Book 2 FF:Till the End of Time(updt*June8*pg140)

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#971

Originally posted by: tanvipareek
Hi its nice update'. And I luv ur ff.. even appreciate ur book The beautifull Stranger' I am one of the silent reader'.. but I luv ur last update of till the end of time and can't stop myself to comment'. Really lovely ff'.please if u r comfortable please pm me'' great writter

Thanks tanvi. I didn't know you read Beautiful Stranger 😳 if you dont want to comment atleast you should hit the like button then i will know atleast who are my readers 😆 Sure, i will Pm you 😊

Originally posted by: TISA07
awesome. . . . .jst loving this hot n cold abhay. . . .poor piya. . . In this whole update abhay overshadowed all other characters. . .

Thanks Tisa. he surely did. This update was all about him.

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta
awesome update
loved it
I enjoyed reading Abhay's different shades
No matter what Abhiya can never forget each other and will always come up for each other
Precap is interesting as Abhay will be back to his Piya
cont soon
thanks for the pm

Thanks a lot Pari. Offcourse, whatever happens to Abhay. he will never ever forget Pia. Abhay will be back to Pia yes...

Originally posted by: EVIIL
post the next chapter i can hardly wait🤔

Will update tomorrow.. pakka 😃

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@arunsunita_gm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#972

who is this third angel

and abhay thik kab hoga dear

i am feeling bad for pia plsss jaldi se abhay ko thik karo aur abhiya ko milao

gn tc ks hsd😊

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#973

Originally posted by: koli97
Hi I read ur story its awsomeee...plzzz update & if possible pm me...I read ur other books ...The strainger beauty...its awsomeee...plzz continue dear...😊

Thanks a lot. I have added you so you will get the PMs from next update. 😳

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.
awesumm tanz!!the part abt abhay was so sad..bt i hope his heart leads him back to where he belongs to piya..and will ragini really cme back??is she as evil as her sister??poor aryan feel so bad for him...alina wnt betray hm in the name of helping will she??

Thanks Tora. he will be back to Pia. dont worry. I donno about Ragini.. so dont ask 😆 Aryans misery will end soon. No no..Alina wont betray but the thought of betraying will come to her mind many times...

Originally posted by: Mohit-deewani
simply outstanding upd tanzie 👏
i m lovin it , poor piya i really feel bad for her , so hard for her too see this changes in her husband and tat too right after marrige , poor she seeing abhay forcing himself on her and then attacking her , such a shocker i wonder how could she bear tat but still she is by abhay's side bravo to her , i just love amber loved the way she told abhay to get out 👏, and mohini welll she is just a perfect villian😡😎 and now my fav abhay😎 , i loved to see the diff colours of abhay , too awesome to describe colors of abhay were just amazing and the part were abhay seduces piya was hot😳 and a lil scary too and last scene well didnt expected tat from abhay😲 but its also not his mistake he is under spell
u r an amzing writer 👏
upd soon 😃

Thank you so much Roshni.

Pia has to accept fully her husband is a vampire and he could literally do anything. Amber is the headstrong woman. Glad u liked the many shades of Abhay. I loved writing it too. thanks so much for the compliment dear 🤗

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek
amazing update tanzie...abhay was all amazing😍Poor pia...continue soon n thnx 4 d pm

Thanks a lot Prima

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#974

Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm
who is this third angel
and abhay thik kab hoga dear
i am feeling bad for pia plsss jaldi se abhay ko thik karo aur abhiya ko milao
gn tc ks hsd😊

Its not third ANGEL but ANGLE 😆 I meant another side of the story which is till now hidden... Abhay thik hone me time hai but dont worry you are gonna like it till then 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#975

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Resh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#976

WOW tanzie awesome update.Oh Abhay hurt Pia thn left & he dreamt of hsi past.His 1st meeting wid mohini,But whts the mystery of mohini & her hubby?Eaither its abt pain or pure love😳.OH I feel bad 4 Abhiya both r lost somewht.I m sure after the escape Pia will fix Abhay😛.Oh I love tht Pia still pulls Abhay.The way Abhay was healing Pia was so cute.Plz contt... & congo 4 3erd book

LOVE U🤗

YAY I m 1st😆😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#977

wow wow ..I got 2nd place! Hehe

superb update, tanzie!

I knew that idiot jeh has to do something with all this plan! Arrgghh.. Feel like killing him with my bare hands..

Poor aryan , piya & amby.. Every1 is loosing their minds!
aryan giving a "I DONT GIVE A DAMN ATTITUDE" to mohini was awesome!

Aww.. Loved abhiya's part.. Abhay is so confused but still he healed piya..
& hats off to piya for accepting the dangerous abhay..

I just loved the last part where piya takes abhay with herself & doesnt care about the world.. I hope, she succeeds in bringing abhay back !

Eagerly waiting for mohini's reaction when the clocks break before its completion.. Its going to be so much fun!

Continue soon
thanx for the pm
tc

Edited by -Sonia- - 13 years ago

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#978

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awesuum tanzie!!! Brilliant!!!!👏 👏
with eachupdate i am finding it hard to praise u,as i am almost short of words now !!!

hm..so abhay was dreaming his past while sleeping!!!! Bt he cudnt remembr pia yet he felt an undeniable pull! And he reachd his mansion n healed her!! Here abhay's confusion,vulnarable state, dissilusinment, uncertainty each n every emotin ws so neatly n well weavd into hs character tht its inexplicable to explain the beauty of dis wonderful piece of writing!!!⭐️

the healing scene was again wonderful with a terrified ,courageous pia whoz devotn n love for hs vampire husband was beynd bounderies, and an innocent yet tired,devastated bt soft heartd vampire unaware of hs present life n hs own feelings!!!!

Thts it !!! So b4 the 3rd clock stops if sum1 cn mak hm remembr,then the spell wil b broken!!! Thts the loophole nd thts what pia is going to do!!!😉 Awesuum!!! 😃 nw no one cn stop abhay frm cuming bck to hs usual self!!!

hm..the way mohini talkd wth the boy it felt fr a secnd tht she ws sum1else who is nt so bad!! She ws so diffrnt! So polite!! Bt then i knw she will b bck in her true avatar n no tym!!!

Pia fought n came bck to manor!! Bt poor aryan is frustratd as well! He even shoutd at mohini!!! Pia cnt b blamed either,in her cnditn anybody cud hv flipped!!!
Again its proven y pia n nly pia cn love abhay.and y only its pia,who deservs hm!! While she ws wounded she didnt allow amber to heal her,then she lied abhay wasnt in her room,n then aftr cuming to manor she startd readng buks n vampires searchng fr a clue to save n find hs abhay nd then wen he cums,he sets off wth hm to fix thngs by herself!!!! This pia is mindblowing!! Courage,bravery.unbounding love,patience,determinatin nd desparatin-all of these emotions we saw in this pia!!!! And its nly bcoz of ur incredible writing that made it possible!!! 👍🏼
nw pia is desparate to save her abhay nd am sure she will !!! 😊 And entry of mohini's husband is near i guess!! Bt wonder wats jay's next plan is..!!!
And wat is wth the vampire council suddenly!!! 🤔

waiting for the next ...thanx for the pm... 😳And Tak cre..😊

Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago

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Romita

@Rmuk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#979

Amazing update tanzie!!!!
Brilliant work.
u just potrayed abhay's and piya' pain amazingly.
Do I even need to tell u how amazing it was.
The way abhay felt when he realised he had hurted piya was amazingly written.
So jay is with mohini, arghhh.
I hope piya suceeds in her job and abhay becomes normal soon.
Mohini's past seems interesting
plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm.

Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago