Book 2 FF:Till the End of Time(updt*June8*pg140) - Page 97

Originally posted by: priyabhay

u rock girl its amazing beautiful awesome u r hell of a writer plz accept my buddy rqst n pm me nxt tm o plz plz

Originally posted by: TeDylove

thats just amazing chapter..i ever read..u seen us all side of abhay..😛 i really really enjoy this..😳 hope mohini aryan ko abb zyada blackmail na kar paye..pls abb pain bear nahi hoga..

continue soon..😛

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Fantastic update tanzie!!!
u really showed us the various colours of abhay raichand, u really justified the chapter name.
I loved the seduction part most, it was hot and a bit scary too.
I felt sad for piya, her condition was really bad.
omg abhay pushed piya and she got hurted, this was one thing I couldn't ever imagine.
lovely, amazing, brilliant update.
I loved each and every part of it.
pls continue soon and thanks a ton for the pm.

Originally posted by: --peehu--

awesome tanzie...loved it...

abhay was really at his best...sometimes child like...innocent..then his old rude self...and then being the seducer...gosh!! loved it...

i feel bad for alina...peehu...and aryan...things are a bit messy...

mohini has evil plans..glad that all of it will be backfired as for now...continue soon...

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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wow!!wow!!wow!! 👏Wat an superbly smashing update tanzie!!!! 👏 Xcellent potray of emotions!!! 👏 ⭐️ thanks Indu 😳

poor abhay is completely devastated,confused but becz he is extremly intelligent,he did feel sumthng was wrng!and his thots r heading at the right direction..i love the way this plot is taking shape..if it had been the cvs they wud hv ruined it! Bt i lovd hw despite hs partial memory loss hs mind worked still and he tried to think logically and wantd to go away as evn in hs terrible conditn he was mre worried abt pia! And thts y we love and adore abhay so much!❤️ and tht essence was kept intact thru ur beautiful writing!awesum!⭐️ Thank u so much dear. she is a compllete confused soul and its not his intelligence which indicates him something is wrong but his heart as well. despite being a vampire he is a good heart and his heart will ultimate lead him to the right directions.
Abhay seducing pia nd leaving her nd letting her go...and then hs inner turmoil despite of nt remembering anythng...was immencely heartwrenching...tanzie this part was excellent! And only u can write in such a way!!
and u knw dear i am nt so emotional but wen the lost,vulnarable abhay entered i felt terrible!! Tht mohini..😡 glad u liked it. i have no intention to make it hot or something but rather dangerous. Abhay is kind, one in a million doesnt change the fact he is a vampire. the thirst of blood, seducing his prey is a part of who he actually is,
bt inspite of everythng pia took care of abhay sumtimes like a loving mother,sumtims as a wife n sumtim as a friend..keeping her pain to herslf! And This part touchd me the most and you wrote it so beautifuly tanzie..i cud feel her pain...wonderful..⭐️
wow! Mohini is singing leaving abhay n aryan to rot in hell..she is humming nw?? Hw dare she..😡
bt here was a mention abt her husband so does dat mean,he is going to enter the picture ?? 🤔 Pia loves Abhay beyond boundaries so there's no way she will leave him in such state when she knows its not Abhay's fault. Mohinis husband is even more dangerous then she is 😆 offcourse he has to come otherwise Mohini ko line pe kaun layega...😛 but still much time left for this.

oh..poor alina! She has lovd the wrng guy! Aryan is so nice and kind! He perfctly undrstud her pain and apologsd to her! And tht is why he is everyone's blue eyed boy! Yes he did a mistake bt he ws helples tht tym and i still admire him!😳 bt what wil happn of peehu? Will arhu nevr b able to reunite? or is there any kind of slight chance of aryan-alina happning? 😕 I donno.. i cant decide. even im confused you see. I will decide Alina's fate first then will Peehu comes but whatever happens I myself want Aryan to see happy first..that should be my priority,..
oh..wat abhay did to pia! She is badly injurd! Bt then abhay though unknwnly feels her pain too!! And again dis was an excillnt piece of writing!
Tanzie dats the reasn the moment u told us tht abhay wil show diffrnt colors i said tht it wil b interestng and dis updat shows clearly as to y i said so...the diffrnt emotions actions and their repercussions was just amazingly depicted and though i felt bad bt at the same time it enthralled me!! And tht is the beauty of ur writing!⭐️ 👏 See Pia is now a vampire's wife. she has till now seen only the good side n sometimes a pretty risky side of Abhay. till now she doesnt know what she has signed up for. Thirsty for blood, killing humans, seducing the prey and hurting shutting down the emotions are normal for a vampire. If Pia can accept the Angel abhay.. she needs to accept the evil Abhay too...only then their relationship will be perfect. thats why I wrote the entire chapter...

