Book 2 FF:Till the End of Time(updt*June8*pg140) - Page 96

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi its nice update…. And I luv ur ff.. even appreciate ur book The beautifull Stranger… I am one of the silent reader….. but I luv ur last update of till the end of time and can't stop myself to comment…. Really lovely ff….please if u r comfortable please pm me…… great writter

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome. . . . .jst loving this hot n cold abhay. . . .poor piya. . . In this whole update abhay overshadowed all other characters. . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
I enjoyed reading Abhay's different shades
No matter what Abhiya can never forget each other and will always come up for each other
Precap is interesting as Abhay will be back to his Piya
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

post the next chapter i can hardly wait🤔

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello... Frndzzz

she (tanzie) vil update dis ff on THURSDAY/FRIDAY 😊 sooo chilll
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi I read ur story its awsomeee...plzzz update & if possible pm me...I read ur other books ...The strainger beauty...its awsomeee...plzz continue dear...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
simply outstanding upd tanzie 👏
i m lovin it , poor piya i really feel bad for her , so hard for her too see this changes in her husband and tat too right after marrige , poor she seeing abhay forcing himself on her and then attacking her , such a shocker i wonder how could she bear tat but still she is by abhay's side bravo to her , i just love amber loved the way she told abhay to get out 👏, and mohini welll she is just a perfect villian😡😎 and now my fav abhay😎 , i loved to see the diff colours of abhay , too awesome to describe colors of abhay were just amazing and the part were abhay seduces piya was hot😳 and a lil scary too and last scene well didnt expected tat from abhay😲 but its also not his mistake he is under spell
u r an amzing writer 👏
upd soon 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

wow tanzie. a fabulous and long update. loved the way you described the different shades of Abhay. But above all his heart could still feel Pia's pain and that is what will bring him back.


Loved that child-like Abhay sleeping in Pia's lap. 😳


Thanks Dishu. Above everything his heart will lead him back to Pia 😳
and glad u liked the lap scene... you must see it again in another of my writeups 😉

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

Update sadu raichand back 🥳and he was so rude but cute also and i know pia will get him back
this mohini aargh mad women she shld also die with her sis permanently she can live with her thats what mohini wants 🤣 as usual mindblowing update...btw any romance in nxt update 😛


Thanks Rashu, she wont die so soon 😆 phirse romance 😛 there might be...wait and watch 😉

Originally posted by: -Sonia-

OMG Tanzie !
awesome update...beautifully wriiten..loved it
these different shades of abhay are so much fun... The seducing part left me speechless.. Never thought abhay cud do this.. Lol
abhay seems to be too cute when he behaves like a child..& when he is sadu , he still cares for piya!
I hope , peehu & the baby are fine!
Feeling terrible for aryan, amber n piya! I hope , they succeed in bringing the real abhay raichand back!
Continue soon
thanx 4 d pm
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Thanks Sonia. That's why I wrote it. Pia seducing someone should be hotter than hell ☺️ you might not know about Peehu in a while. Abhay will be back himself and then do something no1 will imagine...


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

oh my god! this ch was truly as the name says COLORS OF ABHAY RAICHAND god mohini is sooo evil...i m getting vry impatient tanzie to knw abt that ph person...who is he???is he frm SC...nah! wat a member of SC wil get killing its own kind...nw only 2 ppl r left jeh nd mohini 1 is already creating probs nd the other might be on the ph...ah i m getting mad plz continue soon...


Glad the update lived upto the name. You will know in the next update Juhi.. 😆

Originally posted by: flora212

WOW TANZIE GREAT AND AWSOME UPDATE.. LOVED ABHAYS SHADES.. THE UPDATE WAS HOT AS WELL AS DANGEROUS. .NOW HOW ABHAY WILL COME BACK TO PIA.. SUCH A MYSTRY THAT WHO IS THE MAN TALKING TO MOHINI.. I THINK ITS JEY!!

UR STORY IS GETTING MYSTRY DAY BY DAY...
UPDATE SOON..😆


Glad u liked it. dont worry Abhay will be back to Pia and u will see how. might be right... and i love your kitty emos.
will update tonight or if not then tomorrow...

