear and i will tell ur secert and how much u put me in pain
me!!..then look what will abhay will do with u!!..just w8 and
watch...u started this game..i will finish this...and in the end ur
lost..."...trun...she was angry...no doubt she was so beauitful...i
smile"as u say miss lovely..i m ur adam.."i started to laugh then i
said"will if u done chatting i have to go to bestfirend house his
lovely pia is dead""u will pay"i went away...to see his beloved
abhay but before i could reach...on my way my cell started to ring
i pick it up and it was one of my men..he told where pia was locked
in small room..pia boke the window of the room and run away...other
r after her...i was mad...i u-turn..now i was dam scared if she
came front of abhay...my all work will be destoryed ..i reached
back and that moment men came back they couldn't find her...i
thought she would reach to abhay but from that day on 1 year has
past but no clue of u!!!

...POV ENDS...


JEH STOOD UP SMILING
Jeh(thinking):i will find u pia..u r mine and only mine..
...
DORBIRYAL'S HOUSE
ALINA CAME OUT FROM HER ROO AND WENT INTO THE KICHEN TO MAHDU

Alina:hey mom where is dad?
Madhu:he found a clue that prove pia is alife...(she started to
cry)
Alina:mom!
Madhu:i can't help it arnab loved u and pia more then anything
...more then me...he can't take pia's death...he is so disturbed...
Alina:dad always cared for us more then anything i know and this
time i m with dad...pia was my only sister we started to take steps
togther...i know i m her big sis but she married first beacuse she
was wise then me,i was sacred of love but looking at her my afraid
went away...now i m in realation with danish...any way dad has a
point pia could not die like this...i m having a feeling that she
a life and now she is with his abhay and his child!!!!
...
LOS ANGLES
ABHAY SLEEPING WITH ABHI BUT TEARS WERE FLOWING...HE WAS DREAMING
ABOUT HER ON THAT CLIFF ...is she his pia?...HE WAS THINKING AND
PHONE RING WHICH WOKE HIM UP..HE PICK UP THE PHONE

Abhay(sleepy voice):hello..

NO ANSWER

Abhay:is any one there?..hello..

NO Answer...ABHAY WAS STILL THEN SOFTLY

Abhay:pia it is u?...

CALL ENDED..ABHAY WAS SHOCKED...

Abhay(to himself):what's wrong with u pia is gone...it might be
worng number...

ON OTHER SIDE,IT WAS PIA..SHE COULDN'T SPEAK...SHE GOT HIS NUMBER
FROM HIS OFFICE BUT SHE WAS TO SCARED..WHEN EVER THE NAME OR HIS
FACE COMES IN HER MIND SHE STARTED TO FEEL SOMETHING INSIDE HER...

Pia(to herself): what's wrong pia?...y did u call him any way u
would be meeting him tomorrow then y did u called...(small
pause)..there was nothing to talk then ...y did i wanted to hear
his voice...it is like we met before...

...

TOMORROW...PIA AND RUIH ENTER IN RICHANDS BUILDING...THEY WERE
WAITING FOR ABHAY TO COME...BUT SOME WERE PIA WAS SCARED AND ON
OTHER HAND SHE COULDN'T WAIT TO SEE HIM...
...
ABHAY WAS DRIVING ...TALKING TO KABIR ON PHONE

Abhay:kabir i m on my way ..i dropped abhi to T'house ur girl
friend house ok?
Kabir:perfect...i hope she can take care of baby...
Abhay(laughing):ok ..i will talk u later..

ABHAY REACH TO HIS OFFICE AS HE NETER...THERE HE SAW HER SATNDING
LOOKING AT HIM..SHE WAS LOOKING BEAUITFUL...WITH PINK SHIRT AND
WHITE PANTS...ON OTHER HAND SHE COULDN'T MOVE HER EYES FROM
HIM...HE WAS LOOKING HANDSOME TO HERE...SHE FELT THAT SHE IS
SEENING HIM AFTER AGES...THEY BOTH FROZEN THEN THEY CAME BACK BY
KABIR...

Kabirs:guys!!!

KABIR INTRODUCED PIA TO ABHAY AND ABHAY TO PIA...THEY BOTH DIDN'T
TALK...ABHAY WAS TRYING TO IGNORE HER BUT AGAIN HOW MUCH HE TRIED
IT DIDN'T WORK...LATER THEY HAD MEETING PIA NAD ABHAY DIDN'T TALK
ABOUT ANYTHING EXCEPT ABOUT THEIR BUSINESS...LATER PIA LEFT WITH
RUHI..ABHAY WENT TO HIS CABIN KABIR FOLLOWED

Kabir:i m sorry..about..
Abhay(blocking him):that's ok...(he sat on his chair)
Kabir:i know u r having a hard time...
Abhay:leave this topic..plz...
Kabir:fine so...u r coming tonight right?
Abhay:where?
Kabir:wow!! yar ...u just had meeting and forgot...yar...after pia
fashion show in our hotel...we have a party...
Abhay:i m not interseted..
Kabir:abhay...stop being a little boy...in this party many clients
will arrive and u have to be there..got it?..u r coming...
Abhay:fine
...
INDIA
DORBRIYAL'S HOUSE
ARNAB COMES RUNING INSIDE

Aranb(shouting):ALINA!!!,,,MADHU

THEY COME RUNNING..

Madhu:aranb what's worong?!?!?
Arnab(smiling):madhu...madhu ur daughter...
Alina:dad...
Arnab(with a big smile):our daugther is alive...pia is alive!!!
Alina and madhu: what?!?!
Arnab :i can prove u when we reach to richands...
....
LOS ANGLES
RICHAND'S NEW OPENING OF 5 STAR HOTEL.."PERALS"
THE FASHION SHOW WENT SUPERB...PIA WAS HAPPY NOT BECAUSE OF HER
SHOW WENT GREAT BUTABHAY CAME TO SEE HER SHOW..THEY NEVER TALKED
PROPERLY...AFTER THE SHOW PARTY STARTED COUPLES WERE DANCING...
BUT WENT OUTSIDE ..INTO THE GRADEN HE WANT TO BE ALONE...HE WANTED
TO FEEL HER PIA..HIS LOVE HIS LIFE

A voice:all alone...

ABHAY TURNED AND SAW PIA STANDING NOT HIS PIA..BUT THAT PIA WHO
NEVER MET..HIM... DIDN'T KNOW EACH OTHER..SHE WAS SMILING CAME
BESIDE HIM...LOOKING TOWARDS STARS...

Pia:i apply the same method...when ever i want to be free i went
somewhere..where i could be all alone and with me only stars moon
and sky...
Abhay:hmmm
Pia(looking at him):i m sorry...
Abhay: what for?
Pia:beacuse of me u have a hard time...my face matchs ur wife...
Abhay:i m trying...
Pia: u can't be succeed..no one could not succeed in this
matter..no one is that stronge...no one..
Abhay:u know...i m never alone..when ever i close my eyes i see
her...
Pia:she is the luckiest girl..if u ask me...
Abhay:everything happens with a reason..right?
Pia:yes...

THEY BOTH WHERE LOOKING AT EACH OTHER...THEN PIA CLOSED HER EYES
AND ABHAY CAME CLOSER TO HER... MOVING TOWARDS HER HE CLOSED HIS
EYES...SOONER THEY FELT WARM BREATH OF EACH OTHER...THERE LIPS
WERE INCHES APART...WHEN A VOICE CAME AND BOTH JUMPED WITH JERK!!!

PERCAP:
ARANB PROVES PIA IS STILL ALIVE!!!
Edited by iqrahareem - 13 years ago

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