p.s. So mohini's magic hs loopholes too?!! Great! Dat means the old abhay wud b back soon! Yes he is already feeling pia's love nd wth the loophole once found, i hope ,thngs wil b bck to normal again!😃 every magic has loopholes dear... old Abhay will be back soon yes.. things will be normal but it will take time 😳

continue soon dear..and thanks for the pm..😊
take care and thanks again for dis amazing update..🤗
p.s previously i usd to quote d lines always bt wth so many stories to cment nw tht i am no mre able to do tht and i myself feel bad 4 dat! So, Sorry dear,and plz dnt mind! thanks a lot dear.. i always love reading your comments. its like im reading a analysis on my writing 😳

Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni

Superb update tanz Love the way you describe Abhay .Awww i hate mohini . Poor alina . she is so selfless person and aryan is in so much tension . but in this update Abhay shade got all appreciation!!!!!!! continue soon !!!!

Originally posted by: SheIsTheOne

Freaking awesome update...👏👏 Piya is shattered at Abhay's different personality disorders... thank you 😊

And Abhay..he himself is very confused at what is happening to him... But one thing is fixed...and that is his connection with Piya..😳 I mean whether he is old-self or rude,arrogant or seductive-hunter or child-like..that 'thing' with Piya never goes...😳 I guess it's their connection..😳 And Aryan...my heart goes out for him... he's in such a miserable condition... All the persons he loves are in trouble or sad...be it Peehu..Piya..Abhay or even Alina.Feeling very bad for him..😭 Whoever Abhay becomes his heart will always reach out for Pia. and Aryans misery are gonna end soon.

And Mohini...you know I'm not hating her 🤢 because she loves her sister..and according to her Ragini died during the transformaion of vampire and the main reason of it is Abhay... so..ya..she is just taking her revenge...but I'm hating her ways though..She is not even for once thinking about the girl Abhay got married to (Piya)...what would be that girl's condition seeing her husband like this just only after their marriage day.. I mean she is not at all thinking about that...what is Abhay's wife's fault..she is indirectly punishing her...and why only Piya?? Peehu...what is her fault if Ragini got killed and that she loves Aryan and their child is in their womb...if the thing would have lasted till blackmailing Aryan with Peehu as bait..it was understandable...but her plan to kill Peehu after her mission gets accomplished...that's very pathetic..What sister love is this if she's not being rational at all... that's stupid...Mohini is cleverly evil and stupid...🤓 Mohini doesnt think about anyone else. if she would have then why would she hurt Aryan, Abhay and even her own blood peehu. she doesnt care much except for her family legacy, pride, herself and her sister.

And Alina...she is heartbroken...feeling sad for her too...😔 BTW...did I say that that child-like Abhay is very cute and adorable...😳 and yeah...one more thing..Abhay pushed Piya off two flights of stairs..😲.how can he do that...as far as I remember..the Rude-Arrogant Abhay always insulted Piya and her dignity..but he never physically hurt her..that's very shocking actually...😲 but his heart is very sad at Abhay's this reckless and heartless act of hurting Piya so severely...I mean..whatever may have happened to Abhay...his heart will always remain that original Abhay who loves and respects Piya a lot...😳 Lets face it, Abhay is a vampire. he is supposed to be cruel, blood thirsty, inhuman which he is not. but all these traits are a part of who he is. and Pia has seen mostly his good part. she has to accept Abhay's bad part too in order to accept being a vampire's wife fully. but deep inside she knows whatever he does, he loves him insanely and cares for him which is the biggest truth.

and you know what...the songs which are Mohini's favorite happens to be my favorite too...😳 But I have a question..Mohini is almost 2000 or something years old...and Abhay was also with her something like 200 years ago..and from that time those songs were Mohini's favourite...so..if i'm not wrong...those songs were sung by Asha Bhonsle I think...😕 but Asha Bhonsle is not even 100 years..😆 so..it is kinda confusing..😕 Silly question I know...but kya kare?? 😆 Anyways...overall...a very nice update..👏.super awesome.👏..eagerly waiting for the next part...update as soon as you can...😳..not in a hurry...😊...but not too slow also..please..😆 and yeah...thanks for the PM...😃 I think you got me wrong...😆 when did I say Mohini is 2000 years old? 😲 i have mentioned it many times she is above 700 years old. read the chapter "line of past and present' where I mentioned about Mohini n Ragini it will be clear to you. and why it would be confusing? she has many other fav things too. infact she was a singer and thats why she is so fond of music. you will see her as a singer in flashback. and i dont think i have ever said its only Asha Bhonsle's song she like right 😆 and just because she is 700 years old she can have fav singers of many decades... see her choices can be open and wide 😊 ill update wihtin tomorrow for sure 😳