Originally posted by: abhiya4evr

Awsome fantastic and mind blowinnng update!!!! 😍 With super HAWTTT abhiya ☺️ ☺️
update soon and thanks for pm 😃


Thanks a lot. I always wanted to see how it would be to Abhay seducing Pia... so likh diya 😆

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Tanzie I love the name of the chapter!
Poor Pia has to bear Abhay blowing hot and blowing cold...
I am waiting to see what Mohini had done in the next chapter...

Ps that Abhiya bit was hotter than the SR... Just saying ;)


Thanks darling... you will see because the next chapter will start with a flashback when abhay meet Mohini for the first time. you will get a glimpse of her husband as well yet in another muscial event in Europe and you will know she was once a singer... which explains why she is so fond of music 😆

is it? 😲 I did n;t realize that 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Tanzie tat was a super duper update 👏 Loved Abhay Raichand's varying shades 😃 Love the way you breathe life into your characters Tanzie 😳 thanks a lot dear 😊

Pia - My heart was torn on seeing her in this state 😭 She lost everything just when she had found her life's greatest happiness Imagine having her own husband treating her like she's nothing short of dirt? 😭 I nearly cried for her. A man could be your husband but he has no right to force himself on you if you don't want that 😡 Poor her, despite all her fears and the shabby treatment meted out to her she still stood by her husband only to be hurt again. I hope Amber will heal Pia Sure no husband has the right to do so only if he remembers who's he lusting for Abhay cud only get attracted to her smell,m her blood for who he is.right know Abhay is behaving like a newborn because he is reliving his life from the beginning.
Amber - I love this woman 😳 I have always loved strong minded woman n she's the perfect iconic choice for woman power. Loved the way she admonished Aryan n then Abhay in the end for all this mess. This girl sure has guts 😃 I applaud her for that 👏 Me too. I love strong headed woman.
Aryan - Poor guy 😭 My heart goes out to him. He is probably the most selfless person here but he's in this mess thanks to Peehu 😡 I will always hate that woman for what she did to Aryan. I agree she was a desperate mother who wanted to save her child but how could she forget that the child was not just hers but Aryan's also? 🤢 Tats the main reason I hate her. Had she not come back Aryan could probably have moved on with Alina n she was perfect for him 😭 Yes, Aryan is in a great mess and he is trying his best to overcome it. Peehu missing makes his situation worse but for now his main focus will be his family because abhay will go missing again. and Alian will help him.
Alina - I felt so bad for this girl. Everytime she faced rejection be it from her family or the love of her life 😭 Aryan could've set things right for her. It will surely hurt to see your love hurting over someone else and I wouldn have blamed if she refused to help Aryan right away but still she let the humanity in her win over her rage n feeling of betrayal 😭 Hats off to her 👏 Please bring someone nice for her. I dont want her pining after a guy who will never love her back. I wanted to show her selfish side too like a human could think of him/herself upon anyone else. Will try to..lets se.e..
Mohini - This woman is intriguing 😕 She is at her evil best but something tells me she's not evil at heart. She probably wont run after an innocent. She only wants to avenge her sister. Would really love to study a person like her with such varying drastic aspects. Would be a treat for any psychiatrist. 😃 Now coming to Mohini's husband, seems like he's a big mystery. Waiting to know more abt him. Is Mohini scared of him by any chance? 😉 you got it right. Intriguing is the word. she is powerful, classy, lethal and dangerous but she loves music, dresses and lavish houses 😆 I love writing about her. next update will start with a flashback where you will see Mohini was a singer which will explain why she loves music so much. and Mohinis husband is even more interesting thn her and offcourse she is afraid of him 😉
Now coming to the star of the update ⭐️
Abhay Raichand - What a drastic change! One moment he's all innocent n vulnerable like a child, the other he's a raging bull, then next he turns all seductive - all in one go! Bravo 👏 It was a pleasure to write about him, its always is. and writing diff shades about the same character is so much fun 😳
But well the real star here is u Tanzie ⭐️⭐️⭐️ for coming up with such a stellar update thanks a ton dear...glad u liked it 🤗

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Posted by: Susmitasumi96

5 months ago

Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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